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Story: Fight Extended Version
« on: 24. January 2025, 14:06:46 PM »
I have written more chapters of the story Fight and I want to share them with you.
I also fixed some errors in this version. I will rerelease the first three chapters here and the first new chapter will be chapter 4.

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« Reply #1 on: 24. January 2025, 14:08:33 PM »
1. Talking to my son
Today is the day I have to talk to my son. I cannot put it off any longer. I already know that this will be a difficult task because he usually does what he wants to do. This is clearly something he inherited from my wife.

My wife and I are no longer living together, but we are not yet divorced. We had a big fight before we decided to live separately. Our children had to decide which parent they wanted to live with. Our daughter Sandrine went to live with my wife. And Marc decided to stay with me.

"Marc, come down, we need to talk," I call from the stairs of our house. Like most thirteen-year-old kids, he likes to play games on his computer. Mostly shooters, I guess, from the sounds I hear coming from his room. Now that there are just the two of us, the house is too big for us, but I like it and don't want to move.

To my surprise, I hear him coming down the stairs. He does so by making a lot of noise. This is his way of telling me that he doesn't want to come but has decided to obey my command. This is going to be a tough talk and I hope it goes well.

He sits down next to me on the couch and looks right at me with an annoyed look on his face. I know he wants to play games and not talk to his father. But I have to start, "Marc, your sister already has braces and I think it is time for you to see an orthodontist.”

He cuts me off, "No, I don't want braces." This is exactly the reaction I was expecting. I tell him, "This is just a consultation and the orthodontist will decide if you need braces." He yells at me, "I told you, I do not want braces. Frank, can I go now?"

He reminds me of his mother. Discussions with her went the same way. Either she would agree right away or she would refuse to talk about it at all. And he called me Frank. When he is in a good mood, he calls me Dad. When he uses my name Frank, it is not a good sign.

I cannot give up so quickly, but I know that I have a minimal amount of time. I ask him, "Give me five minutes and then you can go play computer games." He looks angry, but to my surprise he says, "OK, you have five minutes."

I know I do not need five minutes, but I need him to listen for more than two sentences. I have to choose my words carefully. Otherwise, I will lose this discussion and I do not want to drag him to the orthodontist. Or maybe I have already lost.

I tell him, "You know, most kids have braces these days. It is normal to have them now. There is nothing to be afraid of. The braces have improved dramatically, too. They are not as bulky as they were when I was a kid. They also straighten teeth faster and with better results." He just looks at me and says nothing.

"Braces can prevent all kinds of problems for you in the future. And they are fully covered by our insurance. This is a great opportunity for you. Straight teeth are also easier to clean. My parents couldn't afford braces for me, and our insurance didn't cover them. Luckily, I never needed them," I tell him.

He says to me, "Frank, you were lucky that your insurance did not cover them. I interrupt him, "I didn't need them or I would have been very happy to get them and get my teeth straightened. I might even have persuaded my parents to pay for them." I can tell he is trying to figure out how to convince me not to take him to the orthodontist.

"Easy for you to say, I doubt you would have liked them," he says. I reply, "Braces are not a big deal these days. I would be happy to wear one of these modern braces if I needed them." He says, "Your five minutes are up," and leaves.

Like his mother, it is better to leave him alone when he is angry. Actually, this discussion went really well, considering our low standards and the fact that he is in puberty. I guess I have to keep trying.

I have not told him, but I have already made an appointment for him with the orthodontist in four weeks. This will give me some time to convince him to go to the consultation. And I have to convince him because his mother is expecting me and I do not want to end up in a fight with her as usual. She knows he is hard to convince, so she has delegated it to me.

For the next three weeks, we talk about how he needs to see an orthodontist and have his bite checked. Sometimes we can talk calmly and he listens to my arguments. And sometimes we end up arguing and exchanging loud words. It is an exhausting battle between him and me.

My arguments are always the same. The braces are so comfortable and easy to wear now. I would like to wear them if I were him and my teeth needed straightening. And that it is just a consultation and he should listen to the doctor and do what he suggests.

My strategy so far has not paid off. So I have to try a new tactic. I talk about girls. As far as I know, he is not interested in girls yet, but I could be wrong. I tell him that girls really prefer boys with straight teeth and that his teeth would look so good after the treatment.

When I mention the girls, his look changes. He finally thinks about getting braces. I am sure he will need them, but I will let the doctor tell him. Maybe he is more interested in girls than I thought. It could be because his attitude has changed dramatically. He looks like he wants to listen to me now.

"Marc, this is just a consultation. Please come with me," I tell him for the thousandth time. But this time he says, "Okay, one consultation and then we will never talk about braces again." Hearing this makes me very happy, but I have to hide my happiness from him. Besides, his appointment is in a few days and I was running out of time. It would have been hard to tell the orthodontist that my son does not want to come.

"If the doctor doesn't think you need it, I'll never bother you again. But if the doctor thinks you need them, then you must get them. They are worth it and you will not regret having your teeth fixed." To my surprise, he says, "Okay, we have a deal."

He finally agreed to the consultation. Just in time. I really hope that he will keep his promise and get the braces as suggested by the doctor. One small problem is that having his consultation so soon might look really suspicious to him. I have to sound really surprised when I tell him that his consultation is in less than a week.

"Okay, I will call the orthodontist tomorrow and make an appointment for you. I am sure you will be so happy with your teeth when you are done. It is good that you want to listen to your orthodontist. If I were you, I would definitely do what he suggests," I assure him.

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« Reply #2 on: 24. January 2025, 14:10:35 PM »
2. Consultation
Marc was very surprised when he found out that his appointment is the following Friday. I told him that the office had a cancellation due to some patients being sick. He wasn't too happy about his appointment being so early, but a deal is a deal.

We both walk into Johnson's Orthodontics in the center of town. They are the only orthodontists in town, so it was an obvious choice. The office is in a newly renovated building and looks inviting. Definitely a good choice for Marc. And according to other parents, the staff and doctor are also very friendly.

The receptionist introduces herself as Clara. Then she says, "It's good that you are here. We have so many cancellations. There must be a flu pandemic or something." Sounds promising to hear that they are not busy today, so they have plenty of time to check Marc's teeth. And it makes my story better because I told him that he has this early appointment because of a cancellation.

Marc is very quiet today and does not say a word as Clara leads us into a room with an X-ray machine. First she takes some pictures of him from different angles. Then it is his turn in the x-ray machine. He has to bite into a stick without moving. A part of the machine goes around his head and takes the X-ray. Of course, he is given radiation protection for the rest of his body.

Then it is time for the impressions. When Marc hears this, he moans, "Oh! This is disgusting, my friend Martin told me so." But to my surprise, he opens his mouth as soon as Clara arrives with the first impression tray for his upper jaw. I can tell by his look that this is not a good experience.

