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« Reply #105 on: 07. September 2023, 02:23:40 AM »
This latest chapter gets us away from all the really sad, really ugly stuff.  And back on track with orthodontia.  And even orthopedics.  But I am afraid I have tipped my hand on what lays ahead for Sarah. 

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Re: The Split
« Reply #106 on: 07. September 2023, 04:58:10 AM »
We had to have the sad, ugly stuff to understand Dr. Higgins, Dr. Anderson and Izzy. It will be interesting to see how Sarah copes with her casts, back brace, full time headgear, and scoliosis treatment.

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« Reply #107 on: 12. September 2023, 00:33:29 AM »
Episode 56.

Peter and Sarah were talking when they heard the soft knock on the door.  They turned as the door opened.  A nurse entered, holding the door for a second pushing a wheelchair.  She first said “good afternoon!  I hope I am not interrupting.  But, we need to get you to scanned for your new brace.  But first, I will remove your catheter.”

As the nurse approached Sarah asked “will it hurt?”

The nurse said “no, it won’t.  Now you may feel just a little bit of pressure.” She continued talking to Sarah as she worked.  She asked “so, how are feeling today?” 

Sarah replied “I am ok.  I feel ok.  I am just down about this whole thing.”

The nurse said “I’m sorry love.  The good news is, your new brace should be more comfortable and less bulky than the one you currently have.  And there we go.  Catheter is out.   Are you ready to go for a ride?”

Sarah replied “Wow, I hardly felt that.  How invasive will getting fitted be?”

As the other nurse positioned the wheelchair beside the bed she responded “not at all.  Technology can be great.  Used to, we would have had to wrap you in plaster, essentially put you in a body cast, to get the mold.”  She paused as she and the other nurse positioned themselves on either side of the chair.  She continued “but now, we just scan you.  And the computer does all the work.”  The first nurse helped Sarah sit up and swing her legs over the corner of the bed.  She told Sarah “careful now” as Sarah gingerly transferred from the bed to the chair.

Peter followed along as the quartet made their way down the hall.   One of the nurses stopped at the nurses station and said “Mrs Jackson, Janet will take great care of you.”  The threesome continued on, eventually getting on an elevator.  As they descended Sarah asked “what kind of brace am I getting?”

The nurse responded “a plastic TLSO with sternal support and shoulder straps.”  The nurse noticed that this didn’t seem to mean anything to Sarah so she continued “it is a plastic brace that will be molded to your body.  Two pieces, front and back, connect with velcro straps. The plastic part will stop underneath your breasts.  Then, there will be a vertical support with a piece that sits on your sternum that will have straps that go over your shoulders.  This will be lighter and cooler than having a one piece brace that covers your entire torso.  Have you thought about what color or design you want? Or do you just want to stick with white?”

Sarah replied “I didn’t even know I had a choice.” 

The nurse said “sure, I can show what all we can do after we get you scanned.”

Sarah said “that really was easy.”

The nurse responded “yep, I told you.  It is so much easier and cleaner than it used to be.  So, let me show you what colors and designs we have.  Peter sat beside Sarah watching as the nurse flipped through the options. 

Once she was done, Sarah said “I don’t know.  What do you think baby?”

Peter answered “whatever it is will look good on you.  But what about the pink?  Or that blue tie dye looking pattern?”

The nurse said “and a lot of patients like to just go with white.  Some put all kinds of stickers on them.  A few have even painted them themselves.”

Sarah thought a minute and said “Izzy’s brace is white.  Let’s just go with white.  Maybe we will decorate them ourselves.”

The nurse smiled “white is always a good choice.  We will get it made this evening.  Tomorrow morning we will get you fitted into it in your room.   Any questions?”

Sarah said “how uncomfortable is it going to be?”

The nurse said “not uncomfortable.  Restrictive yes.  But not uncomfortable.  It can get a little warm, but you will forget you are wearing it after a week.”  Thinking of her headgear, Sarah thought to herself “I have heard that before.” 

Back in her room, just the two of them, Sarah looked at Peter and said again “I am so, so sorry for all this.  You don’t deserve this.”

Peter smiled at her and said “you are right, I don’t deserve you.  I am so lucky.  Baby, this is just a little bump in the road.  I am so sorry this happened.  But we, you and I, are going to make it through just fine.”

Sarah said “this just sucks though.  What I did to Julia.  I really want to see her.  If she will see me.  And what about my headgear?  Dr. Anderson wants me to wear it tonight when I go to bed.  But I don’t even have it with me.  I hate to ask you to do even more, but would you go to Vista View and get it for me?”

Peter surprised her when he answered “No. I won’t.”

Sarah was about to ask why when the door flung open.  Izzy burst through the door followed by Dr. Higgins who was carrying a box.   Izzy sprinted across the room shrieking “Sarah!  Oh Sarah!  I am so sorry!”  As she got beside the bed Peter stuck his arm out stopping her.  Izzy turned her body towards Peter as he said “Hi Izzy!  But be gentle with Sarah, she hurt her back and her hand.”

Izzy looked at Peter and said “yes, of course.”  She then turned her body towards Sarah.

Izzy stiffly bent over and gave Sarah a hug.  With her arms still wrapped around her, Izzy said “Sarah, I have missed you.  But Gramma gave me the best news, we are going to be rooming together.  We are going to have fun.  And I am going to take such good care of you.”

Sarah said “thank you Izzy.  I have missed you too.  And you are going to have to take care of me.  Did Dr. Higgins tell you about my little accident?  And that I will be getting two long arm casts?  I am going to be pretty helpless.”

Izzy released Sarah and straightened herself up.  Sarah couldn’t help but notice how stiff she was, immobilized from her hips to her head.  Sarah knew she would soon be in a very similar situation. 

Izzy responded “yes, she did.  And you won’t be helpless.  I will be there to help you.  And this Kim woman isn’t very nice.  Let’s not let her play with us.”

Sarah couldn’t help but smile at Izzy.  She answered “Kim is very defensive of me.  And she sometimes takes things too far.  But we are working at coming to some kind of understanding with her.”

Dr. Higgins interrupted and asked “Izzy, did you forget about the presents you got Sarah?”

Izzy said “oh!”  She hurried over and got the box from Dr. Higgins.  She carried it over and sat it on the table beside the bed.  First, she pulled a little potted plant out.  Sarah noticed it had thick, waxy, striped leaves.  Izzy excitedly said “this is a peacock plant!  Because of the striped leaves.  Isn’t it pretty?  Just like my friend Sarah.”

Sarah said “it is beautiful.  Thank you so much Izzy.”

As she sat the plant over by the window she replied “you are so welcome!  But you have to bring it home with you.  I saw the other plants in your suite.  We need this one too.”  As she came back she said “there is more!”

Izzy pulled a stuffed giraffe out of the box and handed it to Sarah.  As she handed it to Sarah, Izzy said “she has a long neck too.  Like me.  So, even when I am not here with you, I can be here with you.”

Sarah said “she is adorable Izzy.  Just like you.  And I will snuggle with her tonight”

Izzy said “and there is one more thing” as she pulled out the zippered pouch with Fair Oaks Orthodontics emblazoned on the side.  Izzy said “Peter also asked me to bring this.”

