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« Reply #135 on: 30. May 2023, 23:34:41 PM »
Part 58.

Dr. Sanders came back with a big smile on her face.  She handed us each a card that had our username and password handwritten on it.  As she did she said “this is exciting!  We can all track our wear time now!  Maybe we can make a competition of it since everybody in the office now has extraoral appliances of our own.  Who ever gets the most hours in each month gets a prize.”  She seemed to be talking to herself as she continued “maybe we could do it for all patients.  That would be fun.  And we are overdue for another Facebook contest.”  She seemed to catch herself and said “anyway, I will think about it over the weekend.  So, Haley and Britt, you both know how it works.  Rob, just log in there every day and put your wear time, your true and honest wear time, round to the nearest half hour.  And yes, you can round up the half hour.  Just don’t round up from 3 hours to 10 hours.”  She found this funny and laughed then continued “it only takes a minute or two, and you can do it on your computer or phone.  And if you forget a day or two you can fill in the time afterwards.  Just don’t fall behind more than a few days.  Then you will be in trouble.  And you don’t want that do you?”  I shook my head back and forth and responded “no ma’am.”  She responded “wonderful!  If you have any questions or issues, let me know.  But you are a smart guy and will figure it out.  So now, let’s get you fixed up Haley!”

Haley nervously sat down in the chair.  I sat on the stool beside her to offer moral support.  Dr. Sanders sat down on her stool and said “so Haley, you still have a tongue thrust.  Because of upper expansion, I can’t use a tongue crib like you had before.  I am sure that breaks your heart.  But, we can use some tongue spurs.  I am going to install a spur, some people call them spikes, on each of your top front six teeth.  They will serve as a reminder if you push your tongue against them.  And I know your tongue is already beat up from the six screws.  And this will beat it up more.  But we have to correct your habit.  So, I am going to go ahead and bond those on now.  And I am going to have the lab fabricate you a rake for your lowers.  I will install spacers for that now too.  And when the rake comes in we can install it as well.  Ok?”  Seeing how sad Haley’s facial expression had become while Dr. Sanders had been explaining this I had already taken her hand.  Dr. Sanders looked expectantly at Haley.  Haley weakly uttered “ok”.  I squeezed her hand, I didn’t know what else to do.

When Dr. Sanders returned she held up one of the spurs.  She explained “so Rob, you may not have seen one of these before.  They look like brackets, but instead of a slot for an archwire they each have these two little spikes on them.  I will bond them on the backside of Haley’s teeth.  They will serve as a reminder for her not to push on her teeth.  Even at night when she sleeps.”

I asked “won’t they hurt her?”  Dr. Sanders replied “not unless she pushes on them with her tongue.  And that is the whole point of them.”  I said “Dr. Sanders, I don’t even care if you hurt me.  But seeing Haley hurting rips me apart.  Is there any other option?”  Dr. Sanders replied “you are sweet.  And if I could stop Haley’s tongue thrusting by installing these in your mouth I would.  But Haley is the one who has to do it.  The myofunctional exercises she is working on will eventually break the habit.  But until then we still need an appliance.  So, until then she will need these spurs and the rake.  She will still be able to do her exercises with them.”

Haley must have noticed the pained look on my face.  She turned her head towards me and said “it will be ok baby.  I will be ok.”  I looked at her and felt horrible.  I knew how much she had hated the tongue crib and how tough it had been on her.  I told her “honey, you are so strong.”  And then, whether Dr. Sanders liked it or not, I bent over and gently kissed her on the lips.  Once I was finished Dr. Sanders said “that was sweet.  And I wish there were a better option.  But there isn’t.  So let me go ahead and gets these and her spacers installed and then we have just one more appliance to fit.”

As I watched Dr. Sanders work in Haley’s mouth I felt horrible.  Sick to my stomach.  Because I knew that this was going to hurt my baby.  And we weren’t even done.  What other appliance could Dr. Sanders possibly fit in her mouth?  I didn’t have to wait long to find out.

Dr. Sanders finished the installation of the spurs and spacers and said “so Haley, we need to intrude your top teeth.  Just like I am doing.  But I don’t want to use TADS if possible.  I have had a really tough time with mine.  And I don’t want you to have to go through the same.  There is another orthodontist that is using a different method successfully.  I would like to try that with you.  It might seem and look like a lot, but I promise you it is much more comfortable than these screws.”  She stood and walked over to the cabinets.

