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« Reply #105 on: 06. July 2023, 13:22:56 PM »
Chapter 69 - Jenny's Super Fans?


Carol, Dianne and Linda were staying at the house for a couple of days, working on on some music, while Jenny was staying at her own place (but had spent the last 2 days with them). They were sitting together, Linda on the PC, updating one of their new songs, when Paige walked in, with a tray of coffees for them, and some nice cakes.

"Coffee time!" said Paige, putting the tray down. "I brought mine along too, hope you don't mind if I join you?"

"Of course not!" replied Carol. "So, what you been up to?"

"Oh, I was talking to one of the A&R guys at Big Dog, I'd sent him a few of your 'demos' to see what he though, and in terms of a new single, he says you should concentrate on two specific songs: 'High Flyer', and 'Braces Buddies'.

"He liked 'Braces Buddies'?

"In principle, yes: he felt the topic was a 'bit different', which could help it do well, although he did suggest trying to make it a bit less 'sweet', and a bit more like your other stuff!"

Carol smiled. "Hmm, sounds like we have been given a challenge, doesn't it! Which reminds me, we need to decide who we're going to get to produce all this new stuff."

"Well, I know who I'd like to do it, but she's in Korea!" said Linda. "I think working with Yu-Eye would be good for us."

"Want me to contact her? At least ask if she's interested and available?" suggested Paige.

"Maybe not yet, I think we all need to sit down and talk more about who we want. Mind you, Linda, maybe you want to see if she's heard anything about that possible animé stuff she mentioned..." commented Carol. They all sat chatting for a bit. "Hey, Paige, what happened to the others in your group, you know, Jenny's Super Fans? Not heard much about them recently."

In one of the earlier stories, we discovered that 'Jenny's Super Fans' were all last year students at South London College (so aged 17 to 18), and at the penultimate concert at Wembley, they had worked with the band, streaming the concert, while several others from the college had danced, played and in one case, sung, with the band. Of course, they had all now left college, which is why Paige had ended up working with the band. But Carol had a very good point: what WERE they all up to now?

"Well, Kali was approached by a couple of people after she sang with you at Wembley, but she's decided to go to university as planned, and work a bit more on her music in her spare time before deciding what to do. Ravi is doing computing at uni. I think Suzi has a job somewhere nearby, I'm sure Jenny mentioned she'd seen her recently at church. Not 100% sure about Luke and Amber though, I'm pretty sure they went off to uni too."

"Didn't you fancy going to uni?" asked Linda.

"I did, but changed my mind. I'm learning far more working with you guys, plus I've been talking with Brian, and he's been suggesting I should do some relevant 'business' courses."

"You know, I reckon you need to get in touch with them all, I kinda miss everything you all used to do for us. Try and get a date into everyone's diary, and we can do something together..."

"Ok, I can do that - I ought to be keeping in touch with them more myself. What you thinking we can all do?"

"No idea. Ask THEM what THEY want to do? And if it's as lame as 'let's go out for dinner', then we'll want to do something AFTER dinner too!"

"Ok..."

"So, a 'rockier', 'more upbeat' version of 'Braces Buddies', eh? Something tells me we just found something to do for the rest of the afternoon!"



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« Reply #106 on: 08. July 2023, 19:38:10 PM »
And yes, there IS braces in this chapter, just the once!

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Chapter 70 - An interesting call from Canada


Six of them were sat around the table having dinner: Paige had gone home for the day, leaving Carol, Linda and Dianne, plus Callum, Brian and Lisa.

"I had a very interesting call just now," said Brian as he joined them. "Manager of a Canadian band called 'Northern Girls' - ever heard of them?".

"Nope..." replied Dianne.

"Four girl rock band?" said Linda after a moment's thought.

"Yes, that's the one."

"So what did he want then?" asked Carol

"Well, they've done a few tours of Canada, and the US. They just came back from a few dates in South America and Australia, and were looking to come to Europe next year."

"And he called you because?"

"They were wondering if we'd like to do some sort of joint tour with them. They had heard we've already done a tour in Europe, so we would 'know the ropes', so to speak. I was starting to put feelers out for a tour for you guys anyway, so it's come at a good time."

"So, what? We're their support band? Or are they OUR support band?"

"No idea, not got that far yet, it was more asking if we have any sort of interest. I said I'd speak to you all. Look, he gave me the number for their lead singer, Taylor I think she's called... anyway, he suggested maybe you should WhatsApp her, just have a chat, see what you all think. You guys seem work well with other bands - I'm thinking of Jenny with Darkest Knights, then of course all of you with Jelly Fish. Yes, I know that was different, but you turned something that could have been quite 'normal' into something a lot bigger, did us all a lot of good."

"Canada... any idea which side? Just thinking about what time it is there."

"No, but I would think it would be ok if you called after dinner."

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After dinner, the three girls went and looked up Northern Girls online. A four-piece girl rock band, based somewhere near Toronto. Very popular in Canada and the US, but for whatever reason, they weren't especially well known in the UK - most likely because they had never toured the UK! They listened to a bit of their music: it had certain similarities to their's, but was definitely much 'rockier'.

"I do like their music!" said Linda. It's starting to become clear that Linda's music tastes are rather 'rockier', and rather more 'metal' than the other girls.

"Yeah, I can see why they got in touch. Shame Jenny's not available tonight..."

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"Hi, this is Carol from CJDL, in England. Is it ok to do a video call?" typed Carol into WhatsApp a little later. Less than a minute later, she received a video call request, which she answered.

"Hey, is that Carol? I'm Taylor...". As you would expect for the 'front lady' of a girl band, Taylor was reasonably attractive. Long dark hair, pleasant makeup. A gold ring through the side of her nose. And a very nice smile on her face. She had a very soft accent, which many would have wrongly described as 'American', but was, of course, Canadian!

"Hi there, Taylor, nice to meet you, and thanks for calling. Give me a moment, I'm going to go and squeeze onto the settee with Linda and Dianne."

"Hi Taylor, I'm Dianne..." she said, waving.

"Hi there, I'm Linda..."

"Our fourth member, Jenny, isn't here right now.... so your manager called our manager....."

"Yeah, that's right. We finished a tour of South America and Australia a couple of weeks ago, and we decided maybe we were ready to come over and 'do Europe' next year... but that's not so easy for a Canadian band. We realised that maybe we needed to team up with a more 'local band', so we started looking for British bands that were anything at all like us. And we found you guys, and we all liked what we saw. I'm assuming you looked us up online too?"

"Of course, first thing we did!" said Carol.

"And? What do you think? First thoughts I mean..."

"Yeah, I think we all liked your style. It's a bit different from us, but I could feel a certain... hmm... what's the word? Ummm... Synergy?"

"Synergy? SYNERGY? Carol, where DO you get these words from?" said Linda, jokingly. "Sounds like an advert for car oil or something!!"

"Well, YOU come up with a better word then!" said Carol.

"Ok, go with 'synergy' for the moment then....".

At the other end of the link, Taylor had a huge smile on her face. "You guys are as bad as us!" she said. As Taylor had smiled, Carol couldn't help but notice the braces on her teeth, although she decided that no was NOT the time or place to say anything about them. "So, you're not rejecting the idea of us touring together out of hand then?"

Carol liked the words Taylor had just used: she might have said 'touring with us', but she actually said 'touring together'.

"No, not at all, although we've not had a chance to speak with Jenny yet."

"Ok, well please do talk to her. In any case, we all decided that if you showed ANY sort of interest in doing something, then we needed to come over and meet you all, face-to-face, spend time with you, and see if we can make something work. Look, on the South American - Australian tour, we realised both how much out of our depth we felt, and how 'isolated' we were, and it showed in our performances. You guys LIVE in Europe, you've toured Europe, so touring with someone like you guys should make thigs a lot better for us."

"Taylor... I like the way you are phrasing things... 'touring with' and so on, but how do you see it working in practice?"

"No idea. Maybe we swap being support and main act each day? Maybe we do several smaller sets? Maybe we even get to play together? I guess that's part the reason we'd like to come and meet you guys, and bounce some ideas around..."

They chatted for another 10 to 15 minutes, just generally talking about touring stuff: they all seemed to get on pretty well.

"Look," said Taylor, "go and chat with Jenny. In the meantime, I'll try and get all of us together this sort of time tomorrow, and we can have another WhatsApp. I'll also get our manager to organise somewhere for us to stay in London: if you have any suggestions, that would be great. And any chance you could sort out a rehearsal room, so we could all have a play together?"

"Oh, the rehearsal room is easy, we have one here." said Carol. "So, Taylor, look forward to meeting the rest of the girls tomorrow!"




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« Reply #107 on: 10. July 2023, 16:55:32 PM »
Chapter 71 - Northern girls


Whilst our girls had thought about going to meet the Northern Girls at Heathrow airport, their arrival time of 6:35am wasn't really that appealing. Ok, yeah, add an hour or so to get through immigration and customs, but it's still quite early, especially given the time they would need to leave to get there in time! Instead, a suitable mini-coach had been organised for them, bringing them all to the CJDL house. They would be staying in an Airbnb about 15 minutes away, but of course, that wouldn't be available till later in the day.

They had 'travelled light' for this relatively short trip, by which I mean one mega-sized suitcase each! But no instruments - they would use the (many) spare instruments already in the music room, including the old acoustic drum kit.

A couple of The Northern Girls took up the offer of being able to have a shower, after which they all sat in the lounge, getting to know each other. I guess I should introduce the 4 visitors: Taylor Martin (lead guitar, vocals, frontman), Kate Enders (bass, vocals), Meg Griffin (rhythm guitar) and Erin Brock (drums). Erin and Meg clearly 'had something going', from the way they behaved towards each other, and how closely they sat together.

Of the four, Taylor was the 'prettiest': she was quite slim, had long, slightly wavy, almost black hair down to her chest. A small ring through the side of her nose, and 2 studs in each ear. Kate was noticeably 'larger' by around 40 or 50 pounds, and wore glasses, and also had the statutory 'rock musician long hair', although it was a dark brown. Meg and Erin both looked quite 'plain' by comparison to Taylor. Erin's hair was naturally dark, (you could see her roots) but had been coloured to a 'dirty blonde, whilst Meg's hair was a light-to-mid-brown. Not that looks really mattered that much, they were a ROCK band! All were dressed in what you might call 'normal rock-band attire': jeans and t-shirts.

"Ok," said Carol. "I can't let it go any longer! There's a big elephant in the room we need to get rid of! You ALL have braces! Come on, spit it out! There's clearly SOMETHING going on here!"

Taylor smiled, showing off her lovely metalwork. "I must admit, I WAS wondering how long before someone mentioned it. And I don't mean that in a nasty way, Carol, I see you have braces yourself..."

"And so does Jenny of course! So, I'm getting the feeling there's a story here...." replied Carol.

"Oh, most definitely! So, about... hmmm... maybe 4 or 5 months ago, Meg was looking at getting braces, but was feeling a bit apprehensive about the whole thing. It took us about three weeks to find out what was going on with her, she'd been acting up all that time, and Erin wasn't saying anything either. I mean, I had braces when I was younger, and it hadn't been a big deal for me" explained Taylor.

"Yeah, it's a lot easier as a kid to have braces, but not only am I an adult, I'm a bit more 'visible' than most adults are..." said Meg.

"Yeah, the same old arguments. At some point, she made a comment like 'well, if it's so easy, why don't YOU get braces then?'. I think we dismissed it initially, but I was chatting with Kate, and she suggested we could ALL get braces, to support Meg. And that's what we all did!"

Carol laughed. "So you three guys just have fake braces then?"

"Well, they're real braces, given to us by Meg's ortho. And whilst Kate and I don't really need them, it turned out that Erin actually DID need a bit of treatment."