As Sarah took it from her she said “thank you.  I guess even here I don’t get a break from it.”  She then looked at Peter and said “and I guess this is why you said you wouldn’t go back to Vista View to get it for me.”

Peter reached over and put his hand on Sarah’s.  Before he could even say anything Izzy said “I bet you haven’t even been able to turn your expander have you?  How could you?  Can I turn it for you?  Now?”

Sarah said “ugh.  Do we have to?”

Izzy as usual took the question literally and replied “no, we don’t have to.”

Sarah said “no Izzy, we should.  Would you please turn it for me?”  Sarah looked at Peter and asked “but should we do two?  Or make up for yesterday and do four?  I really want to split.  I don’t care what Dr. Parker said, getting a bunch of holes drilled in my palate sounds brutal.”  Before Peter answered she looked at Izzy and said “Izzy, would you make four turns for me please?”

Izzy excitedly exclaimed “of course Sarah!”

As Izzy dug for the wrench in the pouch, Peter said asked “you sure baby?  Is that going to hurt too much?”

Sarah quipped “everything else hurts, why shouldn’t my mouth.”

With wide eyed excitement Izzy held the wrench in front of Sarah’s mouth.  Sarah opened her mouth and tilted her head back.  The first two turns went smoothly.  Peter noticed Sarah wincing as Izzy made the third turn.  Once Izzy had completed the turn, Sarah rubbed her mouth.  She looked at Izzy and said “give me a sec, that one was rough.”  After a few moments, Sarah braced herself and said “ok.”

As Izzy completed the fourth turn a shooting pain went through Sarah’s sinus cavity.  Peter could tell from her facial expression she was hurting.  As soon as Izzy was done and had removed the wrench from her mouth Sarah took a few deep breaths and said “something happened.  Something broke.  I felt it.   And it hurt so bad.  I am afraid I broke my expander.”

Peter pulled out his phone and turned the flashlight on.  He said “let me take a look baby.”  As he shined the light into the roof of her mouth it was apparent what had happened.  He examined her expander anyway.  Once done, he turned off his light and said “smile for me baby.”

Sarah asked “what is it?  What happened?  I broke my expander didn’t I?”

Peter replied “something broke.  But not your expander.  It is fine.  Doing just what it is supposed to do.  Smile baby.”

Sarah gave him a smile and Peter quickly snapped a picture.  He turned his phone so Sarah could see it. Peter said “baby, you said you wanted your suture to split.  And that is exactly what you got.  Look at your cute little gap.”

Sarah said “oh gosh, it happened.”  She went quiet for a moment.  She continued “great, just great.  Because if arm casts, a back brace and headgear aren’t enough, let’s add a giant gap to the equation.  That is sure to make a girl feel pretty.”

Peter said “of all the gaps in the history of gapdom, your’s is the cutest.”

Izzy asked “what happened?  Did I do something wrong?”

Sarah said “no Izzy, just the opposite.  My suture just split.  And it is just going to get wider and wider the more you turn my expander.”  Sarah asked “Peter, would you call Dr. Parker on Monday and let her know?”

Peter said “of course baby.  And this is exciting.  It is a good thing.  A great thing.”

Sarah responded “you are right.  But what timing. As if I didn’t have enough going on.  Speaking of enough going on, I guess I better put on my facemask.  Try to make up for lost time.  Izzy, would you pull it out for me?  And a bag of elastics please?”

Izzy pulled the facemask out of the pouch and examined it.  She said “this is cool.”

Sarah smiled “Izzy, I am not sure that headgear and cool go together.” 

Izzy protested “but it is!  It is helping your smile.  So it is cool.”

Sarah said “I guess you are right.  It is helping my smile, my bite.  Without surgery.  And that is cool.”  She looked at Izzy and asked “Izzy, would you put it on me?  Get a little practice?  Because I certainly won’t be able to myself come tomorrow.”

Izzy lit up and said “I would love to!  I have seen you do it!  I can do it too.”

As Izzy gently held the facemask up against Sarah’s face and attached 4 elastics she said “Sarah, it really is cool.  I wish I had braces and headgear too.”




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« Reply #108 on: 12. September 2023, 22:42:17 PM »
Episode 57.

Once Izzy had attached the facemask with elastics, she leaned back and studied Sarah’s face.  She reached over, slightly adjusted it on Sarah’s face and said proudly “there, that looks good!”  She then reached into the pouch and withdrew the highpull strap.  She placed it over Sarah’s head, got it centered on the top and back of her head, and then attached the straps to her chincup, using the sharpie marked holes.  Once done she looked at Sarah and said “yay!  You are wearing your headgear!  It is so cute!”

Sarah shook her head and said “Izzy, it feels anything but cute.  But thank you.  You did a good job.”

Izzy protested “it is cute though.  And you are so pretty.  Even with headgear”

Dr. Higgins interrupted Izzy and said “sweetie, we need to go.  Let’s leave Sarah to rest.”

Izzy pleaded “just a few more minutes?”

Dr. Higgins replied “Izzy, you and Sarah will have plenty of time to visit starting tomorrow.  And we need to get back for dinner.  And I want to stop by and check on Julia.  Maybe try to lift her spirits.  She was in the dumps earlier.”

This prompted Sarah to again ask “Dr. Higgins, can I please see Julia?  I just have to apologize to her.  In person.  Please?”

Dr. Higgins responded “Sarah, tomorrow after you get your new brace fitted and have gotten your casts we can visit her.  Does that work?”

Sarah was silent as she imagined what life was going to be like not being able to use her arms.

Dr. Higgins asked again “Sarah, does that work?”

Sarah snapped out of her thoughts and said “yes.”  After a few moments she said “I’m sorry.  I was just thinking about how bad having two long arm casts is going to be.”

Dr. Higgins said “it will be fine Sarah.  You will be fine.  I promise.”

Izzy said “she is right Sarah.  And whatever you need, anything, I will be there.  I just hate you won’t be able to swim with me.”  She reached over and hugged Sarah.  As she squeezed her Izzy said “I am so glad you are ok Sarah.”

After Dr. Higgins and Izzy had left, Sarah looked over at the plant that Izzy had brought her.  Looking at it brought on conflicting thoughts. On one hand, it was pretty.  And she was grateful that she had people that cared about her.  But it also made her think of Julia.  She looked at Peter and said “baby, I have a favor to ask of you.”

Peter came and sat on the side of the bed and replied “anything you want.”

Sarah said “will you take something to Julia.  As a pick me up.  And as a token of apology.  I am sure they have a gift shop here.  Maybe some flowers?  I trust your judgement.  Would you do that for me?  And please, tell her how sorry I am.”

Peter said “of course babe.  I will be back as quick as I can.”

Peter returned about a half an hour later.  He found Sarah napping.  He went to shake her awake and then had second thoughts.  He wondered, in light of what had happened to Julia, if he should wake Sarah.  After a few moments of contemplation, he gently placed his hand on her shoulder.  He said “hey baby.”  She didn’t wake so he gently shook her and again said “hey baby.”  He was focused on her eyes as they opened.  He was relieved when he saw the bright, loving eyes of Sarah.  She replied “sorry, I fell asleep.”

Peter said “that is good.  And I hated to wake you.  But I wanted to let you know I took Julia a pretty little bouquet of flowers.  And I passed along your sincere apology.  I thought you might want to know what she said.”