I couldn’t see what she was getting, her body blocked my view.  But finally she had what she wanted and closed the door.  When she turned I immediately identified a shiny facebow and black highpull headgear strap in one hand, and a blue Petit facemask in the other.  She sat down and said “instead of using screws, I am going to use a combination of headgear and a facemask.  The highpull headgear will produce a force that is up and back.  We want the up, we don’t want the back.  So to counter this we will use four elastics instead of two.  Let me get you all fixed up.” 

In just a few minutes she had the facebow fitted and the strap over her head connected to it.  It took her just a few more minutes to attach her facemask.  I noticed that Haley appeared to be on the edge of tears.  Dr. Sanders squeeled “this is sooo cool.  If this works as well as I think it is, I may ditch these screws myself.  Haley, will you be a dear, sit up and smile please?”  Before I knew what was happening Dr. Sanders took a picture of her.

https://dereferer.me/?https://imgur.io/a/Ms6Z6uL

I then realized that Dr. Sanders was planning to plaster this on facebook.  And I was not going to let that happen regardless of the consequences, or what Dr. Sanders had just earlier told me in her office, or whatever that paper I had signed said.  Hurt me? Fine.  Embarrass me?  Fine.  But Haley?  No, not fine.

I said forcefully “Dr. Sanders, DO NOT post that on Facebook.”  She looked up at me sharply.  I couldn’t read her eyes.  But if a fight is what she wanted, then this was the hill I was prepared to die on.



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Re: First Time Home Buyer
« Reply #136 on: 31. May 2023, 06:46:08 AM »
Part 59

Dr. Sanders looked at me and asked “really?”  My heels were dug in.  I responded “absolutely.  Haley has had a hell of an appointment.  She has new tongue spikes, spacers, facemask again but now with twice as many elastics, AND highpull headgear.  I am not objecting to the treatment.  I trust you that it is correct.  I am objecting to you blasting her picture out there five minutes after she got it all.  I don’t know if you can see the hurt in her face.  But I can.  She needs to be taken home and pampered.  She needs to be brought a glass of wine, have her feet rubbed, be given a massage.  She doesn’t need to be put on display.  Especially not right now.  And especially without asking.”

Dr. Sanders stared back at me for an uncomfortable amount of time.  She finally responded “you are right.  So, I think we are done.  All of you need to get 14 hours in with the protraction gear.  Haley, just wear the headgear at night while you sleep and an hour or two at home when it is convenient.  Let’s say eight hours a day with it, always worn in conjunction with your facemask.”  Dr. Sanders looked at Britt and asked “Britt, would you finish up organizing everything for Monday please?”  She then looked at me and Haley and asked “would you two follow me to my office please?”  I took Haley’s hand as we followed along behind her.  For the second time today I felt like I was being called to the principal’s office.  Only this time I feared I had gotten Haley in trouble as well.

We entered Dr. Sanders office and she shut the door behind us.  We did not sit.  As soon as the door closed I said “Dr. Sanders, you can be mad at me for what happened out there.  You can yell and scream at me.  But I am going to protect her, cover her up, try to be her shield.  If you are mad, be mad at me.  But please do not take it out on her.”  Dr. Sanders looked at me and asked “you really feel that way?”  I responded “absolutely”.  She said “you really love her don’t you?”  I answered “with all my heart.”

Dr. Sanders went behind her desk and pulled open a drawer.  I couldn’t see what she was doing, but she pulled something out and walked up to me.  She handed me a card and said “here is a gift card to Aria Day Spa.  They are wonderful.  Take this as a token of apology from me.  And give it to Haley as a token of your love for her.” 

I was caught off guard, I had been preparing myself to receive a tongue lashing.  I was at a loss for words, but I finally said “thank you.”  Dr. Sanders said “you are very welcome.  I called you back her not because either of you are in trouble.  I asked you back here to give you that.  And to apologize.  I was out of line out there.  Right after giving Rob my ‘professional’ speech I pull that stunt.  Now, I am upset.  But once again, I am upset at myself.  Haley, I apologize for that.  It was thoughtless of me.  I was excited, but that is no excuse.  Rob, I apologize for putting you in a position where you felt you had to protect her.  But I will say it was very commendable and selfless of you.  Again, both of you, please accept my sincere and heartfelt apology.”