Clara continues with the lower jaw impressions and Marc has this disgusted look on his face. From what I can see, I can understand why he does not like having impressions done. When Clara is finished, she tells us that we can go straight to the treatment room and see Dr. Johnson. The doctor is expecting us because of the many cancellations.

Dr. Johnson greets us and asks Marc to sit down. She first examines Marc's teeth and makes some notes on her computer. She does this very carefully and I can tell that this is much easier for Marc than taking impressions. The doctor looks from the x-ray to Marc's teeth and back. I suspect that in her mind she is already preparing a treatment plan for him. And if she suggests braces, then Marc has no way out of our deal.

Then she says, "Marc cleans his teeth very well and his teeth are extremely healthy. He does not have a single cavity. I would be happy if all my patients were as good at brushing their teeth." I already know that he has good dental health and has been looking after his teeth since he was a little boy. What I want to know is what kind of braces he needs and how long he will need them.

Clara comes in and hands Dr. Johnson a dental model. They must be Marc's teeth. Then she says, "Two more cancellations, Meyers and Rogers. They also have the flu." Dr. Johnson is not happy to hear this news and Clara does not look happy either.

Then Dr. Johnson turns to Marc and says, "And I have some good news for you, you do not need braces. Your bite is excellent and your teeth are almost perfectly straight. I am sorry if you wanted braces, you know some kids do these days. But no braces for you."

Then she looks at me and says, "He should come back for a second consultation when his wisdom teeth come in. But I don't think we need to worry about that." When I hear this, I am confused. I have always been convinced that both of my children need braces. And now I learn that Marc has almost perfect teeth. He must have inherited them from me.

I look in Marc's direction, not knowing what to say, and then he says something surprising, "Maybe you should check my dad's teeth. I am sure he needs braces." The doctor says, "Sure, we have plenty of time this morning. Please, Mr. Turner, have a seat if you want."

I do not know why I do this, but Marc and I change places. Marc looks extremely happy and I haven't seen him so happy in a long time. I do not feel happy at all. Clara watches us from the back of the room and smiles at my son for some reason.

Dr. Johnson tells me to open my mouth. I have to open and close my mouth. It takes her a while to finish the examination. Sitting in that chair with my son watching me is not a pleasant experience. I even feel a little humiliated. But I am sure that the doctor will tell me that I do not need braces and that will hopefully make the devilish look on my son's face disappear.

The doctor tells me to follow Clara to the X-ray room. My son follows us, still happy about his little prank. As before, Clara takes photos and X-rays of me. And then I get the impressions. Having this tray in my mouth and fighting my gag reflex all the time is no fun.

We are back in the treatment room with Dr. Johnson. She tells me to sit down, "Mr. Turner, like your son, you have healthy teeth. But I have to tell you, your son is right. You should definitely consider getting braces. The way you bite, your TMJ will be giving you headaches soon. Or do you already have them?"

How does she know about my headaches? I am completely overwhelmed and can barely speak, "Sometimes". The doctor continues, "From what I can see, this will soon increase. It is good that you are here today. You should start treatment as soon as possible."

I cannot believe what the doctor says and I am shocked by what my son says, "Dad, maybe you can start today. They have a lot of cancellations." The doctor looks in my direction and says, "Your son is right. We have time for you now. We are usually very busy, but today is an exception."

I reply, "I am not prepared for this and it is a big decision to make." Again my son starts, "Dad, you told me how easy braces are these days and that you would get braces if you were in my position. So stick to your guns and do what the doctor says." I cannot believe what this bastard is saying. He can't be my son.

The truth begins to sink in and I realize that maybe he is right. I have always told him how easy it is to have modern braces. I decide to ask the doctor, "So what kind of treatment do you suggest?"

"The treatment I recommend is quite simple. Basically, you will get fixed upper and lower braces for about two years. At some point during your treatment, we will use rubber bands to correct some problems in your bite. I am sure this will eliminate your headaches and you will have straight teeth as a bonus," she tells me.

I must be a complete idiot, but I say to her, "OK, let's start the treatment today. My son has to fight not to burst out laughing. This is the worst decision of my life and it makes my son happy.

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« Reply #3 on: 24. January 2025, 14:11:11 PM »
3. Chair time
"Please go to the sink with Clara and she will give you everything you need to brush your teeth. Your teeth need to be extra clean before we can start this procedure. Meanwhile, I will prepare everything for you. You are doing the right thing," the doctor says.

Clara leads us to a sink at the other end of the room and hands me a toothbrush. Marc, for some reason I do not understand, gets another toothbrush, but he takes it with a look of thriumph on his face. We brush our teeth together. It will be my last time without braces for a long time, and Marc knows it.

Then Clara leads me to the chair. Soon I am fitted with a bib. Then she inserts a large plastic device into my mouth. She tells me it is a lip spreader and it will be used to keep my lips away from my teeth. There is also a suction device and it is used to suck out the saliva. The device is only temporary, but I immediately dislike it.

The procedure continues and a liquid is applied to the surface of my teeth on both the upper and lower jaw. According to Clara, this is to protect the surface of my teeth from the bonding glue and to prevent decay. The liquid tastes like peppermint and I do not like the taste.

She gives the liquid some time to dry and then applies another liquid to my teeth. This time it is an adhesive that will bond the brackets to my teeth. She then uses a UV light to activate the glue. So far the procedure is comfortable, except for the lip spreader and the constant sound of the suction machine.

Marc looks in my direction and is a very happy camper. I wonder what he will tell his friends about this day. The day he pranked his dad into getting braces while avoiding getting braces himself. The day he saw his dad get impressions and real braces. He must be so proud of himself.

Then it hits me hard. I haven't told anyone that I'm getting braces. What will my co-workers think? What will my daughter think? And what will my wife think? I am sure I will be the joke of the month. I am so sorry that I took Marc to the orthodontist. It backfired on me.

I can tell that Clara and Dr. Johnson can feel the panic rising in me. They take a short break from the procedure. And I can tell that Marc can also see the panic and he likes what he sees.

It is only a short break they gave me. It is now Dr. Johnson's turn to continue the procedure. She uses pliers and puts the metal brackets on my teeth. When all the brackets are on my teeth, she checks the position and adjusts them slightly. After a while she is satisfied with them.

Now it is Clara's turn again, using the UV light to fix her in place. Meanwhile, Dr. Johnson has a wire in her hand. She tells me, "This is called an archwire and it will do most of the work in your mouth. We will change the wire from time to time during your treatment. We can use different colored ligatures to attach it to your brackets. What color would you like for your braces?" Clara shows me some colors on a color chart.

Marc is faster than me, "dark blue". Clara says: "Good choice Marc". And I think he's right, "OK, let's go with dark blue.“ Unfortunately, I will have plenty of time to choose colors for my braces in the next two years.