Sarah asked “what did she say?”

Peter responded “we talked for a few minutes.  I won’t repeat it all verbatim.  But, she accepted your apology.  She said she knew it wasn’t you.  And she said she was looking forward to seeing you.”

Sarah said “thank goodness.  I just feel so bad.  I don’t know what I can do to make it up to her.”

Peter said “be her friend.  Listen to her, be a shoulder to cry on.  She is feeling down.  Be there for her.”

Satah said “I will.”

Peter said “speaking of people that are down, do you think you would feel up to making a few phone calls?  First, why don’t you call my mom’s and talk with the boys?  They miss you and would love to hear your voice.  And I know you would love to talk with them.  And then, if you don’t mind, would you call the woman we met at Dr. Parker’s the other day?  She text me about her expander and facemask.  She is not adapting to it as well as you have.  I told her you had a little accident.  She has been wearing me out checking on you.  Would you talk to her?  To let her know you are ok?  And maybe give her a few tips?  I think she is on the verge of quitting treatment altogether.  And finally, we need to call Officer Emily Milton.  We both owe her a big thank you.”

Sarah said “sure, I would love to talk to the boys.  And of course I will call Mrs. Smith.  Heck, if nothing else it will help break up the monotony of this hospital.”

Peter responded “tsk, tsk, so now I am monotonous.”

Sarah said “oh no, I didn’t mean it like that.  It’s just…”

With a smile on his face he said “baby, I am just giving you a hard time.”

Sarah replied “oh, well then in that case, yes this hospital is monotonous.  Even with the company of the sweetest husband in the world.  And Officer Milton?  Is that supposed to ring a bell?”

Peter then told Sarah all about what had happened the day before.  And how involved Emily had been.  He explained how she had told Peter she would do everything she could to help Sarah before it was known that Julia would not be pressing charges.  Once Peter had finished Sarah frowned and said “I caused even more drama than I imagined.  Yes, we DO owe her a big thank you.”

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« Reply #109 on: 13. September 2023, 19:00:23 PM »
Episode 58.

There was a soft knock on the door before it eased open.  Sarah and Peter turned their heads in that direction as a nurse walked in carrying something in a big draw string bag.  Sarah noticed the nurse do a double take of Peter, who was wearing his Interlandi, and then of her and her facemask before cheerily exclaiming "Good Morning!  Your new brace is ready!  Let's get you into it.  You will like it so much better than that clunky one you have on now."

Peter moved out of the way as the nurse positioned herself beside the bed.  She undid the straps of the brace Sarah was wearing and helped her out of it.  She then directed Sarah as she fit the new brace on her.  After she had finished her work, tightening the three straps on each side of the brace and then the two that went over Sarah's shoulders the nurse asked "so, how does that feel?  Anything poking or digging in?"

Sarah took a moment to take in the new feel of the brace.  She said "no, I can't feel anything digging in.  But it is so restrictive.  I can't move at all.  And I feel like it is bending me backwards."

The nurse quickly responded "that is the way it is supposed to feel.  So we can get that cracked vertebra all healed.  Now, would you stand and walk with me please.  We can check for chafing as we head on down to the cast clinic.  Dr. Barnhardt has proclaimed you are ready to get your cast."  As she picked up Sarah's chart she corrected herself and said "hmm, I guess I should have said get your casts.  I didn't realize that you had injured your other arm too.  Oh dear, you poor thing.  But time flies.  It will be over before you know it." 

Sarah carefully got out of bed with the nurse's assistance.  Peter could see the concern on her face and said "baby, it will be ok."

As they walked down the hall the nurse hugged up against Sarah providing her support.  Peter followed along behind them.  As they walked the nurse said "you know, I had to wear a facemask back when I had braces.  I think I was twelve.  It was tough, but it was so worth it.  And I think it is great when I see adults working on themselves.  You know, whenever I see an adult undergoing orthodontic treatment, I know they have hope for the future.  Several of my co-workers here have braces.  I have been thinking about biting the bullet again myself."  She turned and smiled at Sarah and continued "and fixing a few of these snaggles.  I wish I had worn my retainers like I was supposed to.  But that ship has sailed.  Kudos to you for doing it."  She turned to Peter and said "you too!  It is so sweet you are doing it together.  So, what's it like?"

Peter asked "having braces as an adult?  Or going through treatment together?"

The nurse said "I guess I meant what is it like having braces as an adult."

Peter said "it is an adjustment for sure.  They take a lot of time.  And they are awkward.  And the headgear is really a fashion statement.  But I have it so much easier than Sarah, so I won't complain."

The nurse asked "what do you mean?"

Peter said "I will let Sarah tell you."

The nurse looked at Sarah as she said "I have expanders both top and bottom.  And hooks that I have to use to hook this facemask to.  You can't miss it.  No one can.  And this strap I have to wear over my head, to try to pull by chin back, is pretty uncomfortable.   I was wearing it 16 hours a day, but now I am supposed to wear it all the time.  After I get these casts I won't be able to even take it or my glasses off myself if I do want to."

The nurse put her arm around Sarah and said "time will fly.  And it will be so worth it.  And good for you both for being so proactive.  One of my co-workers, Nancy, has to wear headgear.  She is mortified by it.  She won't wear it outside her house at all.  And she said because of that she may never get her braces off.  I think it is silly.  She should just own it.  Like you are.  I mean, it is just braces right?  And who cares what anyone thinks?  You are doing this for yourself.  Right?"

Sarah responded "I guess."

Peter then said "no, we aren't just doing it for ourselves.  We are doing it for each other."

The nurse squealed "Oh. My. Gosh.  That is just the sweetest thing.  Just the sweetest."   After a few more steps she came to a door and announced "and we are here.  We will get you fixed right up Sarah."

As the nurse finished up the second of Sarah's two new arm casts she said "it is normal for them to feel warm.  It will take about 20-30 minutes for them to dry.  Because you have both arms in casts, we have done a couple of things to help make things easier.  First, we have used a waterproof liner.  The term waterproof cast is a bit of a misnomer, they are not truly waterproof.  Don't submerge them.  But if they get a little wet it won't be an issue.  Also, they will itch.  Try not to stick anything down your cast to scratch them.  I know it can be torture, but just try to ignore it.  Also, since you are right-handed, we have casted your right elbow at more of an angle than your left.  Because of your fracture, your pinky and ring finger on the that hand are also casted.  But you can still use your thumb, index and middle fingers.  Even with the angle you won't be able to touch your face or head.  But, with utensils you should be able to feed yourself.  Now, a lot of other things you will need help with, but it seems you have a quite devoted husband to help you.  Any questions?"

Peter could see the dejected look on Sarah's face as she said "no, I guess not.  I had an arm cast when I was a kid.  I kind of remember what it was like."   She sat in silence before saying "but it wasn't both arms.  How am I going to live like this?"

As the nurse said "it will be tough at first, but you will get used to it.  Or at least adapt.  I promise.  And it might not help, but you aren't the first person that has ever broken both their arms."