"Yeah, whilst Taylor got her teeth fixed as a teen," explained Erin, "I never had them before. I mean, my teeth weren't THAT bad..."

"What about you then, Kate?" asked Jenny. "You ever have braces before?"

"Oh, yes, very much so! When I was younger and my adult teeth started to come through, they were pointing everywhere except where they should have been. I went through about 3 years of 'torture'... removable braces, the dreaded headgear, elastics, all sorts of bit of plastic and metal got put into my mouth. By comparison, these things are a walk in the park!".

"I see you all decided to go for the metal look, rather than ceramic..." said Jenny, "any particular reason why?"

"Probably the same sort of reasons as you: there was no way I was ever going to be able to hide them, so why not flaunt them?" replied Meg. Jenny's ears were telling her that Meg had a bit more than just simple metal braces in her mouth.

"Something tells me that you have something extra in your mouth... so I'm going to guess at an expander? I used to have one of those, headgear too for a while."

Meg smiled. "You know your braces, don't you! Yeah, it's an expander, gave me a terrible lisp to start with! But no headgear, thank goodness!". Most people probably wouldn't notice Meg's speech and the very slight lisp that she now had, assuming that was just the way she spoke, but as a result of Ben's influence, Jenny was much more aware of lisps than most.

As Jenny continued to listen to Meg, and looked at the four girls, she realised that Ben was going to have a field day: a braces lover confronted by a total of SIX girls in braces...

"So, what about you then, Carol, I'm assuming you must have had braces recently?" asked Erin.

"Actually no: I had braces as a teen, then retainers. But a couple of months ago I spotted that one of my teeth had moved a tiny bit... so I went off to see Jenny's ortho, and he did me these retainers: the top one has an extra spring which has brought that tooth back to where it should be."

"Well, if I couldn't actually see them, I'd not realise you were wearing them, you don't have a lisp."

"I did when I first got them, but I guess all the talking and singing made me get used to them quite quickly."

"What about you, Jenny, bet you had a lisp when you had your expander?" asked Taylor.

"Yeah, I did when I spoke, but strangely not when I sang!"

"Strange... but I bet you didn't complain! And you said you had headgear, I bet you hid THAT away from the public!" suggested Meg.

"You kidding?" said Dianne. "This *IS* Jenny you're talking about here. What was it, second day you had it, and you were posting pics of it online? And she's performed with it live..."

"No way! You MUST have some pics worth seeing...."

"Hang on a minute..." said Callum, going off, and returning with his laptop a couple of minutes later. He turned on the TV, and connected to it over the Wi-Fi. "So, this was Jenny's FIRST public appearance...." and he played the video of her with Three Play. "And then, a bit later, she did pretty much the same thing with Darkest Knights...". The four visitors watch, amazed.

"No way!!" said Meg, rather astounded. "You've played with Darkest Knights? And wearing HEADGEAR???". Meg's respect for Jenny had just massively shot up, more for playing with Darkest Knights, than for the headgear wearing!

"Yeah, it was Ben's birthday present, he's a big fan."


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« Reply #108 on: 11. July 2023, 15:11:18 PM »
Chapter 72 - Let's make music together


The 4 Canadian girls had managed some sleep on the flight (THAT is why you fly business class!), so whilst they were all still a little tired, they were up for having a music session together. Both bands had learned and rehearsed a few of the other band's songs, and the end result was quite acceptable, especially when you consider that the eight of them had never actually played before.

"Well!" said Carol, "Sounds to me that we have one option for the tour: we can play each other's music, either individually, or all of us together".

"Hey, Paige, how did it sound to you, all eight of us playing together?" asked Linda.

"Surprisingly good actually. Quite a 'wall of sound'!"

Jenny was standing at her piano, eyes closed. "You ok there, Jenny?" asked Carol.

"Yeah, my mind has got a lot of music in it, swirling around.... let's take a break, it might sort itself out!"

"She ok?" Taylor asked Carol.

"Oh, yeah, that's typical of when Jenny gets inspiration. I don't know about you, but my mind thinks in words, so when I'm writing, I get words, and word-sounds in my head. For Jenny, it's music and chords and stuff: she writes most of our music, Dianne and me, we do the lyrics. Although, having said that, Linda is starting to come up with some interesting music and lyrical ideas."

"So, what you guys working on at the moment?" asked Meg.

"So, Paige let the record company have some demos we did, and they want us to work on two tracks, 'High Flyer', and 'Braces Buddies'".

"'Braces Buddies'? I'm intrigued."

"You remember we were talking about our Korean trip? One of the girls in the group, Yun Hee, got braces while we were there, then Jenny lost a bracket... and we persuaded them both to have multi-coloured ligs... and it came out of that. It's one of the songs that Linda's been driving." She turned to the others: "Hey guys, Meg's interested in hearing Braces Buddies..."

"Which version?" asked Linda.

"I guess we could play both.."

Carol and Linda picked up acoustic guitars, and started to play the original acoustic version, with all four girls singing along. "So, the record company likes it, if only because of it's novelty, but suggested we needed to go a bit rockier... so we're thinking a bit like this....". Dianne went to the drums, Linda and Carol picked up their guitars, and Jenny went to the Keyboard. As with many of their songs, one of the instruments plays an introductory bar to start the song: in this case it was Linda, on the bass.

"Mind if I make a couple of comments?" asked Taylor, when they had finished

"Sure, go on." said Jenny. "But it is very much a 'work in progress'..."

Taylor took Carol's guitar, and used it to help make a two or three very constructive comments: the girls adjusted the song accordingly, making the song work a lot better.

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The 'Northern Girls' stayed in London for most of a week, although several days were spent being tourists. "Seems silly to come all this way, and not take advantage of it!" Taylor had explained. But they had managed to have two more rehearsal sessions together, plus have dinner together on several evenings.

It was their last evening in London, their flight back home was noon the following day, so Lisa had organised an external caterer to come in and give them dinner at 'home', but more importantly, it gave them all a chance to talk confidentially.

"Ok, I'm going to ask each of you eight girls a simple question: do you want to do a European tour together?". Brian got eight 'yes' replies. "Sounds like Andre and I have some work to do then! Anyone have any preferences where they want to play? Or anywhere to avoid? and where do we start? And end?"

"We've never played the O2, so I'd like to start with a couple of nights there. Then how about we end the tour back in London, but up at Wembley Arena?" suggested Jenny.

"Maybe we should do Croydon while we're at it?" said Carol, half-joking. "But yeah, the O2 would be good!"



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« Reply #109 on: 12. July 2023, 22:08:33 PM »
Chapter 73 - wanna play a gig tonight?


It's about a month later, on a Friday morning. Carol's phone rang, waking her up: it was Jenny.

"Hey, Jenny, it's far too early!" said Carol, yawning.

"Come on, it's not far off 11 o'clock! And it's a lovely day. So, I have a VERY serious question for you: how you fancy playing a gig tonight?"

"A gig? Tonight? Where? And why?"

"The where is the NEC up in Birmingham. And the why is that Darkest Night's support band have 2 members who seem to be ill, possibly covid, and  they were wondering if we'd like to step in and be their support band: initially tonight, and maybe for another couple of nights? I think it would be really good, give us a chance to try out some of the new stuff we've been rehearsing."

"The idea DOES appeal in a perverse way: it's been a long time since we were a support band! But for Darkest Knights, that would be pretty awesome! You know the guys quite well, don't you?"

"Yeah, I played a couple of songs with them for Ben's birthday, they are a great bunch of guys!"

"What do Dianne and Linda think?"

"Don't know yet, dad is calling them. So what do you think? We just need to get there with our instruments, we can use the support band's kit, Dad and Callum can organise everything..."

Carol smiled to herself. On the negative side, whilst they had been practising a load of new stuff that was quite 'rocky', they hadn't worked out any sort of stage set yet, and there would be no proper visuals. But on the positive side, simply playing live at the NEC again would be great, and playing alongside Darkest Knights, that would be such fun!

"You said the NEC? You not going to have another meltdown, are you?" Carol asked Jenny jokingly: the last time they had been there was the time Jenny was struggling with their tour, and Ben had come up from London early to be with her. "But yeah, I'm up for it, if everyone else is!"

"I think I'll cope for a couple of evenings! What about you though, you gonna be ok without Tom? Hang on, what's that, dad?". Jenny was clearly talking to her dad in the background. "Ok, dad says Dianne is up for it, he's about to call Linda. Looks like we're going to be playing the NEC tonight... so go get yourself ready, grab your guitars, and get over here!"

'Here', of course, was Jenny's parent's place. Apart from the one-off short gig in Seoul, they'd not played live for several months, and they had a load of new stuff they could try out. Yes, Carol really liked the idea. And yes, it was very short notice, but what the heck, it was exciting!

Before she even had a coffee, Carol got into the shower, washed, then removed her clear plastic retainers, putting them onto the small shelf in the shower: her mouth tasted pretty disgusting from wearing her retainers overnight. She took a mouthful of water from the shower, swished it around, then spat it out: yes, that was a bit better. She grabbed her electric toothbrush, added toothpaste, and brushed her teeth. Then she picked up her retainers, and gave them a quick clean with the toothbrush too.

After finally rinsing her mouth and the retainers with water from the shower, she put her retainers back in, running her tongue over the clean smooth plastic. She was just thinking how her mouth now accepted the retainers as 'normal'. They no longer gave her a lisp, and so many times she had started to eat, before remembering to take them out.

Carol turned the water off, opened the shower cubicle door, and grabbed her large fluffy towel. Yes, that was one of life's essentials, a large and fluffy towel: she really hated it when they were at a nice hotel, but the towels were either rather thin, or not very big. I mean why?

Whilst still with the towel wrapped around her, she removed her shower cap, then went in to her kitchen, put a cup under the spout of her coffee machine, put in a pod, and pressed the 'go' button. Next she grabbed a dish, put some 'Honey Nut Cornflakes' in it, added some milk, and found a spoon. By the time she had eaten the cereals, her coffee was ready!

Next it was into her bedroom, where she finished drying herself, then dressed: today it was simply jeans and a t-shirt. Then she very quickly put on minimal make-up: she could put a bit more on once they were in the coach.

She had a couple of suitcases, one huge one, which she had used when they went to Korea, and a smaller one, more suitable for a shorter trip, which is the one she used today. She packed up a few days of clothes, which of course meant both day-time clothes, and something more suitable for going on stage (although, for THIS gig, they were not wearing dresses on stage, just jeans and t-shirts).

She closed the suitcase, finished her coffee, then put her case, along with her guitars and handbag, into her car. After checking the flat was secure, she double-locked the front door, and started driving. She assumed that Brian and Callum would have organised a coach to take them all, along with their kit, up to Birmingham. On the way to Jenny's parent's place, she called Tom.

"Hi Tom!" said Carol imagining his sexy face.. with his sexy smile... yeah, ok, with his sexy braces!

"Oh, hi Carol...."

"Umm, looks like I'm gonna be away for a couple of days."

"Oh, what's happening?"

"We've been asked to play tonight..."

"'We' as in CJDL?"

"Yeah, we're playing support to Darkest Knights, up at the NEC"

"You're kidding me? Support for Darkest Knights... that's sounds pretty cool!"

"Nope, not kidding, and yes, it is! I'm on my way to Brian and Lisa's right now! But look, Tom, don't say anything on the radio, we're thinking of doing the gig semi-incognito, not letting on who we are till maybe halfway through our set."

"Something tells me you're pretty excited about this!"

"Yes, I am, actually. It's been a long time since we played support. I've never actually met the Darkest Knights guys, but Jenny says they're really nice!"