Haley and I both did.  She smiled and said “I won’t promise that I won’t ever ask you to be the Facebook stars of City Orthodontics.  But I do promise I will always ask from now on.  By the way Rob, do you realize that post with the picture of you and Haley still has the most likes of any post of ours?  Ever.”

Before I could answer she stuck her hand out and said “so; and I can’t believe I am having to say this again in the span of two hours; are we still friends?”  I laughed and said “you are hard on the nerves Dr. Sanders, but yes, of course.”  I reached out and shook her hand.  As I did she said “I promise, I have never had a day like this in my office.”  I answered “I promise I have never had a day like this in ANY office.”  Dr. Sanders broke off the handshake when she laughed.  She said “touche.  Rob, you have really got me on tilt today.”

Haley stepped over beside me.  She wrapped her arm around my waist and lay her head on my shoulder.  I could feel her facebow on my bicep.  She said “Dr. Shandersh, it ish undershtandable, he hash had me on tilt since the night we met.”  I knew at that moment it is not physically possible for a heart to spontaneously burst from one’s chest, or else mine would have at that moment.  She then lifted her head up and said “ouch.  And where did thish lishp come from?”

Dr. Sanders said “it is those tongue spurs.  See?  You are still tongue thrusting and you didn’t even realize it.  This weekend, practice by reading out loud.  But in the meantime, you two go.  Britt and I can finish up.”  She looked at me and said “I believe you owe the lady a glass of wine, a foot rub, and a massage”.  I leaned over and kissed Haley on the top of her head.  With her new facebow even her cheeks were off limits now.  I turned back towards Dr. Sanders and said “I owe her so much more than that.  But that is where I will start.”

As we walked down the hall, Dr. Sanders started singing the old Sonny James song ‘Young Love’. I stopped and turned my head towards her.  She stopped singing and gave me a big metallic smile, using her hand to motion us along.  I looked over at Haley and saw despite everything her poor mouth had just endured, she had a smile on her face.

At the door I stopped her.  I asked “do you want to take that off?”  She said “no, I want to leave my car here.  It will be fine.  And I want you to take me home right now.  And there, I want to wear this for you.  This and nothing else.  I think you will know what to do from there.”


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Re: First Time Home Buyer
« Reply #137 on: 31. May 2023, 18:26:13 PM »
I will go ahead and apologize for any typos or grammatical errors in the last few chapters, and the next couple.  Thousand mile road trips are great for thinking.  And singing to the radio.  But they aren’t as good for actually typing and editing a story on a phone.

Part 60

The next morning found the two of us on her couch.  I had Sportscenter on, but to be honest most of my attention was on the head that was laying in my lap.  The beautiful head wearing highpull headgear and a Petit facemask.  Except for a brief break when she had brushed and flossed that morning, she had been wearing it since her appointment the previous day.  I had asked her several times if it hurt.  She said it did not, it was just a shock to see.  Now the tongue spurs where a different matter.  She said they did bother her.  Especially when she spoke.  So she was being even quieter than usual.  And she said they would make it an even bigger challenge to eat, something neither of us had even tried since our appointments due to our aching mouths.

Haley’s mouth wasn’t the only one that was hurting.  I was too.  Without having had spacers, my new lower bands were spacing my teeth out which was not pleasant.  In addition to that, the inside of my cheeks were struggling to come to terms with the big metal stops on them, as well as the new elbows on my upper molars.  And several times already I had accidentally bitten down and hit the elbows on the stops.  This was agony for my already sore teeth.  In addition, when my mouth was closed, as it usually was, the appliance held my lower jaw forward in what felt like an unnatural position.  It didn’t really hurt, but it felt like the muscles in my face and jaw were straining as they became acclimated to their new home.

But that wasn’t all.  I had been a good boy and had been wearing my facemask since the night before.  Haley had actually put it on me.  I had been powerless to stop her.  I didn’t understand why, but seeing me in it did something for her.  So it was almost a fair trade off for the discomfort it was now causing me.  So while my eyes may have been on the TV, my attention was on my mouth and the beautiful woman laying in my lap looking at her phone.