Peter wrapped his arm around Sarah's shoulders as she held her now immobile arms in her lap and said "she is right you know.  You do have the most devoted husband.  And you have a friend that is also going to be right beside you.  If I know Izzy, she won't leave your side.  Baby, this is just a little bump in the road."  He reached over with his free hand and wiped the tear away that ran down her cheek.

Sarah looked at the nurse and said "I look like a freak show.  Like some carnival sideshow attraction."  She started softly crying.

As Peter held Sarah the nurse said "no, you do not.  You look like someone who was in an accident.  And I am sorry if you think I am being mean, but I can walk you around this hospital and show you some people that have real issues.  Life and death issues."

Sarah thought of Julia, of her laying there in her shoulder spica and halo brace, her battered mouth wired shut, and quit crying.  She instinctively tried to raise her arm to wipe her face and was immediately reminded of the fact her arms didn't work like they did just an hour before.  The nurse saw this and stood.  She returned with some tissues which she handed to Peter.   

As he gently wiped away her tears, careful to avoid her facemask and high pull strap, Sarah apologized "I am sorry.  You are right.  There are a lot of people that have it much worse.  And mine is all self-inflicted."  She turned her face towards Peter and said "I need to see Julia before I leave.  I have to see her."

Peter entered Julia's room and softly said "hi there.  There is someone who wants to see you.  Is it ok if Sarah comes in?  She wants to tell you something."

Julia lay there immobile, propped up slightly in bed with her eyes cut in his direction.  She said "yes, I would like to see her.  I need to understand why."

Peter stepped out of the room.  When he stepped back in, Sarah was behind him, appearing to try to hide.  Her head was downcast, her two arms in slings beside her, her posture held unnaturally erect by her new brace as she walked towards the hospital bed.  As Peter got to Julia's bed he stepped to the side.  Sarah stopped and timidly raised her head up towards Julia.

Sarah said "I spent the last day figuring out what to say.  And my mind is now blank."  She went silent a moment and exclaimed "Julia, I am SO sorry.  I am just so sorry.  I feel horrible.  I wish I could do something to make it up to you.  Do something to take it back.  I wish I had never fallen asleep that day.  I wish it were me in that bed instead of you.  I know you hate me.  You have every right to hate me.  But know I didn't want this to happen."  Sarah began crying as she said "please forgive me.  I won't be able to live with myself if you don't. Please?"

Julia softly said "I forgah ya Sarah.  I nah eh washn you."

As the two looked at each other Julia tried to lighten the mood and said "ah it looks la I washn tha onnee wah to take a beatin."  She then tried to smile at Sarah through her clenched jaw and said "come ere, leh me gih ya a hug wi my goo arm."

Sarah approached the bed.  She tried to get her arms out of the slings and failed.  Peter stepped over and helped her free them.   Sarah then gently leaned over at her waist and gave Julia an awkward hug.  Julia wrapped her arm around Sarah and squeezed her tight.

Julia said "ish ok."

After they held each other Sarah stiffly extricated herself from the hug.  She smiled at Julia and said "you don't know how much it means to hear you say that.  Again, I am so sorry about all of this.  And I promise, I will find a way to make this right."  A smile then came to her face.  As she looked down at herself and then back at Julia she joked "don't we make a pair.  We have one good arm between us.  You should just come live with us at Vista View."

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« Reply #110 on: 14. September 2023, 00:41:05 AM »
Episode 59.

Peter came to a stop and put the SUV in park.  Looking over at Sarah he could see the doors of Vista View in the background behind her.  He knew they were locked as it was a Sunday afternoon.  He picked up his phone and text Dr. Higgins to let her know they had arrived.  Once done he asked Sarah “so, how was the ride babe?  Hopefully I avoided the worst of the potholes.”

Sarah looked over at him and said “you did fine.  My back is just sore.  From the brace.  It makes me sit up so straight.  It is going to take so much getting used to.  All of this is.” She held up her two casted arms.

Peter said “I know you.  You are going to do it in record time.  You did with your expanders.  You will with this too.”  Sarah made a little “hmph” noise before he continued “two weeks baby, just two weeks.  It will fly by.  These last two have.  These next two will.”

Sarah said “a whole month, gone.  Peter, I have something to ask of you.  No, demand of you.  I love you.  I love you so much.  And seeing you is the highlight of every day.  But I want you to quit coming to see me every day.  You are spending so much of your time here.  And when you aren’t you are driving back and forth.  I am fine.  Go to the office.  Take the boys to the park.  Live your life.”

Peter said “Sarah, it is our life.”  Sarah cut him a look.  He saw the determination in her eyes and did not want to argue with her.  So he simply said “ok, let’s talk about it tomorrow.”  This seemed to diffuse Sarah. 

He said “now it is my turn.  To ask something of you.  I didn’t want to bring it up in the hospital for some reason.  But what did you mean when you said you talk with Kim?  Have you always done this?”

There was a long silence before she replied “yes, I talk with her.  In my head.  She talks to me.  I talk to her.  She isn’t a monster.  She is just a scared, hurt girl that doesn’t trust people.  All she has ever had people do to her is hurt her.  Yes, I do talk to her.  I thought I had an understanding with her.  That I would talk to her, try to keep her happy, but she couldn’t come around.  But obviously, that doesn’t work anymore.”  Peter could see Sarah’s lip trembling.

Peter said “you don’t need to talk about it baby.  I am sorry I brought it up.”

Sarah became animated and said “I do need to talk about it.  I have hidden it from you forever.  I have lied to you about it.  And to Dr. Anderson.  I thought I had it under control.  I was obviously wrong.  It is my fault what happened to Julia.”

Peter said “no baby, it is not your fault.  It was Kim, not you.”

Sarah yelled at him “but I AM Kim.  Kim is me.”  She went silent before apologizing “I am sorry, it’s just so confusing.  Kim IS a different person.  But she is part of me.  I just…  I care for her.  She has protected me for so long.  I have to protect her.  Dr. Anderson wants to essentially kill her.  And that is not right.  It isn’t fair to her.”

Peter got out and went around the vehicle.  He opened the passenger door and wrapped his arms around her.  He said “I am so sorry baby.  I am sorry for you.  And sorry for Kim.  Neither of you deserved it.”

They were interrupted by Dr. Higgins.  She sounded unusually upbeat as she said “welcome home weary travelers!”  Unaware of what had just transpired, seeing Peter hugging Sarah she said “you two love birds are just perfect together” as she walked up to them.  She asked “so how was the ride?”

Peter let go of Sarah and turned to face her.  He said “it was fine for me, but Sarah was a little uncomfortable with her brace.”  Dr. Higgins rushed over to Sarah and said “you poor thing. I know it is an adjustment.  Izzy still can’t get completely comfortable riding in a car.  But good news!  While I don’t know much about how to help with your orthodontics, I am an expert on back braces.  I got you a few extra pillows.  They will help.  So, how about we get you to your room?  And I hope you remembered to get that plant.”

Sarah said “of course, I couldn’t forget my plant.  And Missy the Giraffe.”

As they walked down the hall Sarah asked “where is Izzy?  I thought she would want to see me.”

Dr. Higgins just smiled at her and said “she does.”  Once they reached her suite door Dr. Higgins reached for the doorknob. 