Dr. Johnson then tries the archwire in my mouth. She cuts it to the right size and then uses the blue ligatures to secure it in my braces. My braces, those two words are really scary. This morning I thought I would never have braces and now, just a few hours later, I am wearing them. This is a dramatic change in my life.

Then Dr. Johnson says, "We're done for today. Clara will show you how to brush your teeth and please come back in four weeks for your first adjustment. Depending on your progress, we may start with rubber bands."

We are back at the sink. Clara is holding a model of a tooth. There are brackets attached to the model. She shows me how to use a toothbrush to clean the surface of the tooth and the brackets. Then she tells me to brush my teeth and braces.

I look in the mirror at the sink and cannot believe what I see. There are metal brackets on all my teeth and a wire running through them. Little blue ligatures hold the wires in place. I cannot believe that I have braces.

Brushing my teeth is easy. The only thing I have to worry about is pressure. I have to put as little pressure as possible on my braces. Still, the words "my braces" are unbelievable. Am I really standing here brushing my teeth with braces? Is this some kind of weird dream? Unfortunately not, it is me and I have braces, my braces.

Marc does not look as happy as he did a few minutes ago. Maybe he is thinking about the punishment he will get when we get home. But he will get none. It is my fault. I wanted braces for him because I thought he needed them, and now I have them because I need them. So there is no need to punish him.

Before Marc and I leave the office, Clara hands me a goodie bag and a card with my next appointment. Inside the bag I find a travel toothbrush, some toothpaste and something to floss my teeth with.

Marc and I take the car home. Neither of us speaks the whole way. From time to time I run my tongue over the surface of my braces. It all feels so new and unsettling. At home, Marc excuses himself to his room. He obviously wants to avoid a confrontation with me.

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« Reply #4 on: 24. January 2025, 16:47:59 PM »
I remember this story; I'm happy to seen it continue.
Have fun writing!

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« Reply #5 on: 24. January 2025, 17:32:12 PM »
4. Daughter and Wife
It was almost time for dinner when we arrived home. I decide to prepare a meal for us. First, because I haven't eaten much today and I'm quite hungry. And second, because I want to distract myself from the braces. The obvious choice is pasta with some vegetable soup. The distracting part did not work for me. I kept thinking about my braces while I was cooking.

Marc is hungry too, so he joins me for dinner. This is my first time eating with braces and I hope I can handle it. Eating with braces is surprisingly easy, but of course I am slower than usual. It also helps that I have chosen a very soft meal for my first time eating with braces. Marc watches me closely as I eat with my braces, but does not say a word. Fortunately, I have no pain from the braces except for some minor discomfort. Let's hope it stays that way for the entire treatment.

After dinner I decide to go to the bathroom and brush my teeth. OK, it is not a real decision, it is more of a need to brush my teeth. I have never locked the bathroom door while brushing my teeth, so I decide not to do that today. So if I locked the door, it would look like I have something to hide. If he sees that the braces bother me, it would add to the fun he already has seeing me with braces.

Marc decides to brush his teeth as well and follows me into the bathroom. I brush my teeth as Clara taught me. Marc brushes his teeth too, but he spends most of his time watching me clean my braces. And it was good for me to brush my teeth. There was a lot of pasta left in my braces. I am sure that brushing my teeth after every meal is now unavoidable. I have so many things to think about that I did not think about this morning. This morning I was just happy that Marc followed me to his orthodontist appointment. And for this morning it had been his orthodontist's appointment and not mine.

I decide to clean the house and go to bed early. And in a moment when Marc is not watching me, I take a painkiller, just in case. It is easy to do this in secret, because he is in his room playing on the computer again. Then something comes to my mind. This weekend is "daddy's weekend" for my daughter Sandrine. My wife will bring her tomorrow morning and she will spend the weekend with me. So it is not possible to stay in the hideout this weekend. And my daughter and my wife will see me with my braces.

My first night with braces went well. I managed to sleep through, except for a short break to pee. The next morning I get up early because my wife and Sandrine are coming. I still wonder what they will think of my braces. Sandrine might like them because we can be braces buddies. And I have no idea what my wife will think. She has the most positive attitude towards braces as she put braces on our daughter and wanted Marc to join the braces wearers club. We never talked about braces during our marriage, I do not even know if she had braces in the past.

The door rings and I answer it. It is my wife and my daughter, Sandrine. Marc has joined us. As usual, my wife is in a hurry and greets me as she is about to leave. But then she stops, "What's that on your teeth?" I reply, "I have braces for my TMJ. Marc's orthodontist suggested them." Marc then says, "Mom, we went to the orthodontist yesterday and it turned out that I do not need braces, but Dad does. And the best part is that they had so many cancellations that he was able to start his treatment immediately. I am so happy for him and they will help him with his headaches."

Suddenly, I can feel my wife's anger rising. She yells at me, "This can't be true. It was your job to put him in braces. And what have you done, you fucking idiot? You got braces yourself. You cannot even do a simple job, you are a pathetic loser. Can't you do anything right? And how do you even look at all? An adult with braces, no one will take you seriously. Maybe it does not matter because no one takes you seriously anyway."

I cut her off, "Please not in front of the kids.” But she is in a rage, "There is one job and I hope you can do it right. Sandrine has to wear her headgear at least twelve hours a day. Make sure she does. And I will know if you fail. There is a tracking device in her headgear and her orthodontist can monitor her wear time. So I will know if you screw this up."

She then closes the door with a loud bang, leaving me alone with the two kids. My son has this knowing look on his face. He finally knows who is behind the effort to get him braces. Sandrine just smiles at me and shows me her metal braces. I smile back and she can spot my braces as well. I can also see that she is a little shocked by her mother's outburst.

When I am alone with her, I ask her, "Can you do me a favor? Please wear your headgear as prescribed. I do not want to order you around.” To my surprise, she says, "Sure, Dad. There is nothing to worry about." And she opens her bag and takes out the headgear. She puts the headgear on in no time and shows it to me. I have never seen a headgear up close and I think it is not easy for her to wear it.

"Dad, it is so cool that you have braces now. They look good on you and I hope they will help with your problems. And we are braces buddies now," she excitedly says. I tell her, "I'm glad you like them. You know, I will have them for two years and it is good to know that you do not mind them on me."

I ask her, "Is there really a tracking device in your headgear? I have never heard of that." She looks at me with a sad face, "Yes, the orthodontist showed it to me. And I can tell you, it is hard to get twelve hours a day and I do not want to wear it to school". I nod, "I think you are very brave to wear this device. I am proud of you."

She says, "Thanks, Dad, and don't worry, I'll wear the headgear.” She pauses for a moment, "Dad, should we get the same color for our braces?" I reply, "Tell me when you get your color changed and I will get the same color. But maybe not the pink you are wearing now." She smiles, "I will find a good color for both of us and maybe next time you can choose the color if you want." Having the same color for our braces is actually a good idea to strengthen the bond between me and my daughter.