Sportscenter was on their number six play of the day when I was startled by Haley shrieking “OH MY GOSH!”.  Concerned, I looked down at her and asked “what is it baby!”  She shifted her head so she was looking at me and said “Lauren got engaged last night!”  Before I could respond she said “I hope they have a big wedding!  And they invite us.  I love weddings.  They are SO romantic.”  She reached up and ran her finger along my cheek.  She asked “speaking of romantic, are you in the mood?”  Looking down into her joyful face I answered “I am always in the mood with you.”

Since it appeared that both of us were going to be restricted to a liquid day for a few days, instead of dinner I took Haley to a movie that evening.  Before they dimmed the lights, Haley excused herself to go to the ladies room.  To pass time while she was gone, I pulled out my phone. I was looking at Lauren’s facebook post where she had announced her engagement.  I posted “Congratulations Lauren!  I am so happy for the both of you!”  After posting I scrolled through the comments.  I came to one from Haley posted earlier in the day.  It said “I am SO happy for you!  And SO jealous”. She had ended it with an alternating line of smiley face and heart emojis. 

That crystalized a thought that had already run through my mind several times.  I was going to ask Haley to marry me.  I just had to figure out how.  I was thinking about different scenarios when I was jostled back to reality.  As Haley sat back down beside me she said “you look losht in thought.  What ‘ya thinkin ‘bout?”.  I turned and answered honestly “I was thinking about you.”  She layed her head on my shoulder and cooed “awww.”  She reached over and started caressing my arm, cocking her face towards me.  I took her invitation and leaned over and kissed her.  I could sense eyes boring into the back of my head.  I finished the kiss and turned my head to find the older couple behind us both staring at us intently.  I smiled sheepishly and mouthed “sorry.”

The lights dimmed, the previews played, and then the movie started.  It was a corny romantic comedy.  It was the type of movie I would never have watched by myself.  But it was perfect for a movie date night.  As we sat there holding on to one another I wanted to kiss Haley more.  But I didn’t want to offend those around us.  I discreetly turned my head to look behind me.  To my surprise I saw the couple that was staring earlier was now oblivious to the world.  Their lips were locked together, his hand wrapped behind her head.  I took this as a sign and leaned in towards Haley.

We walked out of the theater hand in hand.  If anyone had asked us how the movie was, we would have been unable to honestly tell them.  We had been too busy working on our own real life romantic comedy.  Before helping Haley into my truck I kissed her and said “I love you.”  I so wanted to add “and will you marry me.”  But I didn’t.  I wanted everything to be perfect.  And while I personally thought the night WAS perfect, I still needed a ring.  And some advice and help.  I had recruited Leslie Sanders’ help to surprise Haley with my treatment.  I was now going to recruit her husband Pete to help me with this surprise, the biggest of my life.


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« Reply #138 on: 31. May 2023, 20:24:49 PM »
Part 61

The next week went smoothly until Thursday.  While we each still had our own separate places, Haley and I were effectively living together.  We just split our time between my place and hers.  After a few days we were able to eat, though our diet was still largely limited to softer foods.  It was with this in mind that I had chosen an Italian restaurant for dinner.  We were about half way through our main course when Haley suddenly exclaimed “OH!” and covered her mouth with her hand.  I looked up from my plate and asked “what is it kitten?”  She said “something just popped in my mouth.  I hope I didn’t break anything.”  I slid over in the seat beside her and said “let me take a look.”  As soon as she opened her mouth I realized what had popped.  I hugged her and said “congratulations!”  Confused she asked “why?”  I smiled at her and said “you have the cutest little gap between your two front teeth!  You only have to turn your expander once a day now!”  She pulled a compact out of her purse and examined her smile.  She said “wow, it did happen.  Oh gosh.  How big is it going to get?”  I looked at her and said “I don’t care, because I love you AND your gap more than words can describe.”