Sarah stopped her saying “please, let me try.  I am going to have to figure it out.”  It took her two tries, but she managed to awkwardly turn the knob and crack the door open.  With her other elbow she pushed the door open and stepped into the room. She felt for the light switch.  She found it and flipped the switch.  As the room lit up she was met by a chorus of “Surprise!”

Sarah jumped, startled, and took in the scene before her.  There were balloons and streamers.  There was a sign on the wall that read “WELCOME BACK!”. She even noticed a cake on the counter.  In the middle of the room there was a group of around a dozen women standing with big smiles.   Izzy was in the center.  Sarah recognized all of them but one as residents or former residents as Amelia was also there.  All were smiling at Sarah.  Sarah noticed two of the women who she’d met at the home who also had braces were there.  They were both giving her big metallic smiles.  But what surprised Sarah was that Molly was wearing high pull headgear and Kyndee was wearing cervical headgear.  Beside them was the new girl Sarah didn’t recognize.  She was a petite blond who appeared to be in her late teens or early twenties.   She too had a mouthful of metal braces.  But what really drew Sarah’s eyes was the bright red Petit facemask she was wearing.  Sarah didn’t have long to ponder any of this though.  Izzy ran over to Sarah and wrapped her in a hug.  She shouted “welcome home Sarah!”

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« Reply #111 on: 14. September 2023, 03:44:29 AM »
I apologize if this story got over in the ditch with too much monotonous dialog. I hope I can pull it back into the road.  And despite me mailing it in, I hope y’all are still somewhat enjoying it.

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« Reply #112 on: 14. September 2023, 05:52:33 AM »
It's great. The dialog is fine, not monotonous at all. I love the details. However, I'm not "somewhat enjoying it", I greatly enjoying it!

Keep up the excellent work. This is the only story I have ever read that ticks almost all my boxes!

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« Reply #113 on: 14. September 2023, 07:25:35 AM »
Thank you. 

(Also, I love to fish.  And while one can’t eat a compliment, I sure as hell enjoy catching one.)

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« Reply #114 on: 14. September 2023, 10:17:00 AM »
I always check for the latest episode of your story. The dialogue in the last few chapters told the story in a way that kept it entertaining, while it was explaining so much in detail, things that would have been hard to do in other ways.

I don't think it went into the ditch, rather I would describe it as a curve in the road.

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« Reply #115 on: 14. September 2023, 23:24:13 PM »
Episode 60.

As the two women hugged, Peter leaned over towards Dr. Higgins and softly asked "was this your idea?  If so, thank you."

Dr. Higgins whispered back "I can't take credit for this.  It was all Izzy's idea and planning.  I am proud of her.  I don't think she would have been able to, or even tried, a year ago.  She has come a long way.  I owe Sarah a debt of gratitude for that I believe.  Izzy has really blossomed since Sarah got here and befriended her."

Peter said "well then, I owe Izzy a big thank you."  He watched as Izzy drug Sarah over to the group of girls.  Sarah was thanking them, giving some of them awkward hugs.  When she got to Molly and Kyndee he could hear Sarah say "girls!  I had no idea you had to wear headgear too.  And you certainly didn't have to wear it on my account.  But thank you.  And who is our new friend?"

Molly said "Izzy told us about your accident, your fall, how you hurt your back and broke your arms.  And then on top of that, she told us your orthodontist was making you wear your headgear 22 hours a day now.  This is the least we can do.  Plus Izzy promised us free cake" and laughed.  She continued "but seriously, anything I can do, please let me know.  I think I speak for everyone here when I say that." 

Kyndee chimed in "absolutely, anything you need.   And headgear is in right now."  She gestured with her head towards Peter and added "see even the cute guys are wearing it now."  Sarah turned towards Peter and smiled.  He smiled back at her.

Sarah said "he is cute isn't he.  And sexy.  Especially with that headgear on."  She turned back towards the girls and said "don't ya think?" 

Kyndee said "he is.  I have a little thing for older guys.  It is a good thing you already sunk your claws into him Sarah."  She then turned toward the petite blonde that Sarah did not know.  Kyndee said "Sarah, this is Kayla.  She is new here, she just checked in on Friday afternoon.  But she has fit right in with the rest of us crazies."

Sarah stuck out her right arm and said "Kayla, it is nice to meet you.  Don't listen to her, we aren't all crazy.  Just Kyndee."  Kyndee threw her head back and laughed, showing the TPA appliance that ran along the roof of her mouth.  Sarah smiled and said "see, crazy as a bed bug.  But a sweet bed bug.  And Kayla, that is one sharp looking facemask you have on.  But you don't have to wear it on my account.  Thank you for doing it though.  For someone you didn't even know.  Surely you don't need to wear it full time too?  We don't have the same orthodontist do we?"

Kayla very gently reached out and took Sarah's casted hand in hers.  Sarah said "don't worry, you aren't going to break it any more." Kayla smiled and gave a light shake.

She said "It ish a pleashure to meet you.  And no, I don't go to Fair Oaksh.  The girls told me a little about your treatment.  And asked me about mine.  We have sort of bonded over braces.  Get it, bonded?"  She laughed at her joke and continued "but my orthodontisht may be as tough as yoursh.  I don't have to wear my facemahsk but 12 hoursh a day.  But, at my lasht appointment he inshalled a torture device in my mouth."  Kayla opened her mouth and pointed at the appliance behind her bottom teeth and said "it ish a tongue rake.  It shucks.  It ish to keep my tongue from pushing on my teeth.  Since I got my exspander, my tongue doesn't really fit in my mouth anymore.  It just pushes on my teeth.  So he inshtalled this rake to stop my tongue from doing that.  But sho far, it mainly just stabs it.  And not only that, I have ramps bonded behind my top teeth.  They keep me from biting off my bracketsh.  But really, they are like little shark teeth.  They alsho poke the stew out of my tongue.  Along with the exshpander in the roof of my mouth, I can't talk worth a flip anymore."

Sarah said "oh, you poor thing.  I get it.  I have an expander on top and one on bottom.  It took me a while to be able to talk.  But you sound fine.  And I just know you will get used to it.  So, how are you liking it here so far?"

Kayla responded "it ish nicsh. The facility, and also everyone I have met.  I know it ishn't really a resort like they told me, but it ish nicsh.  And is it weird that I was so glad to find some other people here that also have bracesh?  I always am nervous meeting new people anyway.  Now with all thish metal in my mouth it is even harder.  I was glad to meet Molly and Kyndee.  And now you.   I don't feel so alone."

Kyndee said "don't forget about Meredith.  She doesn't pal around much with anyone.  But she has braces too.  Oh, and Mrs. Simpson does too.  You probably haven't met her yet, but she is a counselor here.  No Kayla, you are definitely not alone."

Sarah said "and don't forget about Lakyn at the front desk.  Her treatment seems almost identical to mine.  And poor Julia."  Sarah went silent as her mind drifted to Julia, thinking of her alone in her hospital bed.  Broken and battered, held together with steel pins, steel wires, and unyielding white fiberglass.

Kyndee asked "what happened to Julia?  I heard she was in some kind of accident too.  And she is still in the hospital?"

Sarah was trying to decide how to answer these questions when Izzy burst in amongst them.  She wrapped her arms around Sarah again and said "I am so glad you are back!"  Letting go of her she looked at the others and asked "what ya talking about?  I heard braces".

