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Offline elio23145

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Re: new braces story
« Reply #15 on: 19. July 2020, 19:22:21 PM »
thank you, cool story!
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Offline Taxy

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Re: new braces story
« Reply #16 on: 08. August 2020, 18:26:45 PM »
This story is very interesting but lacks structure. There should be more paragraph breaks to help make it more readable.
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Offline bmac26

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Re: new braces story
« Reply #17 on: 17. August 2020, 05:55:22 AM »
Great story!
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Offline TimeandBrace

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Re: new braces story
« Reply #18 on: 30. October 2020, 09:00:18 AM »
Quote from: Taxy on 08. August 2020, 18:26:45 PM
This story is very interesting but lacks structure. There should be more paragraph breaks to help make it more readable.

Agreed, brilliant idea, but paragraph breaks would help.
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Offline anton08

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Re: new braces story
« Reply #19 on: 04. March 2023, 13:30:07 PM »
It is a pity that this is a dead end.
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