She spents most of Saturday with her brother Marc. They like each other very much and it is a shame that they cannot live together because of my separation from their mother. And she wears her headgear most of the time, except for dinner and a short trip into town. She will easily meet her wear time and I know she is doing this for me.

My first full day with braces is not as pleasant as yesterday. The braces have started to work and I am in pain. My whole mouth is sore and I have already taken three painkillers. I cannot take any more without risking an overdose. But I have to play cool in front of Marc. I told him that modern braces are no big deal and I do not want to show any weakness to him.

I also overheard a conversation between Sandrine and Marc. It turns out that my daughter is very supportive of my decision to get braces. She thinks it is good that I am taking care of my health. And neither of them like the way my wife treated me this morning. Even Marc does not like her tone. But I still think he pranked me into getting braces and is proud of it.

On Sunday, I take my kids to a water park. Sandrine has been absolutely fantastic with her headgear for this weekend. She even wears it on our trip to the water park. I think it is her way of telling me how she feels about her mother yelling at me and calling me a pathetic loser.

The trip to the water park is pretty uneventful for me. I spend most of the day in one of the hot pools while the kids enjoy the water slides. It is also the first time for me to wear braces in public and I have to admit that no one cares about them. I am curious if most of them even noticed them.

Back in the car, Sandrine immediately puts on her headgear. On the way home, I stop at my wife's house and drop Sandrine off. This time, my wife does not say a word to me. Instead, she gives me the angriest look I have ever seen. Lucky for me, the drop off is not very long and Marc and I can go home.

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« Reply #6 on: 24. January 2025, 21:20:31 PM »
It's always nice to see a story being added to.

I am definitely looking forward to more chapters and will add them to TheArchive.

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« Reply #7 on: 25. January 2025, 20:35:22 PM »
I remember this story; I'm happy to seen it continue.
Have fun writing!

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I had the feeling that this story is complete and uncomplete at the same time. So this version is for the part of me, that thinks it is uncomplete.

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« Reply #8 on: 25. January 2025, 20:36:24 PM »
5. First week
Today is the day. It is my first day at work with my new braces. It took me a while to fall asleep last night. I thought a lot about my first day at work with them. Of course, no one knows I have braces because I got them on such short notice. I imagined how my colleagues would react to the fact that I have braces. And I am curious if I can stand the stares.

Another thought goes in the direction of my daughter, how was it for her on her first day at school with braces? Was she afraid of being seen with braces? Kids can be absolutely brutal and having braces can make you an easy target for a bully. And what was it like for her to wear her headgear for the first time? She does not wear it to school, but it may have even scared her to wear it in front of her mother. And I am sure that some of her friends have seen her wearing it or at least know that she wears one.

I do not have to be afraid of bullies. None of my co-workers will diss me because of my braces. I am more afraid of what they will think of me as an adult with braces. Will they think they make me look childish? Will they talk about me when I am not around?

It is entirely my fault that I am in this situation. Why did I take my son to the orthodontist? I did it because my wife wanted me to put braces on him. And now I have braces, my son is free, and my wife is mad at me. The only good thing is that the bond with my daughter has been strengthened. One of the few good things about my braces.

A little scared, I pull my car into the parking lot. One of my co-workers sees me getting out of my car and says hello. I greet him back, but he has not yet seen my braces. We walk to our office together, but we do not talk much because we have not had our usual morning coffee. As we walk, I wonder if I should tell him about my braces or just let him notice them. I decide to tell him when he asks me about my weekend, but I will not bring up my braces now.

He sees them in the office kitchen. He says, "Did you get braces?" I tell him, "I got them on Friday. They will help me with my TMJ and hopefully get rid of my frequent headaches." He says, "I heard about TMJ, an old friend of mine had it and he also got braces. And the braces worked for him. So I hope they will help you too. Do they hurt?" This sounds very supportive and I answer, "The pain has been okay so far. I hope it stays that way." He says, "I hope so too, but I am sorry I am late for my first meeting. Good luck with your treatment."

The rest of my workday is boring as usual. Some of my co-workers have noticed my braces, but they do not talk to me about them. Others are so focused on their own things that they have not even noticed them. It is a relief for me that I do not have to talk too much about my braces. It still feels weird to have them, and when I do talk about them, they are even more present in my mind. So I try not to think about them all day, but I fail.

Dinner in the cafeteria is a little difficult. I want to make sure that no food gets stuck in my braces. So I have to eat my food very carefully. And with the practice I had over the weekend, I am mostly successful. I brush my teeth in a discreet bathroom, the bathroom for the disabled. I am not embarrassed about it, because there is no handicapped person working here at the moment. So this is the perfect place to give my braces the thorough brushing they need.

On the drive home, I realize that I survived my first day at work with braces. It was easier than I thought it would be. After all, I might be able to handle my braces for the next two years. Although two years still sound like a long time.

The next few days at work are another boost to my confidence. I will be able to get through my treatment with braces. My co-workers have been very supportive. Some have shared their experiences with braces, others have told me that they admire my courage to wear braces as an adult, and one told me that she is thinking about getting braces. I also find it easier to talk about my braces. On my first day, I was too embarrassed to talk about them. But now I have gained the confidence.

And then I come home from work on Thursday evening. I am a little tired from work today and look forward to a quiet evening on the couch watching some TV. When I enter the living room, I find it in a complete mess. There are at least six open books scattered around the room.

Is my son working on a school assignment? He does not usually read, and more than one book is more than he can handle. As I approach, I realize what kind of books are in my living room. They are all on one subject and the subject is orthodontics. Why are all these books here? I already have enough orthodontics in my mouth.

I take a quick look at the books. They cover all kinds of orthodontic topics. Most books are open to pages describing fixed braces, headgear, and TMJ treatment. What is my son doing with all these books? And it has to be my son who is behind these books. It is just the two of us in the house and I am not the one reading these books.

What is he doing with those books? I am pretty sure this is his way of telling me how unhappy he is that I took him to the orthodontist. But isn't having me in braces enough revenge for him? I feel the anger rising inside me. I hear him in his room and I yell through the house, "Marc, come down right now!"

I hear the door open and he comes down the stairs. He is not alone, there is a girl with him. I wanted to call Marc at a very high volume, but I cannot because he is with a friend. Marc is in a very good mood and tells me, "This is my new girlfriend." The girl wants to shake my hand and I shake her hand, "Hello Mr. Turner, I am Tanja". I tell her, "You can call me Frank, there is no need for Mr. Turner."

Seeing him with his girlfriend calmed me down. But I have to know what all those books in my living room mean, so I ask him, "What are you doing with all those books?“ Marc replies, "We were talking about careers in class. And I think I know what I want to do for a living."

It is good that he is thinking about his career, but how does his career relate to these books in my living room? Marc continues, "I want to be an orthodontist. I find it amazing what you can do for people with misaligned teeth. And I think I have a talent for it. You know, I was the one who discovered that you need braces."