Molly said "Izzy we were just commiserating about being adults with braces.  And headgear.  Lucky you don't have to worry about that though do you."

Izzy beamed and said "Not yet!  But I hope I do.  I have an orthodontist appointment next week!   Sarah set it up for me.  I really want braces.  I want a pretty smile.  My teeth are so crooked.   Plus, I think braces are cute.  Even the headgear.  I didn't even know there were so many different kinds.  I so hope I can get braces too.  And if I have to wear headgear, I will wear it proudly.  Just like all of you.  Now, let me go check on the other guests."

Kyndee's mouth was wide open in astonishment as she looked at Sarah. Kyndee quietly said "go check on the other guests?  Sarah, what have you done to Izzy?  She is like a different person since you got here.  In a good way."

Sarah said "I don't know, I didn't know her before.  But I think she just needed a friend.  Someone to talk with.  To do things with.  I take it she was a bit of a loner before.  Maybe her whole life."

Molly said "she absolutely was.  And I hate to admit it, but none of us paid her any attention.  Other than the fact that Dr. Higgins seems to dote on her, Izzy was pretty easy to miss before.  She has really come out of her shell here lately.  Don't take this wrong, she is still quirky.  But she is fun too.  And sweet.  We all like her.  And you too Sarah.  Or we wouldn't all be here."

Sarah blushed slightly and said "awww, thank you girls.  You know how to make an old lady feel pretty special."

At this time, Peter walked up holding the box he had been carrying.  He apologized saying "I hate to interrupt you lovely ladies.  But Sarah baby, I need to run check on the boys.  I will call later this evening.  In the meantime, have fun.  This does look like a party."  He pulled the plant out of the box and said "I will just put this here for now" as he placed it on the side table.  He then pulled her Fair Oaks pouch out and placed it beside it and then put the box on the table.  He pulled the stuffed giraffe out last and said "baby, I am so glad you are ok.  And you girls are so sweet for doing this.  Thank you."  He looked at Sarah and said "we will talk tonight.  But first, let me go tell Izzy goodbye.  And let her know that we took great care of Missy the Giraffe."

Before he left Kyndee said "Mr. Jackson, that is some fancy looking headgear you have.  It is quite fetching on you."  Peter blushed a little before Sarah playfully said "hands off Kyndee, he is mine."  As Kyndee laughed Sarah stepped beside him and leaned her head on his shoulder.  She said "isn't that right baby?"

Peter put his arm around her and said "that is right."  He said "sorry Kyndee, but my heart belongs to another."  Kyndee laughed again and said "see, it's like I always say, all the good ones are already taken." 

Peter said "I think that is my que to make like a tree and leave.  You girls have fun."

Sarah watched him as he walked over to Izzy.  She couldn't hear what was said over the noise of the assembled group but she did see Peter hold up the stuffed animal as he spoke.  Izzy took the toy and wrapped it in a bear hug.  She could see Izzy say something in return.  To Sarah, it looked like "thank you."  Then, to Sarah's surprise, Izzy leaned in and kissed Peter on the cheek.  Peter gave her a hug and then turned to walk back to Sarah.

As Peter approached the group he said "Izzy is so glad we remembered Missy.  And took good care of her.  And she loves the name you gave her baby.  She said it sounds a lot like Izzy.  I told her that wasn't just a coincidence.  And I am sorry, but you may have just lost Missy." 

Sarah laughed and said "whatever makes Izzy happy makes me happy.  And you just made Izzy very happy.  Thank you.  Now go.  Tell the boys how much I love them and miss them."

Peter looked at the empty box and said "why don't I just leave that as a trash can for you girls."  As he turned he said "you girls try to stay out of trouble."

As they watched him leave, Kyndee said to Sarah "I hate to see him go, but I love to watch him leave."

Sarah said "Kyndee, he IS my husband." 

Kyndee said "I know, and a cute charming one at that.  But he is swimming in shark infested waters here Sarah."

Sarah rolled her eyes and said "you are just incorrigible.  Plus, you two might get your headgear stuck together anyway."  Kyndee laughed and said "I would love to have my own Peter to test that out on."

As Peter approached Dr. Higgins he said "I need to leave.  Would you escort me and let me out?"

As they walked Dr. Higgins said "Sarah seems in better spirits.  I am glad.  I just hope we don't have any setbacks." 

Peter said "I don't think you will.  In fact, I think this whole ordeal might have been a breakthrough for Sarah.  And Dr. Anderson.  I think we have been approaching this all wrong."

Dr. Higgins raised her eyebrows and asked "really?"

Peter said "yes, I think we have viewed Kim as the enemy all these years.  And she isn't.  We don't need to try to fight her like we have been.  We need to include her in Sarah's treatment.  I am no doctor.  But I am Sarah's husband.  And I think I know Sarah as well as anyone.  And I think besides Sarah, I know Kim as well as anyone."

Stopping at the door, Dr. Higgins stared at Peter.  After an uncomfortable silence she asked "do you remember when I said Robert was brilliant?"

Peter said "yes."

Dr. Higgins said "and do you know why he is brilliant?"

Peter said "well, he is obviously very smart and well trained."

Dr. Higgins said "that he is.  He is probably the smartest man I have ever met.  And he is well trained.  And up to date on all the latest research, theories, those type things.  But that is not why he is brilliant.  He is brilliant because he is humble.  He is not so arrogant, like many in the medical field, to think he knows the right answer every single time.  He is not so arrogant to think he can never be wrong.  He listens.  He cares.  He adapts.  If we have been doing things wrong, he will change that.  He WILL do what is best for Sarah.   As will I.  I have total faith in that.  I hope you do too."

Peter said "I do.  But still, I would like to talk with him before he meets with Sarah on Tuesday.  I hope he will."

Dr. Higgins said "he absolutely will.  And if it is ok, I would like to be a part of that conversation."

Peter said "absolutely." 

Dr. Higgins leaned in and hugged Peter.  She said "good."  As she released him she asked "if you have a second more, I have a couple questions for you.  They are kind of off the wall."

Peter responded "fire away."

Dr. Higgins said "earlier Izzy and I were filling out the forms online for her consultation next week.  She is so excited.  And she kept pestering me that I should get a consultation too.  I know I am too old for it.  But how bad is getting a consultation?  I am thinking about doing it.  Just to shut that child up.  But I will be honest, it scares me.  Is it bad?"

Peter said "no, not at all.  They will take some measurements, x-rays, poke around a little.  But mostly Dr. Parker will just examine your mouth, teeth, and bite and ask what bothers you with your smile and what you would like to fix.  And they offer free consultations.  You should do it."

Dr. Higgins said "I will think about it.  I mean, it would make Izzy happy.  And what's the worst that could happen right?"

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« Reply #116 on: 14. September 2023, 23:39:12 PM »
I think we know what could happen... And treatment is always more difficult the older one gets.

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« Reply #117 on: 15. September 2023, 03:04:30 AM »
I think we know what could happen... And treatment is always more difficult the older one gets.

I hope what could happen does happen.

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« Reply #118 on: 15. September 2023, 18:01:34 PM »
Episode 61.

