A really great story. I suppose all good things have to come to an end but the method of writing and the perfect amount of detail meant that this was the first post I headed to whenever I came to the forum.
I particularly liked the viewpoint from which it was written. I am certainly no English writing expert but I have to say that I am not keen on reading some other stories which are written in a strange sort of present tense (I am sure there is a name for it..) when people say things like 'he goes to the orthodontist and gets an impression taken" etc.
Anyway, Sparky, well done for writing in such a way that pleases so many people.
I wonder what can be next?
Ps, headgear doesnt do that much for me, its removables, getting fakes etc all the way, so lets hope for more !