Tanja interrupts him, "Mr. Turner, uh, Frank. He is so excited about the braces. He talks about them all the time. And he already knows so much about them.“ I hadn't noticed before, but now I see that she has braces too. Fixed braces on her lower jaw and probably a device behind her upper teeth.

I feel completely defeated and all I want is a quiet evening. "Marc, please clean up the mess in the living room and take the books to your room. I am quite tired and I want to watch some TV," I order him. To my surprise, he does not argue. He and Tanja pick up the books and take them to his room.

I spent the rest of the evening on the couch watching some stupid TV show. I can barely think. Seeing all those orthodontic books really shocked me.

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« Reply #9 on: 26. January 2025, 05:30:17 AM »
I'm glad you picked up where you left off with this story. It's great!

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6. Pranks
The next two weeks are not easy for me. My son is still excited about becoming an orthodontist. He talks about it all the time and reads even more books about it. He must have read all the books on orthodontics in our library. I should be happy that he reads, but I am not. He has access to the university library at our local university. Lucky for him and unfortunate for me.

He is very interested in my orthodontic treatment and is always asking me about every detail. He wants to know everything. How the brackets feel on my teeth, how it feels to eat with them. The answers I give him are not the whole truth. I always try to hide the fact that these braces really bother me. No more fodder for his pranks on me.

If I were to be completely honest with him, I would have to tell him in detail about the downsides of my braces. I do not like the feeling when the inside of my lips rub against the braces. Clara gave me some wax to put on the parts of the braces where this rubbing irritates my gums. When I tried the wax, I did not like it at all. The feeling of the wax in the braces is worse than the rubbing. And it does not look good to have the wax on my braces. So I stopped using the wax and of course I did not tell my son.

The other thing that an honest version of me would have to talk to him about is saliva. The braces make my mouth produce so much saliva. I have to slur all the time. Doing that in public is always a challenge. It is unavoidable, but I have to do it very discreetly. I do not want other people to see so much saliva in my mouth and there is also the risk of spitting while talking. But being caught slurring in public is just as bad.

Slurring in public is something I have avoided, or at least I think I have. For obvious reasons, I cannot ask other people if I did it. It would be totally embarrassing to ask as an adult. I guess it would be embarrassing for everyone. Even for the person being asked. So I have to rely on my own judgment when it comes to this question.

There is another thing I am afraid of, and that is having a lisp. When I speak, I am always trying to detect any sign of a lisp. So far I have not been able to detect a lisp. As with slurring, I cannot ask other people. Although it is a little strange that I haven't acquired a lisp. Most other people with braces have a lisp, so I do not know why I am an exception to this rule. But I want to believe it. And if I do have a lisp, I think my son would have told me.

So these braces really complicate my life. There are so many things to worry about that I was not aware of. I think these are the reasons why my son does not want braces. He must have listened carefully to the stories of his classmates who have braces. And I was not thinking at all when I agreed to get braces. I was also willing to put my son through all this without thinking.

Marc also watches me, almost like a stalker. When I eat, he watches me to see how I handle the food. He watches me brush my teeth. He also suggests Internet videos about braces care. The videos cover a lot of braces topics, like brushing, flossing, foods to avoid with braces, or dealing with the pain.

My home is no longer a safe place for me. At any moment I can run into another one of my son's pranks. He is very creative in bullying me. I don't know how much longer I can take it. There is nothing wrong with what I did to him. I just took him to an orthodontic consultation, something most parents do with their children. But he is so angry with me.

Every time I turn on my smart TV, it opens to a video platform and shows some braces videos. So in those rare moments when I have forgotten about wearing braces, I am reminded of their existence. These videos mostly show how braces are installed on patients. Looks like he really wants to know how they are installed. And most likely, he enjoys reminding me of my own braces installation.

It is said that criminals like to return to the place where they committed their crimes. This makes them relive the feeling they had while committing the crime. Is watching these videos his way of reliving his prank? He put me in braces, why is that not enough for him? Watching these videos must be a fantastic experience for him.

It is also said that criminals like to collect trophies of their crimes. He also found a way to get those trophies. Of course, me wearing these braces is his number one trophy. But he found more.

He has a collection of dental models with braces in his room. Some orthodontists hand out the dental models they make for the treatment at the end of it. He must have found a way to get some from his friends at school who have already finished their treatment. I really hope he did not steal them. He probably just asked them for them, at least I hope so.

From time to time, my son brings his friends over. I am happy for him that he has friends. He seems to have made some new friends in the last week. And they all have something in common, they all wear braces. I really do not understand his fascination with other people's braces.

He has made it very clear to me that he does not want braces for himself. So why is he so fascinated about braces? I try to believe that this is just a boy who is very fascinated by a subject. Like some kids are completely into dinosaurs. But there are so many signs that this is not the case.

Does he really want to be an orthodontist? Or is he trying to pull a prank and make my life miserable? Why is he putting all the blame on me? After all, it was my wife who wanted him to get braces, not me. I just followed her orders and look what I got. I got these freaking braces and a son who is always mad at me.

Could it be that he is really interested in orthodontics? Is this the job he wants? Am I wrong that he is playing a joke on me? He chose a girlfriend with braces, maybe he is really fascinated by braces. Am I wrong about his motives? I really don't know. But it does not really matter, because I feel like I am being pranked, regardless of his true motives.

My daughter sent me a picture. She must have been to her orthodontist because her braces have a different color. She now wears red ligatures. Shortly after the picture comes a text message from her: "Dad, I got red ligatures and I hope you like the color.“ Remembering the promise I made to her, I write, "Nice color. I will get the same color at my next appointment."

She replies, "Thank you, Dad. You will like the color." This new connection I have found with my daughter is exciting. I want to know more about her appointment and text her, "How are you doing with the headgear? Did you meet your wearing time?" She replies, "My ortho was really happy, I did two hours more than required. I only have to wear it for two more months and then I am free."

While I am thinking about my daughter, I get a phone call. It is from my wife. And as soon as I pick it up, I hear her yelling at me, "Do you know what your daughter has done to me? Was this your idea, you bastard? How could you even think of such a thing?" I reply, "I really have no idea what you are talking about.“ I have to concentrate on staying calm, I do not want to give her an excuse to yell at me even more.

But she is on fire, "I know you are behind this. It does not matter if you deny it. It must have been your idea. But I have to tell you that it did not work. I am an adult, not a child like you. I know what adults are supposed to do, and I am not following your lead, you idiot." I have an idea of what happened at Sandrine's appointment. I am quite sure that she suggested braces for my wife. But I want to hear it from my wife.

As calmly as I can, I tell her, "You have to tell me what happened. I still have no idea what you are talking about and why you are calling me an idiot?" She is still very angry, "You know exactly what she did. She asked her orthodontist to scan me for braces. But I am an adult and I am not getting braces. They are for children, not for adults. You failed to get Marc braces and now you want me to get braces. But I have to tell you that your revenge will not work."

