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Offline innominipatri

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Story: The BodyMod1
« on: 25. February 2024, 15:37:27 PM »
Chapter 1:

While I was waiting for my girlfriend to come home from work on my 24th Birthday, I was already thrilled to see what she got me as a present. I didn’t expect anything expensive, because our money was always short and we had to pay a bunch of additional taxes last month. I was excited nonetheless, as she had always found a way to make the best of it.

I was just pushing the lasagna for dinner into the oven, when I suddenly heard the front door open. I ran into the hallway of our tiny apartment to hug her.
“Happy Birthday Bill!”, she said as I closed my arms around her.
 “Thanks, Emily!”, I said.
“I’m so sorry, I couldn't come earlier”, she explained. “It took some time to prepare your birthday present”
I kissed her. “Doesn’t matter, at least you are here now", I responded. “Dinner is almost ready, I’ll just look after the lasagna.”
She followed me into our kitchen and grabbed a bottle of wine from the fridge. I took two wine glasses from the cupboard and put them onto the counter.
“I have your present in my purse, let me get it quickly”, she said, while hastily pouring the wine into the glasses.
I grabbed mine and leaned against the counter. Emily left for the hallway and returned seconds later with an envelope in her hand.
“It’s a special present, be careful when you open it”, she explained upon seeing my puzzled look.
I turned around to grab a knife.
“If you say so”, I responded.
I carefully inserted the knife into the side of the opening latch and cut the top open. Inside the envelope was a piece of paper, something that looked like one of the old paper train tickets that were used until 2025. I took it out and read it. On the top was written in bright red letters: “Institute for Body Modification and Genetics”. Further down, the purpose of the ticket showed:
 
“Ticket for a body modification experience in the newly developed BodyMod1-Prototype for one person. Reversal possible.”

Upon reading this, my mouth dropped. As I had always been insecure about my appearance, a body modification was something I had always dreamed about.
Up until a few weeks ago, plastic surgery had been the only possible way to change someone's appearance, but that method was unsafe and often not satisfying. When the Institute of Body Modification and Genetics announced the BodyMod1, the whole world was in shock. With this device, you could alter the looks of a person into something completely different. Rumor was that the machine could even 3D-print things with Fortium, an Alloy made from Iridium and Osmium that was basically indestructible, but no one had confirmed that yet.
“Ho- How the hell did you get that? Such a ticket must cost millions of dollars!”, I stammered.
“You know my friend Rebecca, right?”, she asked.
I nodded.
“She was one of the main engineers on that project and they gave everyone that worked on it a free ticket. She is quite happy with her looks, so she gave it to me instead.”
 I still struggled to find the right words.
After a few moments of awkward silence, I whispered: “Thank you..”. 
Emily immediately fell around my neck and kissed me. “Oh, you're so sweet! I’m glad you like it. If you want, we can go there tomorrow.”, she whispered into my ear.
 “That would be great”, I responded. “But let’s eat the lasagna first”.

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Re: Story: The BodyMod1
« Reply #1 on: 25. February 2024, 15:40:00 PM »
Chapter 2:

The next morning I jumped out of our bed and rushed into the kitchen. Emily was already making breakfast and I quickly embraced her from behind.
“You know what we’re gonna do today, right?”, I asked her.
“Of course.”, she answered. “Can you get the milk from the fridge, Honey? And the cheese too, please?”
 I went to the fridge, grabbed everything and brought it to the kitchen table. Emily then took the pan with the scrambled eggs from the stove and put half of it onto my plate.
“I’m so excited already”, I said. “When do we want to go?”
“Whenever you are ready”, she said.
I think I have never eaten my breakfast that fast in my life. I shoveled the scrambled eggs into my mouth, ate half a toast in two seconds and then went back to our room to get dressed. A quarter of an hour later, I stood ready at our front door.
“What subway do we need to take?”
“The central line”, Emily answered while putting on her jacket. “Let’s go then”.

We walked to the station together and entered the platform. “07.05.2031”, it read on the sign above the track.
“Crazy”, I thought. “I am already 24 years old. Time really flies…”.
The next second, our bullet train rushed into the station and came to a stop. We entered, found some seats and prepared ourselves for the rapid acceleration of the train. I hated those trains since I first rode them, going from 0 to 400 km/h in five seconds was just not fun to me. At least the ride only took 30 seconds and we could leave quickly. When we exited the station, we stood directly in front of the Institute.
After going up what seemed like a thousand stairs, we entered the main hall and were greeted at the entrance desk. I showed my ticket and the receptionist frowned.
“I got it from Rebecca Smith”, Emily explained. “Then I gifted it to my boyfriend.”
The receptionist smiled again. “How nice of you. Alright, then follow the signs to our experimental department and show the ticket at the reception there. Have a nice day!”
We thanked her and followed the signs for what felt like an eternity. The institute was gigantic, even larger than it seemed from outside.