Sarah was sitting on the edge of her bed the next morning nervously tapping her foot on the floor.  She had been feeling a sense of dread and humiliation since she had gone to bed the evening before.  Before she had gone to bed, Izzy had turned her expander, brushed and flossed Sarah's teeth, removed her makeup and helped her into her nightgown.  For some reason, Sarah had felt comfortable with Izzy helping her.  But Sarah knew this morning she would have a nurse helping her.  A new nurse that she did not know.  And more than just helping her with dressing and oral hygiene, she was going to help her bath.  Sarah knew it was irrational to feel so self-conscious about baring herself in front of a nurse.  But still she did.

When she heard the light knock on her door, Sarah felt the pit of her stomach knot up.  She turned to see a dark-haired nurse in blue scrubs enter her room.  The nurse was holding what looked like a pair of long ziplock bags in one hand a white undershirt in the other.  The nurse was smiling at her broadly.  Since getting braces, Sarah tended to notice other's smiles right away.  And while this nurse had a very white smile, she noticed that her top arch was crowded and her canines were very prominent.  Too prominent in Sarah's opinion.  It reminded her of Lakyn's smile.  She felt guilt about judging others' smiles, but lately she had been powerless to stop herself.  She didn't have long to dwell on that though.

The nurse said "Good Morning Mrs. Jackson!   I am Melanie.  I am going to be filling in for Julia for a while.  What are the odds that you and her each had such severe accidents on the same day?  I guess Friday the 13th really is bad luck.  Anyway, we will get to know each other well over the next couple of weeks."

Sarah forced a smile from behind her headgear and said "please call me Sarah.  It is nice to meet you.  And let me go ahead and tell you how sorry I am you have to do this every morning.  I just feel mortified by it."

Melanie went and sat down on the bed beside Sarah and said "there is no reason to feel mortified by it.  The whole reason I became a nurse is so I could help people.  And I want to help you.  But I need to go ahead and apologize.   You will have to walk me through what we need to do with your orthodontia.  I never had a chance to have braces myself, so you need to tell me what to do.  The good news though is I am a fast study.  So, what do you say we go into the bathroom?  I will take your headgear off.  Do you normally brush before or after you shower?"

Sarah answered "After. I shower, brush and floss, do my makeup, then put my mask back on.   I feel silly even doing my makeup since the facemask covers up so much of my face.  And now since I can't even put my contacts in or take them out and have to wear my glasses, even more of my face is obscured.  But I feel prettier when I do my makeup."

Melanie said "that is silly.  You are naturally pretty.  Makeup or no makeup.  Headgear or no headgear.  And I LOVE your glasses.  The tortoise shell frames look adorable on you.  What do you say we get the day started?"

Sarah let the nurse help her up off the bed and guide her into the bathroom.  Melanie then asked "so, what do I need to do to remove your headgear?"

Sarah answered "first, remove my highpull strap.  It connects to the chincup.  Then, while holding onto the mask, remove the four elastics from the hooks in my mouth.  It will make sense when you see it up close" as she smiled at Melanie, showing the hooks that curled around near her canines. 

Melanie smiled and said "sounds simple enough.  I will try to be gentle."

Melanie reached over and removed the highpull strap first from one side and then the other of Sarah's facemask.  She then delicately pulled it off her head.   Looking in the mirror Sarah told her "the strap makes every day a bad hair day."

Melanie said "nonsense, your hair is beautiful.  Now, let's get those elastics off."  Being as careful as she could, she removed the two elastics from the left side of Sarah's mouth while she held the mask with her other hand.  She then repeated the process on the other side, laying the facemask on the counter beside her strap.  Melanie said "voila!  Do those rubberbands not chafe your lips though?"

Sarah answered "they do.  But that the highpull strap is so uncomfortable that I don't even notice my chapped lips." 

As Melanie removed Sarah's glasses from her face she said "aww, I'm sorry.  But it will be all worth it.  Let's get those casts covered up so we can get you a shower."  Sarah held out her arms as Melanie quickly put the cast covers over each of her casts.  She then continued "now, if you would go ahead and sit down on the chair we brought in yesterday, I will get your back brace off and get you undressed."

Sarah stepped over inside the shower and sat down.  As Melanie unstrapped the brace from Sarah's body she said "I have a lot more experience with orthopedic braces.  You are lucky they gave you this style instead of the full body wrap style that covers your entire torso.  Boobs and all!  They are hotter and itchier than this kind.  And there, you are free.  But, PLEASE, do not try to move around and certainly don't try to stand or walk without your brace on."  The nurse stepped outside the shower and gently placed the brace on the floor.  Returning beside Sarah, Melanie said "now, let's get you undressed".  As she helped Sarah remove her nightgown, Sarah felt immense humiliation.  Melanie read the look on her face and said "there is no reason to feel embarrassed."  Sarah just shook her head.

After showering, Melanie carefully helped Sarah dry off, then wrapped the towel around her hair.  She told Sarah "hold on for just a second."  She returned with a white undershirt.  She carefully put the form fitting shirt on Sarah, then stepped over to get her brace.  As she strapped Sarah back in, Melanie asked "so, how are you finding the brace to be?  Any real pressure spots or sore spots?" 

Sarah said "not really.  It just makes me sit up and stand up so much straighter.  I can't bend over.  I am pretty sure if I ever drop something on the floor it will just have to stay there.  It just feels so awkward.  Actually, when I sit, it does dig into the the area around my waist and top of my legs just a little bit.  And it kind of rides up."

As Melanie placed Sarah's glasses back on her face she said "that's pretty normal with this type of brace.  You will get used to it.  And once you stand up, I will tighten everything more.  That will help keep it from riding up on you."  Melanie removed the cast covers and draped them over the shower curtain rod.  She said "I will just leave those here.  We will need them tomorrow after all.  Now, would you stand and come with me?  Pick out what you want to wear for the day?"

Melanie had laid out the clothes that Sarah had picked out on the bed.  Once she had a wardrobe laid out, Melanie said "please raise your arms for me Sarah."  Sarah complied.  The nurse then undid the straps on the side of the brace and tugged hard on them before fastening them back.  It took Sarah's breath away as she said "wow, that is tight.  Is it supposed to be that tight?  I can barely breath."

Melanie said "it is supposed to be tight.  You will get used to it.  When I was in junior high and high school, I had to wear a scoliosis brace, a Boston brace to be exact.  For four long years.  You will get used to it.  And you should only have to wear this for 6-8 weeks.  Not four years like I had to wear my brace."  This made Sarah think of what Dr. Barnhardt had told her.  That she in fact did have scoliosis and did need to get it checked out once she was healed up.

Melanie said "ok, let's get you dressed."  After dressing, Sarah and Melanie made their way back into the bathroom.  Melanie said "I think I know how to brush teeth.  So, let's start with that.  But, if I am doing something wrong, let me know."

As she squeezed the toothpaste out, Sarah said "be gentle, but also try to be thorough.  Try to brush all my brackets and my hooks.  And get above and below them too, along my gumline.  It is easy to miss with the braces, especially on bottom."  It took Melanie about five minutes to complete the brushing.

Melanie looked at Sarah and asked "good?" 

Sarah said "like a pro.  Now flossing, it is a lot more of a hassle.  And time consuming.  I have some floss threaders.   You will need to run them under my wire on bottom and floss between each tooth.  Once I get my top braces it will take even longer.  Be sure to get back there around my molar bands and around my hooks too."