I know why Sandrine did it and it was not my plan. Sandrine was really disgusted by my wife's reaction to my braces. And she probably wanted to take a little revenge on my wife. It must have been a funny thing to watch, unfortunately I wasn't there. The look on my wife's face must have been priceless. As far as I know her, she did not show any emotional reaction when Sandrine suggested that she get braces. She wanted to save all her anger for that phone call with me.

The call goes on for a while and I am not allowed to talk much. She spends most of the call yelling at me and insulting me in every possible way. After a while I get tired of her insults and hang up. I think it is time to think about my relationship.

My wife wasn't always like this. She was a nice person when I met her and fell in love with her. When we got married, I was looking forward to a beautiful life with a wonderful wife. All my friends told me how jealous they were. Many guys tried to get her and I was the one who got her.

There was a warning sign, but I ignored it. Her parents are really terrible. They bossed her around her whole life. And they did not like me. They made it very clear to her and to me that they wanted another partner for her, a better one. Their dislike for me was so fundamental that they did not even attend our wedding.

It slowly changed when we had our children. We both wanted to have children, two children to be exact. So everything went according to plan. But when you have children, you have certain responsibilities. And you are not as free as a single person or a couple without children. She did not like having all these duties and she put the blame on me. When Marc was five, she started to change.

When Marc was nine, the situation had gotten worse. She insulted me almost constantly. She was even not afraid to do it in front of our children. And then we had a big fight. After that fight, I had to break up with her. There was no other way. But we are still married to this day. I guess that has to change.

And it is very clear to me that I need to file for divorce. I do not want to be her husband anymore. Not after all these insults. And our relationship is screwed up anyway, I think it could not be fixed even before I got those braces that she thinks are childish.

I will make an appointment with a lawyer tomorrow, but today I have to do something to fight my frustration. I want to go to a bar and get really drunk. I usually do not go to a bar on a weekday, but today is an exception. I need to get drunk and then I will be ready for the divorce. I should have done it a long time ago. Our relationship has been over for a long time and it is time to make it official.

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7. Bar
When I enter the bar, I immediately go to the counter and order a beer and a shot. My plan is to get really drunk today and nothing can stop me. I am so ready for these drinks and it does not take me long to finish them. I quickly order the next round of drinks.

Normally I am not much into drinking, but today I feel the urge to drink. Each of these drinks will help me to forget my wife and at the same time help me to file this divorce. It was a mistake not to have done it sooner. There was always this false hope of getting her back. But what would I have gained? Only someone who constantly insults me and does not know how to behave in front of our children.

I hear a voice next to me. It is the voice of a beautiful girl. I didn't notice her before because I was too busy getting drunk. She asks me, "Why are you so angry?" Should I tell her? She is just a stranger in a bar, but maybe it helps to talk. So I ask her, "I hope you have some time. Do you?" She smiles at me and nods, "Sure. Go ahead."

I have seen a lot of movies where someone explains their life to a complete stranger in a bar. This has never happened to me. So this is a completely new situation for me. But I have to talk to this beautiful girl, I want to enjoy being around such a beauty for a while. It has been a long time since such a thing happened to me. And she will lose interest in me as soon as she discovers my braces anyways.

As I begin to speak, I try to hide my braces as best I can, "I separated from my wife a long time ago, but we are still married. Today she called me and insulted me in every possible way. She is not happy about a prank my daughter tried to pull on her. Of course she thinks I am behind it."

She looks me in the eye and asks, "Are you?" I shake my head, "No, I am not. I think my daughter is not happy with the way my wife has been treating me lately. This must have been her way of helping me. Of course, that has made things worse, but I do not blame her."

She asked me, "What was behind this prank? Do you want to tell me?" By now she must have seen my braces and I am sure she will leave me soon. But she does not try to leave yet. So I tell her the whole story, including my braces. The worst thing that can happen is that she stops talking to me. So I start, "It all started when my wife asked me to get my son scanned for braces. So I took him to the orthodontist."

I pause briefly, "Then something happened. It turned out that my son did not need braces, but I did. So I got them and my wife is not happy about it. She called me a pathetic loser in front of my kids. And my daughter and my son did not like how she was talking to me. So she tried to put their mother in braces at her own orthodontic appointment. And that made my wife very angry."

She asks me, "Weird story, please tell me more. I hope it helps you to talk about it.” She seems interested in my story, and indeed it might help to tell it, so I continue with my story. I give her more details about my wife's phone call this morning. I tell her all about her yelling and insulting me. She is a good listener and only asks my questions when absolutely necessary.

As I continue with the story of my marriage, I begin to think about her. Is she flirting with me? There is no way she could do that. I am an adult with braces, with her looks she can get any man she wants. She is certainly not interested in me. I know for a fact that my braces have stopped dating for me for at least two years. No girl in her right mind is going to date a guy with braces.

Even though dating is out of the question for a while, I still enjoy being with this girl at the bar. She is probably already thinking of a polite way to end our conversation. I will not make it easy for her because I enjoy every moment of our conversation. She is so beautiful, it is an honor that she even talks to me, the guy with braces.

She is brushing her long blonde hair with her right hand. I like to watch her do this. She is definitely a very pretty girl. Then she looks me straight in the eye with her blue eyes. And then it happens, she moves her face in my direction and starts to kiss me. It has been a while since I kissed a girl and it is amazing.

This is also the first time I have kissed a girl while wearing braces. I hadn't planned on kissing a girl for the next two years, so this was a big surprise to me. This surprise even prevented me from thinking about it before. So maybe I would have hesitated to kiss her if I had had time to think about our kiss. But it just happened, and it is good that it happened.

Is this really happening? I have braces, no girl in her right mind will go out with me, and given her looks it seems even more impossible. However, she does not seem to be distracted by my braces. We share more kisses and she is not afraid to use her tongue. She even touches my braces with her tongue. It is all too good to be true.

I try to remember if I ever kissed a girl with braces. But I think it never happened. It was my first kiss with braces. It felt no different than kissing without braces. The real difference is that I think a lot more about this kiss than I do about any kiss before it. I really did not expect that to happen, and that makes this kiss really special.

After all the kissing, she asks me, "By the way, my name is Deborah, and would you like to come to my apartment for a coffee?" Of course I want to, "My name is Frank and I love coffee." This night is going in a completely different direction than I expected, but I like what is happening. I also wonder what kind of coffee I might be served.

In her apartment we share some more kisses. She has a very nice apartment and I can see no signs of another guy in here. Maybe this is not the last time for me in her apartment. She kisses me with even more passion than at the bar. We use our tongues a lot during these kisses. It feels so good to be with a girl after such a long time.