We arrived at the experimental department and were greeted again by a receptionist. This time however, not a real person sat before us, but a hologram of an animated woman. Although AI was already capable of doing normal jobs, it was quite rare to see one in contact with customers or visitors. I showed my ticket again and the hologram scanned it.
“Seems to be in order”, the automatic voice said. “Please follow the hallway on the left to the last door on the right. Have a nice stay.”
We didn’t bother to thank her, as Rebecca appeared from said hallway and greeted us.
“Hi Emily, hi Bill! I didn’t think you would make it that quickly. Would you follow me?”
She turned around and marched down the hallway. We followed her and had to run a bit, as she was walking quite fast.
“Really horrible that AI, isn’t it? I was against it and wanted a real receptionist, but I was overruled. They said it would be cool, as we are the experimental department. Oh, and there is one thing I should tell you, we have some problems with our power source, but nothing that would stop you from using the machine!”
I immediately thought of getting stuck as something ugly, but I quickly dismissed that thought. The people here were experts, they knew if it was safe.
Rebecca led us into a room with a big glass pane on the left wall. From here, you could already see the BodyMod1 with its control panel right beside it. Rebecca gestured us to sit down at the only thing in the room, a transparent desk. She took out her PDA (Personal Digital Assistant) and showed me a consent form.
“Read it thoroughly and discuss it with Emily please. I’ll be back in five minutes.”
With that, she left the room and closed the door behind her. I wanted to read the form, but it was just too long and in my excitement, I just signed it. Emily was equally excited and didn’t even say anything.
“Strange”, I thought, “She is always the more careful one, why not now?”
The next four minutes, we just sat there in silence while waiting for Rebecca to return. She returned on time and upon seeing the signed form, she clapped her hands and told us to follow her.
“You are actually only the second person to try it”, she explained. “But don’t worry, it went completely fine the first time, we could reverse all changes made to our subject.”
She led us into the room with the machine.
“Here it is, our masterpiece.”

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Re: Story: The BodyMod1
« Reply #2 on: 25. February 2024, 16:37:08 PM »
It's nice to see another writer join us. I'll add your story to TheArchive as you write more of it.

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Re: Story: The BodyMod1
« Reply #3 on: 25. February 2024, 20:21:57 PM »
There is a strange nagging feeling in my mind that something will go wrong. Maybe not straight away, but at some point....

Can't wait to find out what goes wrong....

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Re: Story: The BodyMod1
« Reply #4 on: 01. March 2024, 18:19:30 PM »
This should be interesting... Nice work!

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Re: Story: The BodyMod1
« Reply #5 on: 02. March 2024, 09:24:38 AM »
I'm looking forward to more of this story.  You came up with a really nice setting and situation.  There are a lot of possibilities here.

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Re: Story: The BodyMod1
« Reply #6 on: 24. July 2024, 13:51:45 PM »
Interesting start, I can’t wait to read what’s next

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Re: Story: The BodyMod1
« Reply #7 on: 26. August 2024, 22:30:12 PM »
Why doesn't the story continue?  :-[

Offline innominipatri

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Re: Story: The BodyMod1
« Reply #8 on: 27. August 2024, 00:22:15 AM »
Hey Guys! I kind of forgot to upload the next chapter of the story, and by now I've been sitting on this for quite some time. Sorry about that. But now, here it is. Enjoy!

Chapter 3
Rebecca opened the machine and told me to lie inside.
“Don’t worry, we can still talk when you are inside. It is completely permeable for sound”, she said upon seeing my worried look.
The machine looked like a cryo-chamber from various sci-fi movies. I laid inside and was surprised by the comfortable padding on the floor.
Rebecca closed the machine and pressed some buttons on the control panel. The machine sprung to life and Rebecca moved the panel over to Emily.
“Okay, there you go”, she said. “You see those categories here, it is quite easy to operate. Just go to one option, push the regulators around and look at the changes on the hologram before you press execute. But please ask Bill before you do anything. We can reverse most things, but not those where you add additional things made of fortium to his body. We haven’t found a way to break the alloy down yet, but we are working on it. However, it could take a few years, so you should rather use steel.”
“Okay” , Emily answered.
So the machine could actually make fortium. It was nice to see a rumor come true.
 “Bill, prepare yourself. The machine will now secure you with straps, so you can’t move and mess anything up. It’s just for your safety, this machine could kill you otherwise.”
She then pressed another button on the control panel and some black straps shot out of the padding to wrap around my body. I tested them by struggling and was surprised that I couldn't move an inch.
“Alright, you are ready now”, Rebecca said. “I will stay for the first modification to see if everything is alright, but then I will leave you for privacy reasons. You can try everything out and execute it too, the machine has already saved his default looks.” She pointed to another button on the panel. “Just press this and the machine will reverse everything. Okay, try it out!”
“What do you want to do first?”, Emily asked me.
“I don’t know… Maybe make my nose a bit straighter.”, I answered.
“Okay, that would be here… then here…”
Emily stared at the panel while pressing the screen several times.
“Found it! You just want it a bit straighter, right?”
“Yeah, nothing too drastic”.
She continued to work on the panel and then clicked one last time, before the machine began to work. I was sedated and given pain medication via gas inhalation and then the machine began to work on my nose. I didn’t feel anything, which made me happy. After only 30 seconds, it was done. The machine showed me my face in a mirror and I was glad to see it had worked. My nose was now much straighter, and it looked very good.
“Alright, I will leave you to it then”, Rebecca told us.
She took out her PDA and darkened the glass pane in the wall.
“I will be in the next room right there if you need me. Take as much time as you want.”
“Thank you, Rebecca”, Emily exclaimed. “This means a lot to us.”
“Always happy to help.”
With those words, she left the room.
“Okay, what else do you want?”
“Let’s not immediately try to get final results”, I said. “Let’s play around a bit first.”
For the next 20 minutes, we tried everything from pig noses over crab hands to making my ears 10 times bigger. After every change, the machine released me, so I could try out my new body parts. We had a lot of fun, but eventually, I had enough.
“Okay, that was enough. Let’s focus on making me look hot.”
“Just one last thing. I want to see how you look in braces.”

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Re: Story: The BodyMod1
« Reply #9 on: 28. August 2024, 20:22:04 PM »
I’m so happy to see this story continue. Please don’t leave us hanging too long.