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« Reply #110 on: 13. July 2023, 17:30:05 PM »
Chapter 74 - 2-4-6-8 Motorway

"So, any suggestions on what we're playing tonight?" asked Jenny.

Carol had got herself to the group's shared house, and not long after, a small coach had arrived to collect them: luckily there was a coach company not that far away, that they had used a few times before, and they were able to get one of their stand-by drivers to work for the day. So, they were currently on the M25, heading towards the M40, and then up to Birmingham.

"Well, you mentioned earlier about 'starting incognito': I really like that idea, as long as we're all happy with playing some of our new stuff. Then move on to our current stuff once we've revealed who we are." replied Carol.

"I'm ok with that" said Linda, "Dianne?"

"Yeah, I'm actually looking forward to tonight. I mean, I'm nervous, but hell, it's been AGES since we've done somerthing as mad as this!". Diane was smiling, letting the others see her lower teeth, which were, as we all know, a bit crooked.

They continued chatting, working on a set list for the evening.

"Ok..." said Callum, "I've been chatting with one of the tech team: Darkest Knights are going in to do their sound check early, so by the time we get there, they will be done. They want you guys to do a sound check, which I'm sure won't be a big deal, and then they are 100% happy for you to use as much time as you need to rehearse your set: as long as you are done by 7pm they will be happy - show starts at 8pm. They don't have any headsets mics and in-ears just yet, but they should be there soon after we get there, but there is a possibility you may need to play tonight with normal mics and foldback wedges."

"Did they manage to get someone to help with our makeup?" asked Jenny. Whilst they were not going to be dressed up, and made up, like they might have done on of their normal shows, it was still helpful to have someone else there to do their makeup: if nothing else, it gave them a short 'chill-out' period before they played.

"Yes, I think they have, and someone to do your hair too."

Jenny's phone rang: it was Ginger, from Darkest Knights. "Hey, Jenny, finally got a moment to call you...."

"Hey, Ginger, let me put you on speaker, so everyone can hear.... go on..."

"Well, first of all, thank you all SO much for joining us tonight, I was worried we'd end up with some small and unsuitable local band..."

"As opposed to a well-known and completely unsuitable band?" replied Carol, laughing.

"So, you getting yourselves sorted out for tonioght? Is there anything we can do to help?"

"No, I don't think so, as long as there's plenty of coffee and beer there! We're almost on the M40 now, so that's what, a couple of hours away?"

"Oh, good. So, we're actually on site now: the crew have built the stage, and are currently testing out the PA, which means we'll be doing our sound check soon."

"Great. Callum is already talking with your stage team, so they know what we'll need."

"Ok, Jenny, a question for you, and feel free to say no: you wanting to play those couple of songs with us again?". A big smile came onto Jenny's, letting her show off her lovely metal braces.

"Hell, yeah, try and stop me!"

"In that case, I'll let everyone know, and we can do a quick run-through at some point. So, what you guys planning on playing?"

"Well, we've been working on some new stuff, so we're going to start with that." explained Carol. "Then we're going to break with tradition, and play someone else's music..."

"Oh, ok, anyone I would know?" asked Ginger.

"Maybe. Do you know the Northern Girls, Canadian girl rock band?"

"Yeah, they do some good stuff..."

"Well, for reasons we can't really talk about yet, we got together and rehearsed with them recently, and we're going to try one of their songs. And then there's something else, but you can hear that in our rehearsal!"

"Sounds like it's not going to be one of your 'normal' gigs then?"

"No, we thought that this would give use an interesting opportunity to try something very different."

"Ok, well look, we'll be around when you get here, see you all then!"

----

While Callum and the stage crew unloaded the small amount of the girl's kit from the coach, the rest of them had a meeting. So the tour managers, band managers, band members and so on.

"Guys, thanks for stepping in for us tonight" said Warren, who was the lead singer with 'Useful Tooth'. "I spoke with the guys earlier, they sounded pretty rough!"

"Any idea how long you're going to need us for?" asked Dianne

Robert, one of the 'tour managers' replied: "Well, we're in Birmingham tonight and tomorrow, then over to Leicester on Sunday. After that there's a 2 day break before we do Leeds. So we're thinking that, initially, if you can cover Birmingham and Leicester, we can see how well Warren's guys are doing. I'm assuming you're going to be ok for the next few days?"

"I don't think that's a problem" replied Brian, the CJDL manager. "I'll check out the diary for next week too, but again, I don't think there's any issues."

"Hey, did you just say 'Leicester'?" asked Carol, starting to smile, letting everyone see the silver wire of her retainer across the front of her teeth.

"Yeah, why?"

"I'm gonna need a couple of tickets for the Leicester gig. My sister lives there, and it's been absolutely AGES since she seen us play! We've never actually played Leicester before."

"That's not a problem, I'll get them to you!"

"Ok, so how do you guys want to be introduced?" asked Robert. "I was thinking maybe Warren could go and give the crowd the bad news, then introduce you guys..."

"Actually..." said Jenny, "We'd like to start playing without any introductions. Maybe if they have time, they can start flashing up words on the back screen like 'who?' and 'unknown' and 'incognito' and that sort of thing. We're gonna be playing some new stuff, so it's gonna be hard for the audience to easily work out who we are, which we thought could be fun. Warren, you could come on after maybe the third song, apologise to the crowd, make some sort of silly comment about 'getting some girls in, to stand-in for you', then we can introduce ourselves."

Warren smiled. "Ginger said you liked having some fun! I'm ok with that, we can try it out later on."

"Talking about 'having fun', you planning on doing anything 'silly' when you come play with us. Jenny?" Ginger asked.

"Damn, I forgot to bring the pink fluffy dress with me today!" replied Jenny, laughing. "No, just what I'll already be wearing. We decided that it would be interesting, and different, to kinda 'dress down' for a change, so just jeans and t-shirts."

"Hey, about t-shirts... why don't we go on wearing some 'Darkest Knights' t-shirts?" suggested Linda.

"I'm sure we can arrange that for you, no problems!".

They all chatted about various things for a while, making sure they were all happy about what would happen tonight.

Callum came in. "Ok, good news, the headset mics and in-ears just arrived, so give them 10 minutes to set them up, then you can come and do your soundcheck...."

Brian looked at his watch: it was just before 4 pm. "Looks like time is actually on our side today, you should have plenty of time to rehearse. So, no need to rush, take it gently, so you're all in a fit state to play tonight."

The girls went up on stage: the tech team were ready for them, and the sound-check only took about 15 minutes. Dianne did a short drum solo. "Is that sounding reasonably balanced? I kinda set it up by ear through headphones ages ago".

"Are you able to take the kick drum level up a touch?" asked the guy on the desk through Dianne's IEM's.

"Hang on..." she went into the menu of her drum controller, and made a quick adjustment, then played a bit. "Any better?"

"Yes, but maybe a tiny bit more...". She made another adjustment. "Yes, that's sounding much better. While you're at it, want to take the high-hat up a notch too?". Dianne made another adjustment, and played around the kit again.

"Ok, guys, I'm pretty happy with your sound, it's all your's now."

"Thanks" said Jenny. "How about we just take it from the top, and go through our set. And by that, I'm meaning a dark stage, when we walk in. Did your guys manage to do the words for on the back screen yet?". There was a bit of a pause, and people spoke to other people.

"They have something, but they were going to do a bit more for you..."

"Ok, so you have our set list... we'll come on, you guys do what you think will work behind us, we're completely in your hands on that. Then after our first three tracks, Warren comes on, speaks to the audience, then over to us. As we introduce ourselves - and NOT before - put the CJDL up... Any issues, talk to Callum, he knows us better than anyone."

"Mind if I do some filming while you run through things?" asked Paige.

Jenny looked around at the others. "No, fine with us... and guys," she added, addressing the stage crew, "during our set tonight, just let Paige go where she needs to on the stage, we're used to her, she's used to us! And who's on your roving camera?" Seeing as how the camera team had not worked with CJDL on the is tour, they were there too, to do a run though.

"That would be Tim..."

"Tim? Didn't you do some stuff for us on our last tour?"

Tim dropped the camera down, so they could see him. "Yup, that was me!" he shouted over.

"Nice to see you again, Tim! Look, you know we don't mind what you want to do, just try not to knock Paige over, will you? Ok, let's do this...."


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« Reply #111 on: 14. July 2023, 15:14:01 PM »
Chapter 75 - On Stage

So, they were playing the NEC in Birmingham tonight, Friday, and tomorrow, Saturday. They would go across to Leicester after their set late on the Saturday, and would play Leicester on the Sunday night, giving them the whole of the Sunday in Leicester.

The girls have done their sound-check, and had a good rehearsal of their set for this evening. Shortly, they would be having their dinner, but they were currently in their dressing room.

"Hey guys," said Carol, "If we're spending the day in Leicester on Sunday, how about we have a picnic and invite some fans. I'm sure we can find a park, and how many fans can there be in Leicester who would want to come and meet us?"

"How big's the venue in Leicester?" asked Jenny.

"Yeah, but THEY will all be Darkest Knights fans!"

"Fair comment. Yeah, a picnic could be fun. I'm guessing you're gonna invite your sister and her family along?"

"Of course...."

Carol made two phone calls, the first was to Tom...

"Hey, Carol, I'm guessing you're all up in Birmingham by now?"

"Yeah, just finished the sound-check and a run-through of our set, we're off to have some food in a moment. Look, would you like to come and join us up here?". Tom only had shows Monday to Friday, so he was now finished until Monday.

"Yes, that would be nice. I'll need to tell James I can't meet him tomorrow, but that's no biggie. Where and when?"

"Well, you have a choice: join me in Birmingham tomorrow: after the show tomorrow evening we'll be going over to Leicester to stay, ready to play Leicester on Sunday. Or you can come to straight to Leicester on Sunday."

"How does tomorrow sound, that way I get to spend a couple of days with you?"

"Ok.... Umm, be warned, you will, most likely, be meeting my sister and her family on Sunday."

"Oh yeah, she lives up in Leicester, doesn't she! So, where you staying in Birmingham then?"

"No idea, I guess I'll find out later tonight! Hey, bring your recorder with you, might be able to organise some interviews for you!" Carol chatted with Tom for a bit longer, arranging to speak on Saturday morning, to arrange things.

Carol's second call was to her sister, Rosie.

"Carol! Always nice to hear from you! What you up to?"

"Hey there, Rosie. Life suddenly became hectic..." and she explained about going to Birmingham to play support to Darkest Knights. "So, a question for you: what you guys doing on Sunday?"

"When on Sunday?"

"Let's start with Sunday evening..."

"Well, I guess we'll be at home, looking after the kids. Why?"

"Any chance you can get a baby-sitter? My treat."

"Possibly. Why?"

"How would you like to see CJDL play? We're at De Montford Hall Sunday evening."

There was a short pause. "Um, yeah, that would be nice, I've not seen you guys play in ages!"

"Ok, I'll get some more details to you later on. And what you doing Sunday lunchtime and afternoon?"

"Nothing yet, I don't think."

"Ok, how would all of you like to join us, and a few fans, for a picnic in a park somewhere? Then maybe bring the kids to the venue and let them see us do our sound-check?"

"Yeah, I think they'd love both of those."

"Look, you know Leicester better than me, got any suggestions about a park?"

"Well, De Montford is actually on our side of town. I don't suppose you know where you're staying yet, do you?"

"No, don't even know where we're staying tonight!"

"Well, Victoria Park is a matter of minutes from where you're playing, there's a kids play area, which the kids would like, and plenty of space. They sometimes do open-air concerts there. Popular place for picnics too..."

They continued chatting. "Look, we'll be finished our set by mid-evening - it's gonna be strange finishing so early - so have a word with Jim, and I'll call you later, should have some more details by then. Oh, by the way, Tom is coming up, so you can meet him, too."