As she flossed Sarah's teeth, Melanie asked "so, are those expanders?  You have one on top and bottom?"   

With Melanie's hands in her mouth, Sarah's speech was garbled as she replied "ya, tah an bottah.  Tha tah is even schrewed in."

Melanie moved her hands and craned her head so she could see Sarah's palate.  She said "oh wow.  Those are screws.  Screwed into your mouth.  Does that not hurt?"

Sarah responded "the first week was hell.  I couldn't eat.  Could barely talk.  And the screws destroyed my tongue.  But somehow, I got used to it.  It still bothers me some here and there.  Turning it is interesting to say the least.  And it sucks getting food stuck in them constantly.  They are food traps.  And now, I won't even be able to clean them by myself.  Good thing I have you and Izzy here."

Melanie said "wow, that is a lot.  But, listening to you speak now, I wouldn't even know you had that all going on inside your mouth.  How long do you have to have them?  And do I need to turn them for you?"

Sarah said "I was told six to twelve months.  I am crossing my fingers it is the former and not the latter.  But they tell me that once I stop turning them it won't be as bad.  I will just have to keep them in until the bone grows back.  They will cover them with acrylic too so they are smoother.  I can't wait.  And no, we don't need to turn them now.  I turn them in the evening before I go to bed."

Melanie asked "so, it is actually going to crank your bones apart?  Yikes!"

Sarah said "on my upper palate yes, it is actually splitting my bones apart."  She smiled and said "see my little gap?  It just opened.  By the time I am done, you might be able to drive a truck through it.  It is going to be so embarrassing."

Melanie said "no, it won't be embarrassing."  She then giggled and said "get the London look."  She then turned serious and said "it is pretty cool they can do that actually.  But I can imagine it is a process."  She went back to flossing.  In about five more minutes Melanie announced "all done I think.  Did I do good?"

Sarah held her thumb up and said "you did great.  Thank you.  I am sorry it takes so long."

Melanie replied "no need to apologize!  That is what I am here for.  It is job security for me."   She laughed and added "I might try to talk a few more of the guests here into getting braces.  Maybe I can rack up some overtime."  She smiled at Sarah to show she was joking.  Up close, Sarah couldn't notice but how crooked and crowded her teeth really were.  Melanie noticed Sarah looking at her mouth.  Her smile disappeared as she said "or maybe I need to see the orthodontist."

Sarah said "oh honey, I am sorry.  You have a pretty smile.  It's just that ever since I got braces, I can't help but look at other people's smiles.  I am sorry."

Melanie said "it's ok.  I know I probably should see one.  I mean, I know my teeth are crooked.  It's just scary to think about doing it as a grown up."

Sarah said "if you are serious, I can give you the information for my orthodontist.  She is really sweet.  Even if she does seem to love headgear.  Her staff is great too.  And almost all of them have braces themselves.  I guess that shows they believe in their services."

Melanie avoided the subject by asking "so, how about we get your makeup done?"

After once again removing her glasses, Melanie carefully applied Sarah’s makeup.  Sarah couldn't help but feel a little tingle.  It was just the intimacy of the whole thing.  She closed her eyes and imagined it was Peter doing it.  She filed the thought away.  Something to try later when it was just the two of them.  Melanie brought her back to reality when she said "see what you think?"

Sarah squinted as she looked in the mirror and said "OH!  Wow.  That looks good.  I never do my eyes like this.  They look good."

Melanie responded "you have gorgeous eyes.  You should accentuate them.  Now, I understand during the day you only have to wear the facemask?"

Sarah nodded and said "yes, thank goodness."

Melanie slid Sarah’s glasses back on her face and then picked up the mask and the bag of elastics.  She asked "so, I assume it just goes back on like I took it off?"

Sarah said "you are a fast study.  Exactly."

Melanie first attached two elastics to each of Sarah's hooks.  She then picked up the mask, held it gently against Sarah's face, and attached the elastics as they had been before.  Melanie stepped back and said "I think that is right?  What do you think?"

Sarah said "it looks good to me.  Wait, no, it does NOT look good.  But it looks right."  She continued to study herself in the mirror.  She said “glasses, braces, headgear, a back brace, and two arm casts.  I can’t wait to get out of junior high.” 

Melanie said "you look beautiful.  And the headgear, it does look good.  It is cute in a way.  But I imagine you do get a lot of looks when you are wearing it don't you?"

Sarah said "oh goodness yes.  Especially when someone sees if for the first time.  But it is weird.  Most of the people here seem to have gotten used to seeing me in it.  I don't get nearly as many stares as I did the first few days."

Melanie responded "well, I can't say I have ever seen anyone wearing one of those.  But, like I said, it is cute on you.  You know what?  You should get your nails done pink to match the mask.  If you are interested, I am a pretty good nail artist if I do say so myself.  What do you say?  Would you let me do your nails?  I can bring my stuff tomorrow.  And during a break we could do them.  I would really like that."

Sarah said "why not?  But I feel like I would need to pay you or something."

Melanie replied "you can repay me by letting me sign one of your casts.  That seems like a fair trade.  You need some signatures anyway.  I will get you a marker.  I bet a lot of the girls here would love to sign it."

Sarah smiled at her and said "thank you!  Thank you for all of this.  I was dreading this so, so much.  But, somehow, you have made this fun."

Melanie said "thank you so much.  That is awesome to hear.  I had fun too.  And I look forward to getting to know you more.  Maybe tomorrow while I work on your nails, you can tell me a little more about your orthodontist.  And what it is really like having braces as an adult.  It is funny, I work in the medical field.  But going to the dentist terrifies me.  I know I should see an orthodontist.  My dentist tells me that every time I get a cleaning.  Just... it is so scary.  But maybe if I knew someone else doing it too it wouldn't be as bad.  Does that even make sense?"

Sarah said "it absolutely does.  I haven't even told you about my husband Peter.  You will get to meet him I am sure.  He has braces too.  He got them for me.  So we could go on this journey together.  And it does make it so much easier.  Not to mention he is so cute with them.  So, it makes total sense what you are saying.  You know, I got Izzy hooked up with a consultation next week.  Why don't you let me get you one too?"

Melanie reached over and squeezed Sarah's left hand and said "you are a sweetheart.  But let me think on that.  It really is terrifying.  But I know I should do it."  She let go of Sarah's hand and gave her a light hug.  She said "well, I gotta run.  But it was such a pleasure meeting you." 

As she walked towards the door Sarah said "thank you again.  So much.  And do think about it."

Melanie turned and said "I will.  Maybe it is finally time I put on my big girl panties and do something about this mess" as she gave Sarah an extra wide smile showing off her crooked, crowded teeth and crossbite.

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Re: The Split
« Reply #119 on: 15. September 2023, 18:24:06 PM »
It is uncanny how in real life, braces do seem to run in packs.  One person will get them and that seems to give others the courage to do it as well.  I don't know who started it where I live, but there was about a 10 year period where it seemed like all the women in their mid 20s to mid 30s got them.  Most for the second time.  It seemed like little cliques of them got them together.  One would get them, then her friend, then another friend, and so on.  At least that was my experience.  So, why wouldn't that happen in my stories too?