She serves me the hot coffee in her bed and it is exactly the right place for this kind of coffee. Anything we do in her bed involves a lot of heavy breathing and no clothes. Not only does she look amazing, she is also amazing at serving hot coffee. This is all a big surprise to me. Can I have a girlfriend while wearing braces? I doubt it, but here I am in bed with a beautiful girl and she has seen my braces. She even knows the story behind them.

After all this coffee, I have to go home. My son Marc is expecting me tomorrow morning. And I do not want to tell him about my relationship with Deborah. But I make sure to exchange numbers with her. I want to see her again, there is no doubt about it. Maybe I am at the beginning of a new relationship and it is promising.

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8. Checkup
Today I have my first check-up at the orthodontist. It is already four weeks since I got my braces. My life at home is still miserable for me. My son is still actively teasing me. He talks about becoming an orthodontist all the time. That is also the reason why he is coming to my appointment today, he wants to know everything about braces and that is his reason for joining.

The only thing that is going well for me is my relationship with Deborah. We talk on the phone every day and have met twice. Marc does not know about her yet, but I think I will tell him and Sandrine soon. I also have an appointment with a lawyer next week. We will discuss my divorce. I can't wait to have an ex-wife.

When we arrive at Johnson Orthodontics, the waiting room is full, and I have the last appointment for the day. When we are finally called into the exam room, Marc follows me. Dr. Johnson greets me as I enter the room and I tell her, "This is my son Marc, I think you know him. He wants to..." Marc cuts me off, "I want to be an orthodontist, so I am here to learn more about my future profession. I hope you do not mind.“ Dr. Johnson says, "No problem, if it is okay with your father, then it is okay with me.“ I just nod.

"So, Mr. Turner, how have your first few weeks with braces been?" she asks me. I reply, "I think it has gone well so far. Not too much pain. The annoying part is brushing my teeth. It really takes a while to clean them." She says, "Good to hear. Sit down and let me see your progress.“ I sit down in the chair and she begins to examine my teeth.

She tells me to open and close my mouth several times. She mumbles some words to her assistant Clara that I do not understand. All of this is being closely watched by Marc. Then Dr. Johnson says to me, "I see that you have cleaned your teeth very well. Keep up that good work. I am already seeing some progress in your bite, which is also a good sign.“

Marc interrupts her, "Are you going to change anything for his treatment today? Another wire maybe?" Why can't he just stop? Dr. Johnson smiles at him, "That's what I wanted to talk about. We started with a very thin starting wire. That was a good choice, given your head start on the treatment, Mr. Turner. We will be making two changes to your treatment today. You are going to get a thicker archwire and we are going to start your rubber bands today."

"Dad, I have read a lot about these rubber bands. They can do amazing things for you. They will help reposition your upper jaw toward your lower jaw. That will help with your TMJ," my son tells me, unasked and with a big smile on his face.

I try to ignore my son's lecture, and it is good to hear that my treatment is progressing. But I am not sure I am looking forward to the changes. I ask Dr. Johnson, "Can I choose the color of my ligatures? My daughter has braces and we want to wear matching colors." I pull out my phone and show her a picture of my daughter's braces. She says, "Sure, we have the same red color in stock.”

Dr. Johnson looks at Marc, "Clara wants to leave early today, would you like to assist me?" He replies, "I would love to, thank you Doctor.“ Clara smiles in our direction and I see that she is wearing retainers today. And I absolutely do not like my son assisting Dr. Johnson. But I do not say anything because I do not know how to express it without sounding rude.

Dr. Johnson says, "I'm going to show you how to remove the wire from his lower braces, and then you can do the same with his upper braces. Marc watches closely as she removes the first wire. I have never seen him so focused. So they switch places and it is Marc's turn to remove the wire. According to Dr. Johnson, he is doing a fantastic job. Of course, he is much slower than Dr. Johnson.

It is now time for Dr. Johnson to take over. She presents me with my new archwires. She says, "Marc, I will cut the wires to the correct size and maybe you can assist me with his new ligatures. She puts the new wires in my mouth several times and adjusts them. Then she starts with the red ligatures on my lower braces. Halfway through, she tells Marc, "It's your turn. I hope you were watching me." Marc smiles all over his face.

Then he begins to add the remaining ligatures. Adding them is a more difficult task than removing them. It takes him a while and some corrections from Dr. Johnson, but in the end my lower wire is secured. She lets him insert my top wire and then takes over for the first ligatures. Then it is Marc's turn again for the remaining ligatures.

"You did a very good job. You have a talent for it," she says, while Marc keeps on smiling. Having my son put braces on me is one of the most humiliating things I have ever experienced. I don't know why Dr. Johnson did this to me. She must enjoy watching my son play with me. It is often said that dentists or orthodontists have a sadistic tendency, and this is certainly true of her.

"Mr. Turner, I have been an orthodontist for some time now and it has come to my attention that you are very unsure about your treatment. I have seen that look on your face in many patients and they all thought that their treatment was not really necessary. Can I show you something," she asks me.

I nod and then she touches a spot next to my left ear and suddenly the pain hits me out of nowhere. She could have at least warned me. Then she explains, "I just touched your so-called temporomandibular joint. The pain you felt is the stress caused by the position of your upper and lower jaw. Your body is trying to work around it and that is the cause of your TMJ. Please believe me, we need to fix this.”

I reply, "Thank you for your demonstration. But next time, please give me a warning.” She nods, "I will, but I have touched your good side. The other would have been much worse for you. So let us continue with your rubber bands, they will help you get rid of this pain."

Then she shows me a tooth model and presents me with rubber bands. She shows me which tooth to put the rubber bands on. Then she attaches them to my braces. Almost immediately I can feel them pulling on my teeth. Then she calls me to a mirror and asks me to take them out and put them back in.

Taking them out is the easy part. Putting them in is a little more difficult. It takes me a while to get the hang of it. Then she says to Marc, "I'm sure you can help your father with his rubber bands.“ She then shows him and me a pack of rubber bands. On the package is a picture of an upper and lower jaw. She uses a pen to mark the teeth where I should attach the rubber bands. I hope they will help me with my TMJ.

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9. Bonus
So far, everything has gone in Marc's favor, but I have something in store for him. Dr. Johnson tells me, "Please wear these bands at all times. Only take them out to eat and brush your teeth. For the first week you can take them out if you feel uncomfortable, but try to wear them all the time. See you in four weeks. And do you have any questions?"

I look at her and ask her, "May I ask you a personal question?" She says, "Sure, go ahead." I ask her, "I noticed that you have almost perfect teeth. Have you had orthodontic treatment? Or do you have naturally straight teeth?" She says, "You are the first patient to ask me that question. Although it is an obvious question, no one really asks it."

She then smiles and gives me and my son a good look at her perfectly straight teeth. She continues, "Actually, my teeth were always pretty straight and my dentist never referred me to an orthodontist. But when I decided to become an orthodontist, I wanted perfectly straight teeth. So I decided to get braces as a young adult and I have never regretted it. And it is good for my job because my teeth make me the perfect role model for my patients."