----

Wearing Darkest Knights t-shirts, they were all waiting side stage: they had heard the crowd, but as the main lights went off, the crowd quietened down a bit. There hadn't been time to tell anyone about the change in the support act, so everyone was expecting 'Useful Tooth' to come on and play.

"Sh*t, I actually feel nervous!" said Carol. "It's been a while since we've been support!"

"Ok, ladies, ready when you are!" said a voice in their ears. Paige went out onto the stage with her camera, to be able to video them as they came on. To almost silence the girls went onto the stage, the lights came on dimly, and they started to play. Towards the end of the first song, words like 'imposters' and 'fake' came up on the screen at the back. Carol watched and then smiled as she played: the tech guys had managed to do some simple animations too, it looked quite good.

The first song ended, the crowd clapped unenthusiastically, and they went straight into their second song. The back screen got better... things like 'who IS this?' with an arrow pointing at Dianne on the drums. Then 'this isn't Jake!' with an arrow pointing at Linda. So far, Paige was being fairly conservative in her filming, and similarly Tim hadn't been doing any close-ups of the band... all trying to keep the intrigue going.

By the end of the second song, it was clear that the crowd now realised that they were NOT 'Useful Tooth'. They also clapped a bit more after their second song. They continued with their third song: the crowd was finally warming up, plus it was very clear that they were very intrigued by the words and images that were being displayed behind them. As the crowd applauded to their third song, Warren came onto the stage.

"Hello Birmingham!" he said: the crowd cheered. "I'm Warren, from 'Useful Tooth'...." another cheer. "You've probably realised by now that these guys are NOT us! Unfortunately Phil and Andy have gone down with something, so we're not able to play for you tonight. But, they did manage to find some *girls* to come and play for you instead!!". Warren put quite an emphasis on the word 'girls', as Jenny had suggested. He paused a moment to let the crowd shout out a few silly comments, and a cheer. "So I guess you all want to know who these girls are?" Another cheer. "I think we need to get them to come up front and introduce themselves!"

Carol was the first to walk to the front of the stage: as she got there, Tim (the cameraman) came closer to her, and her face appeared on the back screen.

"Hi, I'm Carol!" she said, and a large letter 'C' appeared on the big screen. Tim moved across to Jenny.

"And I'm Jenny!" said Jenny, as the 'J' came up.

"I'm Dianne..": the 'D' appeared.

"Hello there, Birmingham! I'm Linda..." and the L came up.

"... and we're all CJDL!"

Now, we have to remember that the crowd were actually there to see Darkest Knights, so many of the crowd would not have a lot of interest in CJDL, after all, their music was rather different. Except... the three songs they had just played were quite rocky....

"Warren, send our love to Phil and Andy, will you?" said Carol, as the audience applauded and cheered.

"I will, thanks! So, these girls were still at home, in London, when we called them late this morning to ask if they could stand in for us tonight... They, and their team have worked miracles, to get themselves here to perform for you tonight... but Carol, what you just played, it's not something I've heard you guys play before."

"No, we decided to try out some new stuff we've been working on: those three tracks didn't exist three weeks ago, and we wanted to see how people reacted. Plus it let us start off without these guys..." she motioned to the large crowd "... knowing who we were. Warren, thanks for introducing us... Warren, from Useful Tooth everybody!!!". The crowd cheered as Warren walked off the stage.

"I think we pretty much succeeded being incognito!" said Jenny, giggling. "So, we have another new one we'd like to play you....." and they went straight into their next song: now that the crowd knew who they were, and were starting to warm up, they responded more positively.

"Ok," said Linda, "we're going to do something a bit different now. We normally play our own music, but this is by someone else. Anyone ever heard of 'Northern Girls'?" A small cheer went up. "Well, this is one of theirs, 'Rocky Mountains". That song was quite a rocky song, and the crowd appreciated it.

"Thank you!! said Dianne, as the crowd reacted quite positively. "Ok, so now we're going to play you a few CJDL tracks that I think you'll know, let's start with a recent number one of ours...". The next few songs were very much 'mainstream CJDL'.

"Last two songs from us. So we're about to go into the recording studios to record this next song - it's going to be our next single - and it's called 'Braces Buddies'!". After several weeks of work, the song had changed from being a sweet and gentle acoustic song, to a much more upbeat and 'rockier' song, but still a song they enjoyed playing and singing! Also, it seems that the guys in charge of the back screen had gone overboard for this song: they had all sorts of braces images, including images of Jenny and Yun Hee in their matching braces! 

The applause died down. "I think we need to say a big thank you to the stage and tech team, they are doing a great job here..." Applause. "... and as for the guys doing those visuals at the back: when we got here mid-afternoon, that screen was 100% blank! Great job, guys!!" said Linda.

"Right!" said Jenny moving quickly on, and trying to keep things 'tight'. "Let's change the style a bit for our last song....", and she started to play the beginning of 'the dance of the sugar plum fairy' (go listen online!), a classical piece. The crowd remained quiet as she continued playing it. "Any of you ever heard of Peter Ilyich Tchaikovsky?" There were a few cheers. "He was a classical composer back in the 1800's, wrote loads of amazing stuff! I guess he was a rock musician of his day! That's from his 'Nut Cracker Suite'. And so is this next one, our last song... but rearranged by a 1960's band, Bee Bumble and the Stingers... and this is OUR version! ....Let's hit it girls!".

Jenny thumped out the introductory 'Daa Daa... Dum Dum...' on the piano, then went into the song. Over the next few minutes, the four girls played an amazingly up-beat rock version of 'Nut Rocker', with each of the girls contributing substantial solos. While they played, Tim pointed his camera close at the girls, with Jenny giving a large smile, letting the crowd see her mouthful of metal. The crowd also got a good view of Carol's retainers soon afterwards. All four girls had big smiles on their faces: they had been rehearsing this recently, and all loved the song. They had started working on another idea they had, which would make the song even more fun to perform in the future, but they weren't yet quite ready with it to perform it live.

As the applause died down, Ginger, the lead singer with Darkest Knights, walked onto the stage.

"CJDL everyone...." he said, encouraging the crowd to applaud even more. Finally the crowd quietened down. "Hey, everyone, I need to add my thanks to Warren's..." he turned to the four girls. "Thank you all very much for stepping in at the last moment! So, we're going to have a short break now, while the stage crew get everything ready for us, but in the meantimel, give these guys another big cheer!".

----

Back in their dressing room. Jenny posted a few messages: "Wow, we just played support for Darkest Knights, here in Birmingham!" and "Tried out some brand new songs today!"

"Hey, let's go live!" suggested Linda, getting her phone ready. She started just looking at her phone, waiting for a few people to arrive: Jenny had just posted a Thread and a Tweet telling everyone.

"So, we're in our dressing room at the NEC in Birmingham" explained Linda. "We got a call late this morning, asking if we could stand in for Useful Tooth, who are playing support for Darkest Knights. So we just played support for Darkest Knights instead of them!" she moved the phone around, letting their fans see the other girls. They chatted to their fans.

"Hey, I have an idea" said Jenny, a few minutes later. "Come with me!". What she was about to do was a bit 'naughty', and she led Linda to the Darkest Knights dressing room, knocked on the door, and walked straight in.

"Hi guys, we're streaming to our fans, say hello!". Luckily the guys were fully dressed, and feeling fairly relaxed.

"Hi everyone!" said Ginger looking at the phone. "Look, you should all be proud of CJDL, they just did an amazing set with a load of their new stuff in.... and all at very short notice!"

"So, you guys look pretty relaxed, considering you're just about to go on stage..."

"Well, you warmed the crowd up nicely for us, didn't you, so what's there to worry about?".

Someone else came into the room. "Ready to go?" she asked.

"Come on, follow us on stage.... in fact, why don't you introduce us, Jenny?". They went with the band to the side of the stage.

"Go on..." said Ginger, "Do it ANY way you like...".

Jenny walked boldly on to the stage, with Linda following with her phone. "Hello again, Birmingham! I'm Jenny!". The crowd cheered.  "Hey, say hello to some of our CJDL fans, we're live-streaming to them!" said Jenny, as Linda panned the phone to show the crowd. "So, we just burst in to the Darkest Knights dressing room to say hello to them, and Ginger told me to come up here on stage to introduce them. I mean, how on EARTH do I introduce a band as big as Darkest Knights?" The crowd cheered as she said 'Darkest Knights'.

"How about... 'give a huge cheer for Darkest Knights'?" suggested Linda. Again, the crowd cheered.

"Yeah, that might work... are you all ready?" The crowd cheered again. "I can't hear you, are you all ready?" Another big cheer. "So give an even bigger cheer for Darkest Knights!!!!" screamed Jenny! As the crowd went wild, Jenny and Linda walked off, and the guys from Darkest Knights came on.


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« Reply #112 on: 15. July 2023, 16:53:07 PM »
Chapter 76 - The new producer

Carol was last onto the small bus that had been arranged to take them to their hotel. They had all watched Darkest Knights from the side of the stage, including the two songs that Jenny played with them (and which she had quickly rehearsed with them after their own rehearsal). So whilst Darkest Knights were winding down backstage, the girls had decided they were ready to go back to the hotel. Their instruments remained at the venue, and their suitcases had been loaded onto the bus.

Carol went over and sat next to Linda, who had a smile on her face.

"Someone looks very happy with themselves, kinda like a cat that just finished a bowl of cream...."

"I AM happy, that's why! I just realised that tonight was the first time I've played a full live set with you guys - as a full band member!" explained Linda.

"Yeah, I guess so... does it REALLY feel that different?"

"It does. On the tour, I tended to keep to the back, letting you guys be out front, but now I'm out there with you, and it feels good..."

"But you did that at the Park Festival..."

"Hmm, that was a weird day, wasn't it? And definitely NOT a proper set. But, you know, I'm so glad we went to Korea, I got to know you guys so much better... as a band member. But it was really after what you did at the band meeting, a few weeks ago, that I REALLY felt I was a legit member of the band. So, thank you, Carol!"

"So, what was it like when you toured as a session musician? In terms of interacting with the main act?"

"We guys tended to keep ourselves to ourselves, the main acts don't usually deem us to be important enough to socialise with. Although you guys were rather different. I guess, as you said at our meeting, I was doing a lot more than just being a session musician for you."

"You were almost being our producer....". Suddenly a light came on in Carol's brain.

"A penny for them?" asked Linda.

"Oh, right, yeah... I had a sudden thought: why are we wasting our time trying to find a producer for recording Braces Buddies? Why don't YOU just do it?"

"You really think I can do it?"

"Asks the band member who, for the last few weeks, has been leading us and nudging us as we work on our new stuff?" Carol stood up, and looked down the bus to see where Jenny and Dianne were. "Hey, Jenny, Dianne, you guys got a moment?" called out Carol. The two of them came over to Carol and Linda.

"You called?" said Jenny.

"Yeah. About a producer for Braces Buddies, when we go into the studios.."

"Yeah, what about it? Thought of someone?"

"Yeah! Her name is Linda Jacobson! Look, think about what she did with us when we were working on our last album. And then what's she's been doing with us the last few weeks."

Whilst Jenny had acted as producer for a small band that she'd written a song with, some time ago, she'd never felt she was the right person to produce CJDL. But as she thought about it, she realised that Carol had a point about Linda. Whether she was the right person for their next full album, she wasn't sure, but just doing Braces Buddies... "yeah, why not."

"Do you feel up to it?" Jenny asked Linda.

"umm, well... it's not something I've ever thought about specifically doing..."

"Dianne, you're being typically quiet about this... any thoughts?" asked Carol.

"I say we give her a chance if she feels up to it. Jenny, you produced that song for that small band, didn't you? I'm sure you could give Linda a few pointers."