Over the next ten days her gap got progressively wider.  I thought it was the most adorable thing I had ever seen.  She hated it and felt mortified by it.  But my palate remained stubborn.  The following Friday evening Haley and I were in the bathroom together.  I had just completed the turn of her expander.  I turned towards her, tilted my head back and opened wide.  Haley suddenly wrapped me in a hug and said “BABY!  You have a little gap of your own!”  I leaned into the mirror smiling.  And I saw an almost imperceptible gap between my top two front teeth.  As I turned she said “yay!  I only have to inflict one turn on you.”  I responded “just to make sure though, please go ahead and do two.”  She asked “are you sure?”  I said “yes.  And I will come clean with you.  I have already asked Dr. Sanders about it.  But I am going to keep doing two.  I am jealous of your sexy gap and want to catch up.”  She said “baby, you don’t have to do that.”  I smiled at her and said “I know.  But I want to.”  She hugged me and said “you are the best boyfriend.”

What Haley didn’t realize when she said that last bit is that, if my plan worked, she would only be calling me her boyfriend for another month or so.  Haley didn’t realize that the office retreat that Dr. Sanders had invited everyone on earlier in the week was going to be more than just a retreat, at least for the two of us.

It had actually been Pete Sanders’ idea, and his and Leslie’s planning, that would be responsible for it.  I had talked with him at length about it soon after the movie date.  He had at first cautioned me against jumping into anything too quickly.  I told him I was scared to death.  But that I had never felt more sure about anything in my life.  Satisfied that I was sure, he had set the wheels in motion.

A month later, all the gals from Dr. Sanders’ office and their significant others were lined up in the first row right behind the first base dugout.  It was the final Saturday home game for the Braves.  I was seated in the first seat, along the aisle.  Beside me was Haley and beside her was Pete.  As we approached the seventh inning stretch Pete yelled over at me “hey, let’s go get a beer.”  He climbed over Haley and we headed up the aisle.  After we got out of sight he stopped and said “it’s gonna work”.  I said “I sure hope so.”  I took a gulp and slipped back down the concrete steps.

When I got there Haley had the back of her head towards me looking at the Jumbotron screen like the PA had asked everyone to do.  When the screen cut to a closeup view of her, her face took on a startled, confused look until the camera zoomed out to show me kneeling behind her holding up a ring.  She quickly turned throwing her hands up over her mouth.

I looked her in the eyes and said “Haley, I have loved you since the minute I saw you.  I want to spend the rest of my life with you.  Will you marry me?”  She burst into tears and launched herself against me.  She exclaimed “YES!  YES!  Of course I will”.  The crowd cheered.

I held her while she cried, then I lifted her head and kissed her passionately. Once done I turned us both around so we were facing the camera.  They zoomed in on us.  Haley was still crying, but they were tears of joy.  On each of our faces was a huge smile.  Some in the crowd might have wondered about the huge matching gap toothed smiles they saw.  But that didn’t matter.  Because up on the screen, the image of the two of us had been replaced with a message.  It read simply “SHE SAID YES!”

The End.

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Re: First Time Home Buyer
« Reply #139 on: 31. May 2023, 20:53:55 PM »
Well done!  I'll miss these characters.

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« Reply #140 on: 31. May 2023, 21:17:29 PM »
There may be a sequel.  I mean, what about the wedding?

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« Reply #141 on: 01. June 2023, 11:57:41 AM »
Congratulations for this amazing story!
There must be sequel ;)

As you told at beginning that it is partially based on true events i wonder how much % of this happened real? :)



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« Reply #142 on: 01. June 2023, 13:42:21 PM »
Nicely done. Nobody can claim any skimping on appliances here - and nice to see weaving in some newer treatment methods along with the traditional!

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« Reply #143 on: 02. June 2023, 12:47:20 PM »
Great story.  I think this is one that I will go through again soon to get it all at once.

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« Reply #144 on: 02. June 2023, 17:27:28 PM »
Loved the story. I really hope for a sequel where Rob, Haley, and Britt get braces and maybe Britt can convince her new beau to get treatment as well.

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« Reply #145 on: 04. June 2023, 19:40:26 PM »
There may be a sequel.  I mean, what about the wedding?

I reckon they should bump into "The Story Wanderer"....

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« Reply #146 on: 05. April 2024, 05:26:15 AM »
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« Reply #147 on: 08. April 2024, 07:33:36 AM »
Wow, i really enjoyed this story. I really liked the emphasis on the palatal expander