So I ask her, "Have you seen my son's teeth? Do you think they are perfectly straight or just good enough not to need treatment?" Suddenly my son has a skeptical look on his face and she replies, "He certainly has straight teeth, but there are certainly things that need to be corrected before we can call them perfectly straight."

"So, as a future orthodontist, it might be good for him to get his teeth straightened now? I mean before he gets them as an adult," I ask. The smile suddenly disappears from my son's face and he looks shocked for a moment, but it does not take him long to recover. Dr. Johnson says, "Good point, if he wants to show his patients a perfect smile, there is certainly something we can do for him."

This discussion is part of my plan. I spoke with Dr. Johnson earlier this week and she has agreed to give my future orthodontist braces if he agrees. She is even willing to do it today. Of course, I will have to pay her a little bonus. I really hope that once he has braces, he will stop pranking me. It has to stop and I am willing to do almost anything.

So far Marc has not said a word, I ask him, "I think Dr. Johnson is right, as an orthodontist you should have perfect teeth. You will set such a good example for your patients. So, what do you think? Are you serious about becoming an orthodontist?" Marc looks at me and then at Dr. Johnson, "I was thinking the same thing. An orthodontist needs perfect teeth and mine are only almost perfect.“

It is Dr. Johnson who asks him, "So, do you want braces?" To my surprise, he replies, "Yes. I want braces." This works even better than I expected. Now the only thing I have to do is get him to get them today. Every cent I pay Dr. Johnson will be worth it. He so deserves braces after what he has done to me these past four weeks.

It is then my son who surprises us again: "I have been thinking about the right moment to get them. During my last visit, you said that my wisdom teeth could change my bite when they erupt. So I was wondering if I should wait for them to erupt and then fix my teeth. What is your professional opinion?" He looks in Dr. Johnson's direction, and it is almost as if I am not there.

She replies, "Good point. However, I do not think your wisdom teeth will be a problem if we start your treatment now. The likelihood of them shifting your bite is almost zero. So it is up to you, we can start today if you want." Dr. Johnson is really trying to get him into braces. She seems to sympathize with me after what I told her on the phone. However, she has also made it clear to me that she needs Marc's full consent, and I agree with her on that part. Still, it would be fantastic to have him in braces.

I say to him, "Wouldn't it be better to have them now, when you are younger? I mean, if you want it anyway, it would be better to have it now and not as an adult.”S Dr. Johnson supports me, she is working for her bonus, "Your father is right, you will be an adult when your wisdom teeth come in. And it is certainly easier to wear braces as a teenager when many of your friends have them."

He looks a little unsure, but says, "I'm just thinking about how to get the best result from my treatment. If I have to wear braces, the result has to be perfect." I tell him, "You heard Dr. Johnson, there is almost no risk if you start now. Your girlfriend has them and I have them. Wouldn't it be good to go through this together?"

I can see his brain working. Is he trying to make an excuse or is he considering getting braces? Then he says, "I would love to get braces. They do such an amazing job. I have seen a lot of before and after braces videos. And it is really fascinating what they can do. I have been thinking a lot about my future career and every day I know more the more I want to be an orthodontist with perfect teeth."

I look at him, "So what is stopping you from getting them? I wish I had them as a child. My treatment would have been much shorter and I would not have developed these headaches. So do it now and you are all done." He replies, "Maybe you are right and I should get them now. It is just that I want to have perfect teeth and I am afraid of a second round of braces if I start too early."

He is really good at pretending to want braces, but avoiding actually getting them. Dr. Johnson says, "The risk of that is almost non-existent. You can have the straight teeth you want with just one year of fixed braces. Maybe you have read too much online. Not everything on the Internet is true. I assure you that your teeth will be fine." She is certainly working for her bonus and I hope she succeeds.

I begin to notice the effect of my new archwire and rubber bands. There is already some discomfort and I am almost certain that I will be in pain this evening and for the next few days. Marc looks like he is thinking or pretending to think. I am not sure. Then he says, "Actually, I have read a lot of studies and they are slightly in favor of late treatment. So I am really not sure what to do."

Normally he does not read, and now he pretends to read scientific studies. Has he grown up that much in the last few weeks or is he just trying to find a way out without admitting that this whole thing about becoming an orthodontist is a joke? I admire him for his acting, but I want braces for him. I want it to happen now, and not when he gets his wisdom teeth.

Dr. Johnson has not given up: "I know there are studies that support late treatment. But there is a huge bias. Most of these studies do not take patient cooperation into account as much as they should. And usually older patients are more cooperative. But you are not uncooperative. You want braces and I am sure you will cooperate fully. So there is no reason for you to start late."

I also admire Dr. Johnson's passion. She had her fun when she let Marc assist with my wire change, but now she is fully on my side and almost desperate to help. Marc tells me, "Again, I would like to start now. But I am worried about the results and want to wait. It would be cool to be a braces buddy with you and my sister. We could have the same colors. By the way, I love the red color. But I'm afraid I have to do what's best for my treatment."

Dr. Johnson and I now know that we are defeated. So I say to him, "OK, let's go home now.” And I say to Dr. Johnson, "Thank you for your time. See you in four weeks." Dr. Johnson replies, "You are welcome. I am afraid my assistants have left, so you will have to call them tomorrow to schedule your next appointment.“

And in Marc's direction, she says: "You can always change your decision. I would be happy to help a future colleague get a perfect smile." So she leaves the door open for him. But I doubt he will walk through that door. His interest is in pranking me. I am sure that this whole thing about becoming an orthodontist is part of his act. He does not really want braces or to become an orthodontist. I still do not understand why he is so angry with me. After all, he knows that his mother started the braces thing. She wanted him to get braces and I was just her slave.

So we finally leave the office and head home. We do not talk much during the drive. We are both focused on the events of the day. At home I prepare a meal for us and my choice is again pasta. Noodles are easy to chew and I do not want to have any pain while eating. The downside is that pasta tends to get stuck in my braces, but I have to brush them anyway. Taking my rubber bands out to eat is also a big relief and I try to extend my rubber band free time as much as possible.

After brushing my teeth and putting the rubber bands back in, I decide to go to my bedroom. But not before taking some painkillers. From my bedroom I call Deborah and tell her about my braces appointment today. What I leave out is my plan to get Marc in braces. She is very supportive and tells me that she is thinking of me. And a nice gesture from her is that she will wear her retainers tonight, which she usually does not.

I didn't even know she had retainers or had had orthodontic treatment in the past. But she did. I wonder who she looks like with her retainers. Retainers will be in stock for me, too, after my treatment. So I am a little curious to see what an adult looks like wearing them. She wishes me a good night and we arrange to meet tomorrow.

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Great story!