"Look," said Carol, "have a think about it.... I'm serious, I think you're up to the job."


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« Reply #113 on: 18. July 2023, 22:54:46 PM »
Chapter 77 - Breakfast

"Anyone going for breakfast yet?" asked Carol on their WhatsApp group. Yesterday evening they all went and had a single drink in the bar before going to bed: the day had been a busy one, and they were all pretty tired. Carol had called Tom again before falling asleep, and had then slept very well, waking up pleasantly refreshed.

"Just about to shower" replied Paige.

"Give me 5" replied Callum. Everyone else remained silent.

Carol checked the time: yeah, it was just after 10am, and luckily it was a Saturday, and breakfast was on till 11am. The hotel they had ended up in was actually quite nice: a quite old hotel that had been recently refurbished throughout. Because they had been booked in at the last moment, their rooms were spread out around the hotel, and purely by chance, Carol had been given a room called 'The Grand Penthouse': being a 'penthouse' meant it was in the roof of the old building, but it was also quite large. It was a shame they were only staying the one night, as she wouldn't really be able to appreciate it!

"Meet you all down there then..." WhatsApp'd Carol. Down in the restaurant, the mix of old and recently refurbished continued. The walls were tiled in cream and dark green. The built-in seats were plush, and covered in a lighter green 'leather', and the standalone chairs were simple and classy: this was NOT a cheap hotel. Carol felt a bit guilty, being in a place like this, but.... well, they had earned it. When you're touring, you need some place that's relaxing, and at least as good as at home, so that ruled out the Travelodges, Holiday Inn Expresses, Ibis's etc. Plus, they didn't really want to get mobbed by people, they needed a bit of 'peace and quiet'.

Carol sat at one of the large tables, knowing that everyone else would be joining her soon, and looked at the breakfast menu: cereals, Full English, fruit, yoghurt and so on, all the things you'd expect. Whilst Carol WANTED to have the Full English, followed by toast with jam on it, she decided that maybe she should be nicer to her body for a change, and went for the fruit.

"Is madam ready to order?" asked the waitress who had just walked over.

"Yes, a large black coffee, and the fruit with yogurt please. No rush on the latter, I'm waiting for a few others to join me." The waitress brought the coffee over almost immediately, allowing Carol to take a look around. Being a weekend, there were many others also having a late breakfast: several couples, a few singles, and a couple of family groups. One of the family groups wasn't that far away: mum, dad and two young-ish teen girls. She noticed that one of the girls was looking over towards Carol, and was saying something to her sister.

"Good morning!" said Paige, who had just arrived, and sat down next to Carol. "Got the essentials already, I see!" she said, meaning the coffee. Paige had hardly picked up the menu when Callum arrived, along with Brian. The other 3 girls arrived a few minutes later.

"This place is a bit better than many we've stayed at," said Dianne.

"Yeah, that's probably because dad didn't book it!" joked Jenny. Carol looked back at the family, and noticed that the two girls were most definitely looking at, and talking about, them. Carol was feeling in a good mood this morning, nicely chilled and relaxed. She stood up, and walked over to them.

"Hi guys... I'm Carol Danvers, and...." said Carol, starting to introduce herself.

"See! I said it was her!" said one of the girls.

"... and I think your girls have worked out who I am...." Carol looked at the parents, then said to the girls "But I have a feeling your mum and dad have no idea who I am, do they?" The girls nodded. She turned to the parents. "I'm sorry for interrupting your breakfast. As I said, I'm Carol Danvers, I'm one of the members of the girl band, CJDL..." At that point, the parents understood. "Something tells me that your girls are fans?"

"Yes, I think you could say that!" replied the mum. "So what brings you to Birmingham then?"

Carol quickly explained about coming up to play support for Darkest Knights. "Look, if you're ok with it, would your girls like to come and meet the 'team'??"

"Please mum! It's only over there..." said the elder of the two girls, probably about 14 or 15. Carol couldn't help but notice her cute metal smile.

"Please dad!" asked the other. Mum looked at dad, then said "Ok then, but don't annoy them!"

"So, what's your names then?" asked Carol.

"I'm Lilly" said the elder girl with the braces. "My sister is Yasmin". Carol took them over to their table, inviting them to sit with them.

"So, this is Yasmin and Lilly... I'm sure you recognise Jenny, Dianne, and Linda." The girls were in awe: I mean how often do young kids get to meet their idols? "This is Paige, she does all sorts of things for us. That is Callum, Jenny's brother, and over there is Brian: not only is he our manager, he's also Jenny and Callum's dad."

"What, Jenny has a dad?" said Yasmin, the younger girl. The adults thought her comment was both funny and sweet.

"Or COURSE she does!" replied Lilly.

While our team had their breakfast, they chatted with Lilly and Yasmin: they had to be a bit careful what they said, partly making sure they didn't accidentally use any 'adult language', but also making sure they didn't say anything that could be wrongly reported. Or give away any secrets about what they were up to. But it was very clear that not only were the two girls completely in awe at the fact that they were with their idols, they were enjoying discovering that their idols were also very normal people too.

Eventually their parents came over. "I'm sorry girls, but we should be getting ready to go out..."

"Awww, mum!!!!" they said in unison.

"Hey, 'mum', you have a phone?" asked Carol. "... take a picture of them with us...". Not only did mum have a phone, but so did Lilly.

Later on, Carol noticed a picture posted online: 'You'll NEVER guess who I just had breakfast with today!'. Carol smiled, and showed the others: THAT was why they liked to meet their fans.


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« Reply #114 on: 19. July 2023, 19:02:12 PM »
Chapter 78 - So why DO you like me?

"Ok, can you all be at the venue for about 4pm for a quick sound check?" asked Callum. He had just been on the phone to the Darkest Knights manager.

"Sure thing, bro!" replied Jenny. "Any chance we could have maybe half an hour to an hour for practice, like we did yesterday?"

"I'll have a word, but I'm sure it will be ok. What you wanting to practice?"

"I'd like us to work on Nut Rocker, specifically on what we've been doing recently."

Callum smiled. "Yes, I'm looking forward to seeing you guys do that on stage, it would make a great finale!"

"Exactly my thinking. Not sure if we'd be ready for it tonight, but maybe tomorrow? Hey, anyone got a whistle? No? In that case, better get one..." Jenny's phone pinged. "Looks like Ben and Mike are here!". Ben and Mike had driven up together, Tom was making his own way there.

"And how is my favourite band?" asked Ben as he walked in to the hotel reception, to be met by everyone.

"We are fine!" said Carol.

"And is my OTHER 'favourite band' around?" asked Ben.

"No, they are at another hotel: there wasn't enough rooms for us there, so we stayed here: not that I'm complaining, this place is actually rather nice. But we'll all be in the same place tonight, over in Leicester."

"So, is Tom joining us?" asked Mike, who had walked in behind Ben.

"Yes, but he's about an hour behind you, he just messaged me from near Oxford..."

"Ok, so what we doing then? And when do guys need to be 'back in class'?" asked Ben.

"Sound check and a rehearsal over at the NEC at about 4 o'clock, then on-stage at 7:30... We need to pack and check out, which shouldn't take too long... come on, you can help me pack!" said Jenny.

"Ah, right, THAT sort of 'packing'..." said Carol, having a joke at Jenny and Ben's expense.

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"Hello there, beautiful!" said Tom as he saw Carol waiting in reception. Carol smiled.

"Hiya...". she replied, going over to him, and giving him a 'public hug and kiss'. "My case is still upstairs, and I need to check out." Whilst a small coach had brought them to the hotel last night, with Ben and Tom having their cars there, the others could just use taxis as needed. Paige had already gone off with Linda into Birmingham, as had Jenny, Ben, Dianne and Mike. Brian and Callum were still in the hotel, planning to go straight to the venue a bit later, taking Paige and Linda's suitcases with them.

So Carol took Tom up to her room. With the door closed, Carol put her arms around Tom, and put her lips to his. Once more, her tongue slipped between Tom's lips, to run over his metal brackets. After playing like that a bit, she pulled her tongue back, inviting Tom to explore her orthodontia. Tom's tongue ran over the wires of Carol's retainers, and when Carol opened her mouth a little, he slipped his tongue inside, feeling the smooth plastic of her retainers. He quickly pulled his tongue back, and gently broke off the kiss.

"Look, I know you like my braces, but I still find yours a bit odd..." he explained. Carol put her hand up to her mouth, and pulled down on the clasps of her upper retainer: it had more clasps than the lower one, to hold it firmly in place while the spring moved her wayward canine, so it was hard to remove. With the top one out, and still in her hand, she took out the bottom one, then put both of her retainers on the desk, next to her bag and room keys.

"Let's see if this is better for you then...." she said, as they started to kiss again.

----

After putting Carol's bag into his car, Tom drove them into the centre of Birmingham. After a bit of a wander around the Jewellery Quarter, they met up with Linda and Paige for lunch, then they went for a short walk along the canal.

"So, what IS it about my braces that you like then?" asked Tom as they sat alone by the canal, having just had another quick kiss.

"To be honest, I don't really know. I mean, the basis of many 'fetishes' is that it's something you can't have... like glasses, or leg braces, or being in a wheelchair. But I've HAD braces when I was a teen, and they did absolutely nothing for me back then. And I HAVE my retainers, and THEY have no effect on me either. But YOUR braces, on YOUR teeth... for some reason I just find them attractive. It's all part of your rather sexy smile, makes your smile so much nicer..." Tom smiled, letting Carol have another close look. She put her hand up to his face, and ran her finger over his braces, feeling the rough texture.

"So, what *I* want to know is what is it about ME that you like?"

"Well, you have a cute face and nice smile too, although your retainers don't do anything for me. But I think the thing I REALLY like about you is your voice."

"My voice? My talking voice, or do you mean my singing voice?"

"Both. I love the way that it can be both soft and gentle when you talk, but also quite powerful when you sing. And also very gentle when you sing. You know how to control it, and use it."

"And how about when I whisper sweet nothings in your ear?" she asked, whispering into his ear in a soft and sexy voice.

"Definitely nice...." said Tom. "That day you came in and did that show-long interview: many people would have been struggling to talk that long, but you managed just fine, and your voice was so relaxed for the whole thing..."

"I guess I have all my singing training to thank for that." suggested Carol.

"I'm sure it helped. You know, if you did audio sex recordings, you'd make a bomb...."

"Don't go there!" said Carol very quickly, and laughing. "So, did you remember to bring your recorder with you?"

"Of course. Did you manage to have a word with Darkest Knights?"

"Oh, yeah, no problems, they sounded pretty chilled about it, so pretty much any time you like. If you're not too fussed about seeing us rehearse, you could do it then."

(In the end, Tom watched the first bit of their rehearsal, then went and chatted to Darkest Knights.)


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« Reply #115 on: 24. July 2023, 00:46:04 AM »
Chapter 79 - The Review

"Guys, before you do your sound check and rehearsal, there's something I need to read you" said Paige.

"What is it?" asked Jenny.

"An online review from a local Birmingham daily paper."

"I hope it's good..." commented Linda, "not too interested if they don't like us!": she was wanting to get on with the sound check.

"I think you might like this....." said Paige, as she read from her phone:

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'As the house lights dimmed, the stage lights did not get any brighter: on a dark stage, 4 unknown band members came out, and with no introduction they started to play: the music was good, different, and like the players, completely unknown. The band knew how to play: forget about them apparently being 'just a support band', I would gladly pay to listen to them.

No, this was NOT 'Useful Tooth', who were supposed to be the support band last night: that was confirmed after three songs, when their lead singer came onstage to explain that, due to ill-heath, his band was unable to play. So who WAS this band? He asked the band to introduce themselves. To say I was shocked and surprised when I discovered who they were is a massive understatement: the support band was none other than the 'girl band' known as CJDL. They explained that the 3 songs they had just played, and the one they went on to play, had only been written in the last month, and were all still a 'work in progress'! Nice one, ladies!

Next up, they played 'Rocky Mountains', an excellent song by Northern Girls: with my eyes closed, I would almost have had believed that Northern Girls were on the stage playing it.

However, for me, a lover of rock, their next section ruined the mood a bit: a short collection of their mainstream hits. However, I didn't remain disappointed for long: their penultimate song was strange, quirky, but good and rocky: a song entitled 'Braces Buddies'. Go figure!

However, their finale perfectly nailed the mood so far: an upbeat rocky version of Nut Rocker, a 1960s song brought right up to date, and enjoyed by all present.

But that was not the last we saw of the CJDL girls: after a short break, two of then came on-stage whilst streaming to their own fans. Their mission was simple: to introduce the stars of the evening, Darkest Knights of course!

<review of Darkest Knights>

But still Jenny from CJDL wasn't finished: she joined the 'Knights' on stage for two of their songs, playing her 'girlie-pink' guitar like a rock legend! These girls have talent!

<more Darkest Knights review>

So, if you have tickets to tonight's Darkest Knights concert at the NEC, make sure you get there by 7:30 so you don't miss the support band, otherwise you will kick yourselves! Although, let's be clear: CJDL are no support band!'

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The band said nothing as the words of the review sunk in. Carol was the first to speak. "Let's get this sound check done, then I think we need to tweak our set a bit...". She turned to the guy currently behind the desk: "I think we're gonna need an hour or so of rehearsal time today, if you're ok with that?" she called over.

"I'm sure the guys can work around you....."

With their headset mics and in-ear-monitors fitted, the actual sound check took only 5 minutes: the sound crew really loved that Dianne used an e-drumkit, it was so easy to set up and check out!

Then the girls sat down in the middle of the stage. They asked the rest of their team to join them.

"How about we rehearse those two other songs we started working on: I don't care how bad they go, I think they'll go down much better tonight than our other songs." said Carol.

"Yes... And we could also play Northern Girls' 'High Destruction' to go with 'Rocky Mountains'" suggested Linda.

"You two are on the ball today!" said Jenny. "And I'm 100% with you so far. So I'm reckoning we need another three of our own songs on top of that lot, any suggestions?"

"How about we do 'Dark Coffee', 'Unexpected Yesterday' and 'Crazy for Change'" suggested Dianne. "Oh, and with you on the rest."

Jenny looked at Ben, Mike, Tom, Callum and Paige. "Guys, give us a sanity check on this: are we thinking straight?" asked Jenny, "or do you have any better ideas?"

Callum was most familiar with the songs they had just mentioned. "I can see exactly where you're going with this, and why not? You took a bit of a gamble yesterday, and it seems to have paid off, so yes, go the whole way. It's not often you get the chance to try out different stuff on a live audience: you have absolutely nothing to lose, and everything to gain!"

Over the next hour, they rehearsed their extra two new songs, and 'High Destruction', all several times. The new songs were probably no better than 'adequate', but they would probably go down a lot better than the alternatives.

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It's several hours later, and whilst the girls were all feeling a little nervous before they went on stage, when they came off stage at the end of their set, the crowd kept chanting for more.

Ginger, who had just 'outro'd' their set came over to them at the side of the stage. "Feel free to do another one, if you want to...."

"But what on earth do we sing? We can't just sing one of our 'normal' songs." said Dianne, as she continued to wipe herself down with a towel.

Jenny closed her eyes a moment. "Come on everyone, back on stage!" she demanded. Jenny led the four of them to the front of the stage, while the crowd cheered loudly.

"What you needing?" asked a voice in their ears.

"Just the four of us, acapella..." replied Jenny. "Hold my hands" she said, waiting for the noise to die down. With the girls just standing there, doing nothing but holding hands, the crowd finally became silent.

"Dear God, I can think of only one song that we should sing right now, and we're going to need your help to sing it....".


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« Reply #116 on: 24. July 2023, 19:06:25 PM »
When I started to write this story, I thought "yeah, maybe 30 chapters".... WHAT HAPPENED??? We're at chapter 80, and STILL the story goes on. I'll try and stop it before chapter 200, I promise!!

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Chapter 80 - winding down in the bar


"Good evening, we're part of the Darkest Knights party..." said Carol to the receptionist.

"And your name?"

"Danvers and Sharpe... there should be two rooms".

"Just give me a moment... ah yes, here we go..."

"Two rooms?" asked Jenny, who had walked into reception with Ben, just moments after Tom and Carol.

"You have a problem with that?" asked Carol.

"No, not in the least. Just surprised, that's all, I guess I assumed that you two were... hmm, maybe I'd better just shut up!"

"It's ok, we just decided to take things really slow..."

"And good on you, Carol!" said Dianne, who had walked in with Mike right behind Jenny and Ben.

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So, after finishing their own set, they had watched Darkest Knights (and of course, Jenny played with them again), then decided to get on their way to Leicester: Jenny, Ben, Dianne and Mike were in Ben's car, Carol went with Tom. It wasn't that long a journey, they arrived less than an hour later. The others had organised a taxi, and would join them soon after.

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"And what time is the bar open 'til?" asked Jenny, as she and Ben were checked in by a second member of staff.

"Pretty much as long as you'd like it to be..." was the reply.

"Come on, let's all chill together with a pint or two..." suggested Jenny.

Tonight they were booked into the same hotel as the Darkest Knights and their entourage: the members of 'Useful Tooth' were going home for a couple of days, to allow their two ill members to recover, so their rooms became available for CJDL. After going to their rooms - which were all conveniently together - and quickly unpacking, the six of them went back down to the bar, and grabbed some beers. It wasn't long before Callum, Paige, Linda and Brian arrived at the hotel, joining them in the bar soon after.

"Well, ladies, I think you should be very proud of what you've done the last couple of nights: with close to zero time to do it, you managed to put together a very well received set which was VERY different to anything you've done before. And Jenny, I liked your quick-thinking in adding that last song in: it was quite amazing!" said Jenny's dad.

Carol was smiling widely: yes, things had gone really well tonight, and Jenny had been spot-on - as ever - in what she did. "Yeah, and the audience seemed to appreciate it too. So, are we still up for having a picnic in the park with our fans tomorrow lunchtime?" asked Carol.

"Well, the weather's looking ok, so yes..." said Jenny.

"I'm still getting used to how you guys are so willing to meet up with your fans. And I must admit, it IS fun. Carol, you said your sister and her family are hoping to join us too?"

"Yup, just need to give her the details. She suggested Victoria Park, which is right next to where we're playing, no more than a 5 minute walk. Callum, any idea what time they need us for the sound check tomorrow?"

"Probably 3 or 4 o'clock: I guess it depends if they have any problems with the rigging. To be honest, if you're only 5 minutes away, I can just call you."

"Oh, I assumed you would come with us.."

"Oh, I'll come for lunch, but I ought to get back early, help check out your kit."

"Ah, yeah, right. So, what sort of time do we think we should meet up with everyone?"

"Well, if we're doing a lunchtime picnic, then I guess lunchtime. 12:30?"

"Everyone ok with that? We gonna be able to get up in time? Ok, let me tell Rosie. And our fans... and I'm assuming the hotel can do us some lunches..." Carol got up, and went and had a word with the lady behind the bar, then returned. "She says we just need to ask at breakfast, it's something they often do!"

Carol WhatsApp'ed her sister with the details, suggesting she would re-confirm the details closer to lunchtime. Then it was the fans: "Hey, everyone! Some of you may have heard that we're playing support for Darkest Knights, which means that we're currently up in Leicester! Would anyone like to meet up for a picnic tomorrow, Sunday, 12:30-ish at lunchtime? Victoria Park, Leicester. We'll give you the details closer to the time..."

Despite the late hour, and the fact that it was a Saturday, they got a few responses very quickly. One bemoaned the fact that it was in Leicester rather than Manchester.

----

Soon after, the Darkest Knights and their entourage arrived at the hotel, with a group of them, including Ginger, Tony, Fingers, and George (the four band members), joining the much smaller CJDL team in the bar. They talked about each other's performances, and loads of other stuff.

"Hey, Ginger, want to join us in the park tomorrow, we're going to have a picnic?" asked Carol, smiling widely because she knew that he wouldn't want to.

"What, with a load of screaming CJDL fans. Thank you very much for the invite, but maybe not!". Ginger was also smiling when he replied.

It wasn't particularly late when they all finally went to bed.



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« Reply #117 on: 26. July 2023, 01:35:33 AM »
Chapter 81 - Rosie and James


Breakfast for the bands and hangers-on was in a side-room from the main restaurant, which not only gave them a bit of privacy, but meant the hotel could run the breakfast a bit later for them, if needed. Carol and Tom got there just after 10:30, and whilst they weren't the first there, they were far from being the last! Carol went and had a word with the staff about a picnic lunch.

"Ok, so we have our lunch sorted out, I'd better confirm everything with Rosie and our fans..."

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With the park being next to the venue, they were all able to park their cars in the venue, where they went in to check how things were going: the crew had been working hard, with the actual stage and lighting rig in place. They were currently rigging the linear speaker arrays.

Jenny went into the middle of the stage, in a safe area, took out the whistle she still had in her pocket, and blew it loudly a couple of times. Moments later there was silence.

"Hey guys, I just wanted to say you guys are doing a really great job!" said Jenny. "Don't underestimate how important what you are doing is... without all this, and what the PA, lighting team, front-of house team and so on also do later on, we'd not be able to perform, you're all 'part of the team'! So THANK YOU!". Many of the crew briefly clapped: it made a change for them that someone bothered to show their appreciation.

Carol's phone pinged: it was her sister, saying that they were at the playground in the park, and that there was already a group of people gathering nearby.

"Hey, Paige, wanna be a super-fan again? Go have a word with the fans that have already arrived? Callum, why don't you go too?"

"Jennifer, why don't I go with them as well?" suggested Ben. Whilst everyone else called her Jenny, Ben still called her Jennifer, and Jenny wasn't going to try and dissuade him!

"Yeah, ok. We'll be along in a few minutes."

"You're too good to your fans," said Brian, "but I understand why you do it!"

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Carol held Tom's hand as they walked to the park to meet their fans. What had effectively started as a bit of an infatuation - caused by Tom's braces, of course -  from Carol's perspective, had become quite a nice relationship of the past few weeks, as she had slowly discovered more about Tom.

"You ok with us?" asked Carol.

"What do you mean? You worried about something?"

"No, it's just that when we got together, you were a bit worried about the press, and all that..."

"Ah, right. No, things have been fine, not had any problems!". He put his arm around Carol. Yes, at first, he had indeed been worried about the effects of going out with someone so well known, but apart from a few very minor things (including a bit of leg-pulling at the radio station) things had been ok. Carol too was feeling much more comfortable with being in a relationship, and they had both agreed that they wouldn't rush things.

By now, they had walked across the park, to be near to the kiddies playground. There was a nice area of grass, against a row of trees, that would give them some shade. And sat or stood there were several people, chatting with Paige, Callum and Ben. And there was someone with a camera... we're talking a professional camera.

"Rosie should be in the playground - I'll be back in a moment!". Ignoring everyone, Carol walked over to, and into, the playground.

"Rosie! It is SO good to see you!" said Carol, giving her sister a big hug. "I'm sorry, it's been far too long, hasn't it?" Whilst they had messaged and spoken many times, they hadn't actually seen each other for over a year.

"Carol! Yes, it's been a while. But you are looking good!".

"And hello, James!" said Carol. James was Rosie's husband: the relationship between him and Carol was a little tense at times - he made no secret of the fact that he thought that a pop-star's life was pretty easy, unlike most people's. That was part the reason for inviting them to see their afternoon rehearsal.

"So, you're finally playing in Leicester... about time!!" said Rosie.

"Yeah. When they said we were coming to Leicester, the first thing I thought about was you guys! Hey, let me give you your tickets for tonight. There's also back-stage passes, so you'll be able to come and meet everyone without any problems. And I've organised a car to collect you, so you won't need to worry about getting in or parking. I'm assuming you managed to get a babysitter ok?"

"Yes, that wasn't a problem. And thank you, I'm looking forward to seeing you perform..."

"I need to warn you that our performance tonight will not be a normal CJDL one... "

"What do you mean?"

"Well, we're playing support for a major rock band, so we're not playing any of our 'normal' stuff, mainly some new stuff that's more suitable, and some stuff by another band too. But I think you'll like it..."

"James is quite looking forward to seeing Darkest Knights: it's actually been a while since we went out to a concert.". Just then two young children came over to Rosie.

"Hey, Sam, Emma!" said Carol, smiling and kneeling down to be their height. Sam was 7, emma 5.

"You remember your auntie Carol, don't you?" said their mum. Sam looked at auntie Carol.

"What's that on your teeth?" asked Sam.

"That is called a retainer...." said Carol.

"What's a retainer?"

"Well, a little while ago, my teeth were a little bit crooked, and not quite in line, so see that extra bit of wire on this tooth?..." said Carol, pointing to the incisor that had the extra wire that had pulled it back into place, "it helped to pull my tooth back into the right place, and hold it there!"

"Are you going to have to have that for ever and ever?"

"No. I can actually take it out, but I have to wear it for a few months, until it's firmly in the right place. Want to see what it looks like?". Sam's eyes lit up and he nodded. Carol put her fingers into her mouth and pulled down on her upper retainer, removing it, and she held it in her hand for Sam to look at. After rotating it around so Sam could see it properly, she put it back into her mouth again.

"I need to go and join my friends, so we can have our picnic... are you going to join me?" asked Carol.

"Our picnic stuff is over there: why don't you take them, we'll get our stuff and follow."

With Sam holding her left hand, and Emma holding her right, Carol walked over to where everyone else was waiting. There were several confused fans looking at her as she arrived with two young kids. "I didn't think you had kids?" said one of them.

Carol smiled. "This is my nephew Sam, and my niece Emma, they are going to join us for our picnic..."

"Hi there Sam... and Emma!" sid Tom, shaking their hands. "I'm Tom, I'm your auntie Carol's boyfriend! And I'm guessing this is your mum... nice to meet you, Rosie!"

---

"So who's the pap?" asked Carol, pointing at the guy with the camera.

"Reporter / photographer with the local paper" replied Paige. "Seems he picked up about this online: I told him that if he hung around, we'd do something for him. He seemed quite relaxed about it."

"Ah, ok... I guess as this is *my* gig, I'd better say 'hello' to everyone?"

"Fine by me!" said Jenny. The band seemed to have developed a bit of a pecking order: Jenny was number 1, closely followed by Carol. Linda, had become the number 3, and Dianne was 'the quiet one'.

The fans had been quite excited when the girls first got there, but were calming down now.

"Hi everyone! I'm Carol, but I'm sure you all know that!" She introduced the other three girls, then the rest of their party. "So, we're not in a rush, we've probably got a couple of hours before we need to go anywhere, so plenty of time to have lunch, chat, play some songs, take photos. We'll try and move around, so you get a chance to talk with us all, and there's nothing to stop you guys moving around too: just no stalking!!" said Carol, grinning. Knowing that their heroes would be hanging around for quite a while seemed to calm them right down.

Tom sat with Carol's family, and a small group of the fans. "I'll be back shortly" said Carol after quickly popping over to them, "need to do a bit of 'work'". She collected the other three, and they went and spoke with the reporter, then let him take a few pictures of them.

"Mind if I take some more general pictures?"

"You might want to ask anyone you take a picture of, and I'd rather you left *them* alone" said Carol, pointing at her sister and her family. "They're family, not fans." she explained.

Finally, Carol got to sit down with Tom and her sister and family, to eat their picnic lunch. There were a few fans nearby, and Carol introduced her family to them. So, with several sets of eyes watching her she took her blue plastic retainer case out of her bag, then put her fingers into her mouth, pulling down on her upper retainer: of course, she was quite used to doing this, so it came out easily. She put it onto the retainer case, then removed her lower retainer, adding it into the retainer case, which she closed, and put back into her bag.

One of the girls smiled: she had braces too. "I didn't realise you'd had braces again..." she said.

"I didn't have ACTUAL braces..." said Carol, and she explained about her wayward tooth, and how she was wearing her slightly modified Hawley retainer to tame the tooth.

"You don't seem to have a lisp... did you have one when you first got it?" aske the same girl. As Carol started to eat her sandwich, she explained that she did indeed have a lisp, but only for a week or two. "It feels quite normal now when I wear it - in fact, it feels a bit odd when I remove it, kinda like actual braces I guess. And to answer your next question, I had those a few years ago, as a teen. And yes, I wore my retainer for about 5 years at night, and everything was stable... until recently!"

As they continued to eat, they chatted. Of course, Carol had to be carful about some of the things she said, or more specifically how she answered any questions.

Before leaving the venue, they had had a short meeting, to agree on what they would, and wouldn't, say. So, no mention of Northern Girls. As far as a tour, it was 'something being actively thought about', for sometime next year. Don't be too specific about plans for the new album, that was still very much a 'work in progress'. But OK to talk about their next single, 'Braces Buddies', that they would be recording next week. And ok to talk about some of the new stuff they were working on - although it may never make the album.

The group Carol was talking with were interested in what sort of stuff they were working on, and was it different from their last album and tour. An idea came into Carol's head, then she got up and went and had a quick word with Brian, returning moments later. About five minutes later, Brian came over to her, saying quietly: "I've had a word, and there should be no problems with your idea!"

"Excuse me, everyone, just need to do some more 'work', although I think you guys might like the idea..." said Carol. Carol went and had a short word with each of Jenny, Dianne and Linda, then borrowed Jenny's whistle, blowing it to get everyone's attention.

"Hey, everyone, just thought I'd update you on the afternoon plans. We're still in no rush, so keep on eating and chatting. Then after that, we thought we might get our guitars out, and have a bit of a sing-song with you all. But after THAT, I've just arranged something that I suspect you will all want to do: would you like to come over to the venue, and watch us do our soundcheck, followed by us rehearsing? And maybe we can do a couple of extra fun things too?" Unsurprisingly, there was a massive cheer.

"Ok, as I said, plenty of time, we're not going to be sound checking for at least an hour or two..."



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« Reply #118 on: 27. July 2023, 04:00:52 AM »
Chapter 82 - One, two... one, two...


Carol took Emma with her, and joined Linda, who was with another group of fans. "So, everyone, this is my niece, Emma. She's only five, so please watch what you say! Emma, this is Linda, we work together, and these are a few more of my 'friends'...". Keeping a 5 year old occupied can be difficult, but she seemed happy to sit with Carol, as she chatted with Linda and the others. After chatting for a while, Emma started to get a bit restless.

"Can I go back to mummy?" she asked

"Of course you can! Hey, Linda, come over and say hi to Rosie and Jim... And Emma, thank you for sitting quietly with me!"

Over the next 90 minutes or so, they chatted, then they played their acoustic guitars. "So, this is the basis of our next single" explained Jenny, and she told them the specific lead up to how the song was written while they were in Korea. "And as Linda pretty much wrote it, I think she should be playing it....".

"But before you do that" said Carol, "I have someone on my phone that this song is about! Everyone, say 'hello' to Yun Hee over in Korea!" Carol pointed the phone at their group of fans, who were waving, then at Linda.

"Hi there, Yun Hee, as you can see, we're out with some fans, and I'm just about to play yours and Jenny's song!"

"Yes, Braces Buddies!!!" said Yun Hee.

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Carol checked the time. "Ok, everyone, how about you all start packing up. I spotted some rubbish bins on the way here, so dump your junk in them as you pass. We'll go back to the venue in say... 5 minutes?"

Callum and Brian had already gone back to the venue. 'Come in the front door, someone will be there waiting for you all' said the message that Callum had sent Carol.

"Ok, before we go to the venue: sit anywhere you like in the stalls, there's plenty of space. Feel free to use the toilets if you need to, but no trying to hide so you can sneak in to this evening's performance!!! I suspect that Darkest Knights will be rehearsing when we get there, so please be patient. When we get onto the stage, remember we are NOT doing a performance for you, we will be starting with a sound-check and then rehearsing for tonight's set.... anything else will  be a bonus for you! Ok, let's go!"

Carol talked with Rosie on the way back, explaining that they could leave early, and even come back again if they wanted: their back-stage passes would make sure of that. "So, we're onstage at 8:00 tonight, and I've organised your taxi for about 6:45, that all ok for you?"

"Yeah, babysitter is coming at 6:30."

"Excellent. Find out if she's a fan of ours or 'the Knights' will you?".

When they got to the hall, Darkest Knights were on stage having a quick rehearsal. Dianne had a quick word with her boyfriend, Mike, then went up on the side of the stage. As the guys finished their song, Dianne went onstage. "Hey, any chance I could play with you?"

"Yeah sure... I'm sure the guys on the desk can mix in your drums..."

"Actually, I was hoping that George might let me try out HIS drums..."

"Fine with me" replied George. "I was actually going to ask you if I could see what a set of modern e-drums were like to play, I only every tried out some of the really early ones."

"Yeah, those early ones were a bit crappy, weren't they? We had some at school. I just tried out some of the latest ones, and they really ARE good, but these aren't all that bad. Let me check it out for you....". Dianne sat at her drums, turned them on, then checked it all out. "Sounds good to me!". She walked over to George's rather larger set of acoustic drums. "Ah, you have a double bass pedals, MUST try that out!" Dianne sat down, and using her own sticks that she had picked up a moment ago, spent a minute trying out the drums, including the double bass drum pedals. "Nice!!!" she said with a big smile.

Then George tried out Dianne's drums. "Hmm, not as bad as I thought.."

"So, what do you fancy playing then?" asked Ginger.

"What's that song third into your set?"

"Oh, you mean 'Dark Danger'? Fine by me!"

Whilst the drumming was a bit 'rough' to start with (not surprising when both drummers were on unfamiliar drums!), it soon settled down. Dianne was struggling, getting her head around the two bass pedals, so ended up just using the one, but apart from that, she enjoyed the experience.

"Thanks guys, that was fun!" she said when they finished. Of course, the 'fans' applauded.

"Why don't you join us tonight? What do we think guys?". Dianne smiled: she was going to be playing with Darkest Knights tonight!

"Ok, I think we've done enough, I see you have some friends with you?"

"Yeah. As they aren't going to be able to see us tonight, Carol thought they might enjoy watching our soundcheck and rehearsal."

As the 'Knights' left the stage, Callum and another guy came out, with the headset mics and in-ear monitors for the four girls.

"I don't suppose my mic is working yet is it?"

"Half a second!" shouted the guy at the mixer. "Ok, try that..."

"Hi everyone, can you all hear me ok?" There were a few 'yes' responses. "Good, that's the first bit of the soundcheck done.. So, a soundcheck has 2 purposes, the first bit, the simple bit, it to check everything is plugged in an turned on, which doesn't usually take too long. The next bit is about balancing the volumes of the various instruments and vocals, so it sounds good. So, I'm assuming that's Terry on the desk again?"

"Yes, it is!" said a voice in her ears.

"Yes, that's another thing: Terry can talk to us into our ears, without you guys hearing, so don't be too surprised if you see and hear strange things." A moment later all four of the girls raised their hands in the air, and clapped. "Yeah, things like that... seems Terry is in a happy mood today: he just spoke to us all in our ears, that's why we all clapped! Ok, Terry, tell us what you need."

After checking the 4 headset mics were working, he also checked the two handheld mics, currently one each side of the stage: they would need them this evening when someone introduced the band. Next Terry asked Dianne to check her drums (which had worked just a few minutes ago, but no harm in checking again!). Then the piano, followed by the various guitars (which included Jenny's bright pink one!).

Next he got the girls to play in specific combinations, so he could balance things up. Next he got them to sing as they played.

"Ok," said Terry over the PA so everyone could hear, "things sound pretty good to me, so I'll let the girls rehearse or play for you, whatever, I can adjust things as they play..."

The girls started by playing their first song, one of the new ones. Terry kept the PA a lot quieter than it would normally be, mainly because he realised that the younger kids there might not like it being too loud.

"Hey, who's going to introduce us tonight?" asked Carol.

"I think Ginger said he would..." said a voice for the side of the stage.

"In that case, can someone ask him to join us for a few minutes? We need to work out what he's going to say. In the meantime, let's play 'High Destruction'" suggested Carol.

"That's one by 'Northern Girls' isn't it?" said Ginger when they finished.

"Yup, that's right. So, any thoughts how you're going to introduce us?"

"Pretty much the same as last night, after your third song. I'll probably explain how we contacted you, and thank you for doing it all, then ask you to introduce yourselves, that ok?"

Ginger sat side stage as the girls continued to rehearse and entertain their fans. "Okay," said Carol. "I reckon we could have a bit of fun. We're not planning on playing it tonight, but I'm thinking we could play you 'Sexy Yellow Roller Skates'... or rather sing it. Terry, can you line it up for playout in a moment, please? In the meantime, I'm thinking that some of you - and I'm definitely thinking about my lovely nephew and niece - might like to come up onto the stage and join us dancing to it? And I'm thinking we need to get Tom, Ben and Mike onstage to join in too. Oh, yeah, Paige and Callum too! I'll give Brian, our manager, an 'older person's exemption' for this one!"

Several of the fans came onto the stage, including Rosie with her two.

"Ok, Terry, would you like to play just the first verse, so we can show everyone what the dance moves are supposed to be?" Over the next 5 to 10 minutes, they got everyone on stage to practise the moves, then they sang the song through with everyone dancing - or at least trying to! "Well done everyone!" She turned to little Emma, and dropped to her knees. "And did YOU enjoy dancing, Emma?" she asked. "Yes" said Emma quietly.

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"So, earlier on in the park, we played the original acoustic version of 'Braces Buddies' for you," said Linda, "so we 'tweaked' it a bit, made it a bit rockier, so this is what our next single is going to sound like - we'll be recoding it next week, so I'm sure it will be released soon!"

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"Ladies..." said Carol, "How about we move on to our finale? We could play it straight, but then I'm thinking we could practice the new 'version' once or twice?" Everyone liked the idea.

Jenny started to play 'the Dance of the Sugar Plum Fairy, as she started to talk. "So," explained Jenny, "this is a piece of music from 'The Nutcracker Suite', by a man called Peter Illyich Tchaikovsky. He was a classical musician from the 1980's, but in a way......". Jenny stopped, as she noticed some giggling from the fans, and when she turned, she saw that Linda had taken off her guitar, and was at the front of the stage, doing 'ballet twirls', hands above her head.

"Don't stop!" said Linda. Jenny laughed, then continued playing, as Linda continued her twirls. "Come on Dianne, Carol, join me!"

With the three other girls pretending to ballerinas, Jenny continued. "Now, where was I?" She paused again, letting the girls twirl some more: it actually looked quite good, something they should include in their show. "Ah, yes, Tchaikovsky... in his day he was a bit like a modern pop artist. There's another song in The Nutcracker... and I think it's time you guys got back to your instruments!... There's another song that a 1960's band took, and made it a bit more up to date... and we've taken their song, and brought it up to the '20s, it's called Nut Rocker....". Once again, they played a good version of the song.

"You know," said Carol, once they finished, "I reckon we should keep the silly dance in for tonight, what do we think?....". after a very quick discussion, they agreed to try it out. "So, when CJD first started out, we often swapped around what instruments we played. But recently I bemoaned the fact that we didn't seem to do that any more, so we thought it might be fun to try something with Nut Rocker. This is still VERY much a 'work in progress', and this is going to be the first time anyone outside of us will have seen this... and I have no doubt it will go completely wrong. Let's take our places...."

Carol went over to the drums, Jenny was on the piano, Dianne was on the Bass, and Linda on the guitar. Jenny started the song, and after everyone had played a simple solo as part of the song, Jenny stopped playing, put the whistle into her mouth, blowing it loudly. "All change!.... All change!!" she said. Jenny started playing again, as Carol got off the drums, which Linda took over. Dianne moved onto the bass. Dianne did a short bass solo, which allowed Jenny let Carol take over the keyboard, and she moved onto the lead guitar. They played another verse, and Jenny blew the whistle again: "All change again... all change!" As Carol continued on the piano, Dianne took over from Linda on the drums, Jenny moved onto the bass. Dianne did a drum solo, letting Carol get onto the guitar.

Linda was stood at the keyboard, as the music stopped for a moment. "I'm not that good at playing piano..." said Linda, and she used one finger to play the 10 notes of the melody, paused, then played it again... which the fans thought was funny. Jenny did a short bass solo, then it went quiet. "Umm, it's Carol, isn't it?" said Dianne.

"Oops, sorry!" and Carol played a solo, as Jenny and Linda swapped back again. Then it was Jenny on the piano again.

Jenny did a short blow of her whistle. "Linda!" she shouted, and Linda did a bass solo. Another bow of the whistle: "Dianne!" she called, letting Dianne do an excellent drum solo. Whistle again: "Carol, your turn!".

A last blow of the whistle: "Everyone!". Finally, Jenny brought the song to an end, and the audience of fans clapped loudly. Ginger walked over to the microphone. "Well, I must say, that was just amazing, although I can see it still needs some work on it. But no, I'd love to see you play that to a full house. So, what you thinking about doing for your encore tonight?"

"Well," said Carol, "I'm thinking that after our more normal version of that, we'll walk off, and maybe you could go on stage, and wind up the fans a bit, then we can come back on again..." Carol continued to explain her idea. "So, are you up for it?"

"Hell yeah, except I don't know all the words!" replied Ginger.

"Well, for now, anyone got a phone Ginger can borrow?". They spent the next few minutes rehearsing the song, which went very well.

"And then you can do a final outro for us, that ok?" suggested Jenny.

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"So, have you guys enjoyed yourselves?" Carol asked the group of fans. A big cheer of 'yeah' went up. "And what about Sam and Emma? Have you enjoyed it?" It was clear that they had.

"Ok, as you've all been so good, how about we play you a couple of our older songs? Any suggestions?" There was a lot of shouting, and they eventually chose two of their songs.

"Well, I reckon that Terry has our sound sorted out for tonight, and we're ready too, so I'm afraid it's time to kick you all out. Thank you all for coming along today, and for behaving yourselves, I think we've all had a fun afternoon too!"

Carol went over and had a quick word with Rosie. "So, come on backstage, and meet the rest of the team, as well as Darkest Knights: I'm sure James will like that."

"I think he's been looking forward to it all day" replied Rosie.

"I can not deny it, I'm a bit of a fan!"


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Re: Story: Carol
« Reply #119 on: 28. July 2023, 20:18:46 PM »
Chapter 83 - On stage at Leicester

Carol was waiting outside just before her sister and husband arrived: the 'taxi' she had ordered for them was actually a limo: Carol didn't mind the extra cost, it was nice to be able to extend a bit of her lifestyle to her sister for a change. When she ordered the Limo, she had instructed the driver to bring them to the stage door at the back of the building, where they would be able to get in without fighting the crowds which were starting to build up at the front of the building.

The limo pulled up, and Rosie and Jim got out. "You said you'd organised a 'taxi', not a fancy limo!" said Rosie with a huge grin on her face.

"I'm guessing you enjoyed the ride: I did ask them to take you the 'long way around' so you had a bit more time to enjoy it!"

"Thank you, Carol, it was actually a rather pleasant surprise!"

"Completely my pleasure, sis! So, we're not on stage for another hour, and as long as you're in your seats a few minutes before we start, it won't be a problem - unless you'd prefer to watch from the side of the stage?"

"No, I want to see you from the front!" replied Rosie as they went inside with Carol, and into the band's dressing room.

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Once again, the girls went onto the stage without an introduction, although by now the audience will have discovered who they were. After the third song, Ginger came on: it took a moment for people to spot who he was, then they all cheered.

"Hello Leicester!" he called out to a lot of cheering: he waited for the crowd to quieten down "So, back on Friday morning, over in Birmingham, we discovered that our support band, 'Useful Tooth', were not going to be able to play that night because two of the band were rather ill. So, we called these guys just before lunch: they were still in London. They pulled all the stops out for us, and by 8pm they were playing on stage in Birmingham. I think we need to give these guys a big 'thank you' for doing that, and for playing last night and tonight too! How about it?". Big cheers.

"So, I'm sure you all know who they are, but ladies, come on over and introduce yourselves!".

After their introductions, they continued playing, doing pretty much the same songs as last night.

"So," said Jenny, standing at her piano, and starting to play the classical Tchaikovsky piece. "This is called the Dance of the Sugar Plum Fairy, I'm sure you'll recognise it, it's from the Nutcracker Suite...." As she started playing, the other girls put down their instruments, and went to the front of the stage, and started to dance like they had at rehearsal: the crowd thought it was great!

"The guy who wrote this was Peter Tchaikovsky, he was the classical music version of Darkest Knights back in the 1800's." There was a big cheer when she said 'Darkest Knights'. "Ok, girls, I think you've proven that none of you are ballerinas....". That was their cue to go back to their instruments, and got them a big cheer from the audience. "Anyway, there's another bit of music he did that got 'modernised' back in the 1960's by a group called 'Bee Bumble and the Stingers'. Well, we updated it again for our last song, this is OUR version of Nut Rocker!". And with that she started to play it. They had decided their 'updated version' that they tried out earlier wasn't yet good enough for a full performance, so it was the same as the previous 2 nights.

As they finished, the crowd applauded and cheered enthusiastically, and the girls bowed and walked off stage. The stage lighting stayed on, indicating that the might come back for an encore....

After a short pause, Ginger walked onto the stage to a big cheer. "I think we need to get those four ladies back on stage to play us another song, what do you think?". There was a louch cheer. "Sorry, I didn't hear you....", followed by another bigger cheer. The four members of CJDL walked back onto the stage. "Can we ask you to play another final song?" asked Ginger.

"We will, but on one condition...." said Jenny.

"What's that?" said Ginger.

"That you sing with us..." said Carol.

"Hmmm... what you gonna play?"

"Go on Jenny, play it for him....". Jenny went over to the piano, and played the first line of 'Great Balls of Fire', a rock & roll song from the 50's". (author's note: it's on YouTube, listen to it if you don't know it! Same goes for Nut Rocker!)

"I know the song, and I'd like to sing with you, but I don't know all the words..." said Ginger.

"Told you he wouldn't..." said Linda. "Callum, can you bring the words on please?" she shouted off-stage. Callum came on stage, and passed an A4 sheet with the words on it to Linda. "Here you go, so, you gonna sing with us?"

"Yeah, ok...!" The girls picked up their instruments, and with Ginger singing with the girls, they sang the song perfectly.


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